Best Maelstroms Poems


Premium Member Sing, My Soul

A thread ...
ties me to the Infinite
a tendril of sonorous joy, expressed
weaves the depth of my marrow
to all that is and was and shall be and shan't ...

O - sing, my soul, of all that I am - sing of what I can't be!

A breath ...
holds my melody of being
spirit coursings beyond the capability of sensate expression
swell from the reaches of my heart
to find their diaphanous wings upon the maelstroms ...

O - sing, my soul, of all that I feel - sing of a bounding love!

A scream ...
rooted in dulcet dreams
rhythmic and dolorous and dark, of the night
dances, lilting, to bind the wounds of that greater expanse
to shed in music what I fear most ...

O - sing, my soul, of all that hides - sing of my shaded sins!

A song ...
sews my innermost to the day
a choral conjugation of my bones and the breadth of heaven
the seed of expression, harmonious ... wending
to enjoin this sparrow's strain ... with the All ...

O - sing, my soul, of all myst'ries to find - sing of a life at end!

O - sing!






~ 7th Place ~  in the "Your Best Free Verse That You Wrote" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Your best free Verse 2020" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 2nd Place ~  in the "A Poem Honoring Spirituality" Poetry Contest, Caren Krutsinger, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Strand Choice X, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Sing It" Poetry Contest, Nina Parmenter, Judge & Sponsor.

Premium Member Vortices

Fastening my grip on you, throwing my head up high
Where colours fight in sunlight bright enough to blind me
Vortices, one after another, dizzyingly 
maelstroms of words disappear unspoken
Will they drown me
those waves, will they drown me
can I come up and breathe again?
can I hold on and survive?

Waves
riding the board with you
blue sky opens to warm glow of the sunlight
from where I am the shore is near 
I relax, while you steer
small waves rippling lulling me to sleep

***
August 22, 2017
Copyright © Darren White

Premium Member Bard's-Eye View

ado the realms that I have plunged with phrase
          they have no shape - no bound'ries or expanse
               some wend in heaven's dreams or hell's malaise
     thoughts sown a demon's kiss or angel's dance ...

such myst'ries there are born from matter, gray
          those maelstroms wend the mind's complexities
               what seems dark and chaotic through its sway
     works fierce to find the beauty each eye sees ...

while wordsmiths tend to stretch upon the rack
          of flow'ry phrase, for sake of bloom and breaths
               there's far more dire concern with candor's lack
     than all the horror wrought ten thousand deaths ...

please don't misunderstand these words of mine
          true eloquence is birthed through grain OR chaff
               with thoughts that bare the soul in grand design
     and swell dear hearts that break on their behalf ...

pray, deign to think me common, though I was
          dear love's sweet fool, a million times too much
               and though I'd trade my loves for verse's cause
     the dearest poem can't trump ... a woman's touch.


Premium Member Flamingo Blooms

Written: January 23, 2024
              __________________________________________

Their melodious humming drifts
through the fragrant night air
carrying a sense of tranquility
In this enchanting universe
where dreams come true
A delicate whisper
of silver breeze captivated softly.

Trees are lavishly graced
with azure iridescence
visualize an idyllic scene
that is truly magical
in this hypnotic realm
trees sway softly
as lilts chortle jubilantly
dryads are ecstatic
lullabies spark with
flamboyant emerald
fostering faith
in forfeited souls
lack within intricate
maze of their dwelling
scarlet nests tucked
high on twigs
An oasis of passion
where silence draws.

Lullabies load breeze
with a warm glow of opals
orienting dropped souls
In a mystery of
their abode once again
trees adorned with snugly
hidden crimson nests
a setting of love
where harmony sway
arbors wrapped
with stunning splendor
a vibrant tapestry
of dazzling majesty
their heaving hues herald
heaven with hypnotic hood
In this magical mannerism
musings mantling
In an ephemeral haven
of natural magnificence
dryads whirl and
trees sway peacefully

The winter-worn sky reveals a
faded, shimmering bronze and
gold shade, reminiscent of a
withered vermeil and naiad
fluorescent opals, paired
with scarlet demantoids in
smooth charmeuse enamel
mesmerizing maelstroms
of crystalline bonfire
flamingo flowers fit
with a fiery symphony
akin to the reverberations
of a silken folk melody
on the horizon
they shrink to hypnotic ink
scribbles on violet skyline.
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member One Night This Darkness - Collaboration With Chris Green

One night this darkness will end life
with clouds in damp fog without stars
and a moon dressed in tatters screaming
at feet scratched on pebbles in low-tide
rough water to sway one and stumble

Maelstroms twist, turn and swallow fish
in an icy-cold winterland with rickety wrecks
Stranded with thundering crashes ashore
leaving flotsam resentful on soggy sand
The roar of firebolts raging around

