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Written: January 23, 2024 __________________________________________ Their melodious humming drifts through the fragrant night air carrying a sense of tranquility In this enchanting universe where dreams come true A delicate whisper of silver breeze captivated softly. Trees are lavishly graced with azure iridescence visualize an idyllic scene that is truly magical in this hypnotic realm trees sway softly as lilts chortle jubilantly dryads are ecstatic lullabies spark with flamboyant emerald fostering faith in forfeited souls lack within intricate maze of their dwelling scarlet nests tucked high on twigs An oasis of passion where silence draws. Lullabies load breeze with a warm glow of opals orienting dropped souls In a mystery of their abode once again trees adorned with snugly hidden crimson nests a setting of love where harmony sway arbors wrapped with stunning splendor a vibrant tapestry of dazzling majesty their heaving hues herald heaven with hypnotic hood In this magical mannerism musings mantling In an ephemeral haven of natural magnificence dryads whirl and trees sway peacefully The winter-worn sky reveals a faded, shimmering bronze and gold shade, reminiscent of a withered vermeil and naiad fluorescent opals, paired with scarlet demantoids in smooth charmeuse enamel mesmerizing maelstroms of crystalline bonfire flamingo flowers fit with a fiery symphony akin to the reverberations of a silken folk melody on the horizon they shrink to hypnotic ink scribbles on violet skyline.

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Date: 1/26/2024 11:09:00 AM
Hello Sotto, this breathtaking majestic odyssey is awash with luxuriant hues, harmonic synonyms, and sumptuous scene capture. From the very first line this impeccable literary gem had this hypnotic effect on me. I was mesmerised and transfixed by the silken sinuous flow of your epic work. I really appreciate your in depth analysis of my recent poem. Your invaluable insights will be used as a template for growth Kind regards Howard
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Date: 1/25/2024 8:19:00 AM
hi Sotto so full of melodies that harmonically take your reader on a delightful journey brilliant hugs Shadow
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Date: 1/24/2024 4:00:00 AM
I always love reading your free verse they flow so seamlessly like a waterfall! And the sound of your diction is as always so melodious and gracefully divine! The way you paint imagery using poetic techniques is truly impressive and impeccable! I love every word woven in this from Colors to the way you’ve used nature in your poem to convey your wise and soulful thoughts. I especially loved “ The winter-worn sky reveals a faded, shimmering bronze and gold shade,” definitely a fave for me
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Date: 1/24/2024 3:36:00 AM
Someone is calling you Dr Sotto. An explanation is needed. Read this poem although not with sound which I prefer. It is exciting to see your imagery and taste your great diction.
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Date: 1/23/2024 4:54:00 PM
dearest Sotto--your poem was captivating and left me breathless. The colorful fullness of your poem lifted my spirits on this somewhat dreary evening here in Texas. I'm left with a sense of tranquility in this mystical realm you crafted so meticulously. These alliterative lines grabbed my attention: "their heaving hues herald heaven with hypnotic hood..." I'm convinced, you must surely dream in words and color. I'm amazed, sincerely. Enjoy your evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 1/23/2024 4:20:00 PM
Sotto, you paint a beautiful picture with words, lovely poetry. Beryl
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Date: 1/23/2024 11:51:00 AM
Dear poet, you are so in your element with free verse, where you can convey such lovely imagery! Beautiful, Lasaad! A fave!
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Date: 1/23/2024 10:42:00 AM
Nice colorful poem.
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Date: 1/23/2024 10:40:00 AM
- As a beautiful painting by the best artist...woow....thanks for sharing your precious gems, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 1/23/2024 10:02:00 AM
Stunning, vibrant and dazzling are your word choices to describe the colorful blooms of this free verse creation. Wonderfully expressed are your visions, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/23/2024 9:27:00 AM
This enchanting poem weaves a vivid tapestry of nature's beauty, painting a mesmerizing picture of an ethereal realm. The imagery is rich, and the language is beautifully crafted. The delicate whispers of the silver breeze and the melodious humming set a tranquil tone, creating a sense of peace and magic..
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