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A thread ... ties me to the Infinite a tendril of sonorous joy, expressed weaves the depth of my marrow to all that is and was and shall be and shan't ... O - sing, my soul, of all that I am - sing of what I can't be! A breath ... holds my melody of being spirit coursings beyond the capability of sensate expression swell from the reaches of my heart to find their diaphanous wings upon the maelstroms ... O - sing, my soul, of all that I feel - sing of a bounding love! A scream ... rooted in dulcet dreams rhythmic and dolorous and dark, of the night dances, lilting, to bind the wounds of that greater expanse to shed in music what I fear most ... O - sing, my soul, of all that hides - sing of my shaded sins! A song ... sews my innermost to the day a choral conjugation of my bones and the breadth of heaven the seed of expression, harmonious ... wending to enjoin this sparrow's strain ... with the All ... O - sing, my soul, of all myst'ries to find - sing of a life at end! O - sing! ~ 7th Place ~ in the "Your Best Free Verse That You Wrote" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Your best free Verse 2020" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "A Poem Honoring Spirituality" Poetry Contest, Caren Krutsinger, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Choice X, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Sing It" Poetry Contest, Nina Parmenter, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/22/2020 1:36:00 AM
This is already a fave for me. Glad to congratulate you on another win for this beautiful verse Greg :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/22/2020 12:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Aditi - that's very sweet of you, my friend. Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 6/19/2020 2:14:00 PM
Deep and soulful, my friend. I enjoyed a second time around today. Hearty congrats on your free verse win today. Hope your day is blessed, my friend ~ John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/22/2020 12:45:00 PM
That's so very thoughtful of you, John, and I thank you so much! :o)
Date: 6/19/2020 1:49:00 PM
oh YES!! one of your verb best. I know this because I had already faved it! Congrats on your win for your best free verse, Greg. And thanks so much for my win in your last contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/22/2020 12:45:00 PM
You are very welcome, Andrea, and thank you for your kind words. Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 6/19/2020 1:34:00 PM
Gregory, it's wonderful to return to the lyrical loveliness of this poem to offer you my congratulations for your wonderful placement in Chantelle's contest. The more I read this piece the more enthralled I become with it. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/22/2020 12:44:00 PM
Oh, that's very sweet, Susan, thank you again, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Date: 5/31/2020 6:20:00 PM
The lyrical loveliness of your poem serves to enhance and release the deep spirituality and feelings of joy, humility, repentance and appreciation held within their rhythmic verses. Exquisite in every way, Gregory. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/22/2020 12:43:00 PM
This is such a beautiful comment, Susan, and I thank you so much for taking the time. Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 5/26/2020 1:11:00 PM
This is such a magical verse Greg! Overflowing with emotions and music that should be played on repeat. Amazing sorcery of words! Congratulations on your well-deserved win :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/22/2020 12:42:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Aditi, and I thank you so much, Friend! :o) <3
Date: 5/25/2020 8:25:00 PM
You are truly the "Bard" my friend. Not only is your poetry music, but your music is poetry!!! Fantastic and so crafted.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/22/2020 12:41:00 PM
Oh, thank you so very much, Lonna - that's very sweet! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 5/25/2020 7:08:00 PM
And another win for this beauty, I don't know how you do it G, but this is a captivating song, you know how much I love songwriting, this is irresistible and a top winner!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/22/2020 12:41:00 PM
Many kind thanks, My Poet Brother, I greatly appreciate your opinion, - this one is special to me as well. Blessings! :o)
Date: 5/9/2020 12:37:00 AM
Amazing, Gregory. Superbly crafted. Bravo. Congrats on your most deserving wins.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:46:00 PM
That's very sweet of you to say, Line, thank you so much! :o) <3
Date: 5/7/2020 4:18:00 PM
This is such a complex lyric with so many threads. Your passion glues it all together into a fantastic fabric of song, a very personal song. One that could be sung in a netherworld, a place beyond. Heard only by sentient ones, not coarse earthlings like me. However, I thank you for lifting me up.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:45:00 PM
Wow, your words here have truly made my day, Greg, and I so appreciate you taking the time, and speaking from such a deep place ... it means a great deal to me, and is the kind of blessing that keeps me going. Blessings back to you, Dear Friend! :o)
Date: 5/7/2020 12:38:00 PM
Again you make words dance, Greg as few poets can --including me. Congrats on your win--in my book this is a 1st place.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:43:00 PM
Thank you so very much, LJ, what a wonderfully heartfelt and kind comment ... it means a lot to me. Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 5/7/2020 11:28:00 AM
Bard, there is a deep connection between singing and the spiritual side of life. The largest and most emotionally dynamic book in the Bible is the songbook. You have touched on something deep and true and eternal, my friend. Well done, and congrats on your win ~ John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:42:00 PM
That's so very kind of you, John, and I so appreciate your beautiful comments - music is truly the language of the soul, and one we all can speak. Blessings, Dear Friend! :o)
Date: 4/3/2020 10:39:00 PM
Very profound musical poetry, Gregory. Congratulations on the top, first place win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:41:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Sam, I so appreciate your comments, and they carry much weight with me. Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 1/12/2020 9:17:00 AM
This is beautiful Greg, an expression from the heart and soul, your musicianship shines in this lovely poem, congrats on a fine win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:40:00 PM
That's very kind of you, John, and I'm so pleased you liked this one - blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 1/11/2020 12:01:00 PM
My friend, congrats on a very worthy placement. Great emotion. A great contribution to poetry. Much love.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:39:00 PM
This is very kind commenting, Curtis - thank you, my friend! :o)
Date: 1/11/2020 6:23:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:39:00 PM
You are so welcome, Beata - thank you for commenting! :o) <3
Date: 1/11/2020 2:47:00 AM
Beautifully and powerfully expressed, sparrow poet! I love "A choral conjugation of my bones and the breadth of heaven". All the emotions on the spectrum can be sung, should be sung, both for the health of the singer and the connection it provides with the listener. Music is a gift from the Almighty. Blessings ~ John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:39:00 PM
What a wonderful comment - thank you so much, John, these are what make my days and make the effort worthwhile! Blessings! :o)
Date: 1/11/2020 1:20:00 AM
“A thread... A breath... A scream... A song... O - sing!“ You succeeded in what you set out to accomplish. Awesome write, Greg! A Fave for me. ~Mark
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:38:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Mark, and your opinion is always a weighty one for me. Blessings, Friend! :o)
Date: 1/10/2020 7:10:00 PM
Great, this is utterly fantastic. A FAVE for me. I see Nina's remark to you below. Are you posting a lot of poems? The more I post, the fewer comments I get and I am even at number two or three for community builder right now. It's not like it used to be here, Greg. Sorry. that is just how it's going!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/9/2020 11:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea ... a slow time, I guess. Blessings, Buddy! :o) <3

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