And the sky will fall in guarded shadows,
streaks painted in dripping revelations,
shades of nevermore patina
eroding encrusted thoughts into gaping holes,
swallowing what is left of the dream

The artisan's hand glares down from the sky
Gouache in thick streaks in tangerine rage
A knife sticking out scraping clouds
Unstable equilibrium shakes easel unnoticed
Genius vision or prediction of doomsday

When the unthinkable, unfathomable happens,
in silent sunbeam glory a single bloom forms
Tiny roots ruminate a desolate landscape,
gently removing soil from fractured stone,
caressing sorrows in springtime whispers

Dark clouds now cast warming farewells
as blue sky canopies float like streamers,
singing in harmony with endless beliefs that,
one night this darkness will end life,
until dawn’s resurgence is reborn

***

February 3, 2017
Copyright ©Chris Green and Darren White

Premium Member Universe

Oh, how my nethermost being aches for your answer

You yawn like a glistening wound above me, tugging at my will

A pregnant astral enigma, weeping with wonderment and perplexity

Frigid, barren voids, churning chaos, meat and matter beyond imaginings

Vistas of marvel, life fantastic and bizarre, worlds unbidden and unbled

Swirling maelstroms of dust, energies of darkness and dynamism

The heaving breast of heaven, burgeoning at the Constant, ever outward

Oh, to but prick the veil of your timeless and tenebrous mystery

To breach your breadth and boundary, and all that they bind and bear

Would be to weave the garland ... of the gods themselves.





~ 8th Place ~  in "The Universe" Poetry Contest, Nina Parmenter, Judge & Sponsor.


Premium Member je suis desole -

wakes …

of carnage
widen behind me
shimmering horizon of hope
and prospect
(and falsehood)
now turned cold, dank, dim -
faceless and wan
my poison and err has tainted
the waters, pure ...
things most dear and precious
forever scarred
no redemption or excuse
worthy of the deeds
negligence and mistake now
strewn at my feet ...
massive and black
a chasm opens before me
oh, how soft and sweet, the darkness ...
to dive, plunge
fall deep and down
let it wrap me like the wings
of an angel, forsaken
let it rock me, gently, to sleep
soft and sensuous
the voice that whispers to me
from the inky slate ...
horror, guilt, pain
all gone with one deep, sweet
kiss of oblivion
oh, her gentle voice is yet
warm in my ear
her saccharine breath, a divine enchantment ...
the Great Void awaits -
the blank embrace of nihility
and the ultimate tomb
of all that IS, was, shall ever be
yawns in a parody of the cosmos -
the expanse that has ever
held me rapt in wonderment -
but it glistens not
with the life of the heavens
there is no glint or flicker
to hold the gaze
or measure its draft
no spinning maelstroms or
pulsing strings
just a gaping pit, abysmal ...
and the only TRUE
promise …

of liberty.







~ 7th Place ~  in the "Dance of Death" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.

Culloden

Paler than the hills I walk
I hear the bleat of sheep long still
and see the thistles of the Saltire’s home,
yet wear the weave of no clan’s name

The red of my discordant neck carries
the match of a thousand morning skies.
When shepherds take warning and
storms make wilful sport

And those same maelstroms
that play a dirge upon my soul.
twist my limbs like the elasticated 
stretch of an eviscerated gut 

So, let me taste this air of
bitter sweet remembrances,
and at last set forth toward
that brightest of lights

Friends

Friends are the jewels we gather
To set in the crown of life,
Through their sparkle life shines.

They are the silken threads we weave
Into the rich tapestry of  life,
Giving it joy and splendor.

On a winter’s day
They are the summer’s sun
That pierces gloom
To chase away clouds of despair.

And when we sail stormy waters;
As the maelstroms of  life
Rage and threaten to drag us down,
Friends are a harbor of LOVE and PEACE.

Hallucinatory Prayers

Fallen upon knees in ashes of pipe dreamer’s infatuation 
chimera's collective stardust reigning through macrocosms,
world spins counterclockwise unrealistically bound hiatus
stained glass mirrors fracture in rhetorical opposition,
earthly beings condensed to mere commonplace residue
threadbare allegiances written on worn out constitutions,
idly spinning cogwheels from premier breath to closer exhale
angels hark intensely attempting to assuage inevitability
whilst calm winds yield to maelstroms' imitative gesticulations
forfeitures of human activity sacrificed in sins' germinal vices
banal platitudes reinforcing an elusively unoriginal existence,
dancing 'round the fire tween inquisitions' reluctant commendations
preparedness on conventional suspension of ill-advised reiterations, 
awaiting surrender 'neath an incoherent vigil's unorthodox rite of 
incarnate passages' disconnected resolve mid consequential rationale

 thereupon...

timelessness is but a variable symbol
    factored in mankind's hallucinatory prayers
© Paloma P   Create an image from this poem.

