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Alien Observation

Wind circulates, lifting and flattening an otherwise, benign, breathless world, relying also on deeper, slowly moving tectonics, belching foully, scattering seas...effecting change. Seasons like Sun rejoice and fold. An occasional comet or meteor perhaps a compassionate God-sent, heaven rethinking the dawdling pace of destiny…. Man a defiant offspring, rejecting patterns seemingly not of his own making – good angels know better, dutifully soothingly serving.

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Date: 10/9/2023 11:31:00 PM
Oh this poem is really deep that describes a person who's not at all agreeing to the old legacies that have proven quite derailed and aligned with toxic patterns.. A person who has s unique vision towards life and this is what elevates him above the chaos of the world.. And i love that last line as well..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/10/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thank you, Hiya; you are a deep thinking, compassionate, blessed individual. You made my day. Blessings!
Date: 10/6/2023 1:56:00 PM
- Man defiant...angels are docile, Joe :) - A great poem - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/6/2023 3:37:00 PM
Angels are all love. Thank you, Anne; blessings my friend.
Date: 10/6/2023 10:59:00 AM
I can hear your wise words.. I concur with your poetic genius..
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