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Blood Lust

What sinister secrets lurk within my mind, What raging storms grip my heart, What malicious maelstroms swirl in my eyes, What demonic forces torment my soul... You don't wanna know! It will only entice you in its dreadful dragnet And drag you through an undead necropolis. I thirst for the blood And subsist on the life essence of living creatures, Prowling relentlessly in the shadows of the moonlit nights awaiting my next meal. CROSS your heart when you see me, CROSS your heart now when you read this, I can feel you breathe Sense your heart pounding Smell the sweat of your fear -- So I said so in truth, So you have been forewarned! ~06/25/2013 ~Deep and Dark II contest by Laura Loo

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Date: 11/6/2017 12:32:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderfully dark write, Abdul - blessings! :-)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/6/2017 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Greg.
Date: 10/28/2017 10:24:00 PM
Abdul, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/27/2017 10:36:00 PM
Absolutely nostalgic. It was a well deserved win. Congrats Abdul Malik.
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Date: 10/27/2017 4:55:00 PM
Wow, Abdul! Love the ending! Well done and congrats! <3 Kim
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Date: 10/27/2017 1:01:00 PM
You mailed this theme my friend, congrats on your 1st place win
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Date: 10/27/2017 10:55:00 AM
OH absolutely deep and dark! Congratulations on your win with this exceptional pen. xomo!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/27/2017 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Maureen. Did you Cross your heart?! lol
Date: 7/7/2013 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD
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Date: 7/4/2013 10:55:00 AM
sad, and deep.......enjoyed............ LOVE* SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 12:33:00 PM
Great piece! Well done Abdul. Congrats on your win. I love your approach to the contest. Well done. AO
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Date: 6/30/2013 3:39:00 PM
Abdul, a very captivating and ominous read ! I will beware of the vampire coming and will keep crossing my heart or hope to die... great poem !
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Abdul Malik
Date: 6/30/2013 8:37:00 PM
You will not die for sure. You'll only be undead!!!
Date: 6/29/2013 11:17:00 PM
Oh Abdul, have noted the warning. Lol. Congrats ....Seren
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Abdul Malik
Date: 6/30/2013 8:36:00 PM
You noted the warning a tad too late!! I can already smell the blood! Ha, ha, haaaaaa!!!!!!!!
Date: 6/29/2013 3:39:00 PM
Abdul, :-) Congratulations in my awesome SECRET contest. don't know if the secret is totally out. I'm loving all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
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