Deflated Raft 1 and 2

Deflated Raft 1 and 2 – Haiku

     Deflated Raft 1

air depleted, sigh
rubber flat, spinning chaos 
raft takes on water


     Deflated Raft 2

floats on cold water  
flat, under maelstroms great weight 
watch the raft turn, sink

Premium Member Death, Where Are You

Here I stand, breathless, on mortality's beach

Constrained by the lessons you painfully teach

Thus, I plunge with convictions into the breach

                    Death, where are you?


Oh, countless emotions now stifle my worth

So caught in the maelstroms of Mother Earth

You shadowed my purpose and id, from birth

                    Death, where are you?


I've waited this shore for you, warm and dark

Stood listening for whispers of destiny, stark

But the tip of your arrow has missed its mark

                    Death, where are you?


This sea of oblivion has floated each dream

Now washing my soul, to the temporal seam

Forsaken to depths too abysmal to scream ...

                    Death, where are you?




~ 3rd Place ~  in the "May 2018 Premiere Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Sponsor.

~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Rhyme And Refrain" Poetry Contest, Broken Wings, Sponsor.

Blood Lust

What sinister secrets
lurk within my mind,
What raging storms
grip my heart,
What malicious maelstroms
swirl in my eyes,
What demonic forces
torment my soul...
You don't wanna know!

It will only entice you
in its dreadful dragnet
And drag you through
an undead necropolis.

I thirst for the blood
And subsist on the 
life essence of living creatures,
Prowling relentlessly in the
shadows of the moonlit nights
awaiting my next meal.

CROSS your heart 
                 when you see me,
CROSS your heart now 
                 when you read this,
   I can feel you breathe
   Sense your heart pounding 
   Smell the sweat of your fear --

So I said so in truth,
So you have been forewarned!



~06/25/2013
~Deep and Dark II contest by Laura Loo

Siren's Serenade

As I sit here 
with my pen in my mouth
this Siren serenades me
and to this there is no doubt

   Your words are magic, magic, magic
         Teasing my ears
   Your words are magic, magic, magic
     Stealing my thoughts and fears
   Your words are magic, magic, magic
             Falling around me
   Your words are magic, magic, magic
   Dragging me down to the depths
           Where I want to be

So there is nothing to see hear, please move along
for her singing captivates me
and surrounded by it there is no wrong.
Please envelope me
with your velvet voice
tuck me away with comforts
‘til there is no choice 
To know

   Your words are magic, magic, magic
         Teasing my ears
   Your words are magic, magic, magic
     Stealing my thoughts and fears
   Your words are magic, magic, magic
             Falling around me
   Your words are magic, magic, magic
   Dragging me down to the depths
           Where I want to be

All here floats around with the tide,
just flotsam and jetsam from inside our minds
to sail away with the waves we ride
as we cleanse ourselves for our new finds.

We cast about on this sea of life
surrounded by Maelstroms 
and electric strife,
but there is only one thing clear to me
on this mystical night
your song entices me 
from my celestial flight
Because

   Your words are magic, magic, magic
         Teasing my ears
   Your words are magic, magic, magic
     Stealing my thoughts and fears
   Your words are magic, magic, magic
             Falling around me
   Your words are magic, magic, magic
   Dragging me down to the depths
           Where I want to be

Severe Weather Predictions

Severe Weather Predictions...
Professedly Plagues Psyche

I do not watch, while
     feigning to sip ale,
nor listen to Wail
ling Jennings poor
     imitation by prophetic
     local aborigines scent
     ting ancestor trail,
while plucking their

     Sing song ukulele
national anthem (tip towing
     thru the dale
lie la of hybrid tulips)
     hearty and hale
     Climatological headlines,
     more like a puffed up
     magical dragon exhale

ling nothing boot hot air,
     comprising a renown folk song,
     and/or futuristic tall tale
that usually pre
     dominate every airwave scale
ling the gamut of
     every frequency 24/7, rail
ling dire warnings,

     and no need prevails,
     particularly for those
     refusing to evacuate,
     and become sitting targets
     like quail caught
     in the cross hair
     for me to know
     onset of biblical pro

     portioned sized debacles
     (since joblessness thy status,
     cuz social security disability received),
     but more pertinently
     dire forecasts rarely manifest
     into monster mashing maelstroms
case in point
     being this predicted

     "three sisters of all hurricanes"
     Florence, Light
     Ning, and Gale,
found this storm chaser
     disappointed, cuz monstrous
     banshee's utter deplorable show
ranked as utter dud at least
     (in my book), they did fail

to wreak havoc
     falling far short
     to flatten every tree,
which limb mit
     to flash flooding
minor inconvenience
     forced every to sail
guy did by those freed from jail.

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