Best Emptiness Poems


Premium Member The Voices Echo In Emptiness

With a sigh summer citrine sky turned green 
spontaneously into existence. 
Autumn's palette adds changes and are seen
to its systematic experience.

Stars shiver in fear on the coldest night. 
Voices in the darkness look for refuge;
heaven bound birds gather in distant flight
sailing through winds dusty powdered steel rouge.

The long day is dead; voices won't let me sleep. 
Hush. Hush. The voices echo in emptiness. 
Whiff of sandalwood lost in shadows deep.
The voices know my loneliness, the nothingness.

Amber encroaches the dawning of morning fight 
through window curtains the whitest lace of light.
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Joy In the Emptiness

Where once a caterpillar ceased to crawl
  knit into a temporary tomb
  a chrysalis shell now lies, empty, broken
  observed from above
  by the butterfly, now set free

Where once a pine cone lay on the topsoil
  awaiting a crucible of fire
  tested and tried, but not to perish
  releasing its seeds by the wildfire's heat
  a burnt shell now lies, empty, broken
  observed from above
  by the new pine tree, with uplifted branches

Where once a tomb held a broken and torn body
  stricken, smitten, and afflicted
  awaiting the promise from on high
  the disciples gape at the rolled away stone
  "He is not here, He is risen!"
  saints and angels rejoice in God's master plan

There is joy in the emptiness

//certain pinecone varieties only release their seeds from the heat of a forest fire, ensuring the repopulation of trees after a devastating wildfire.//

Written 10 Apr 2022
© John Watt  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Fleeing Emptiness

Moon is still behind glum clouds
Sullen is the garb of a silent sky
So much like how he feels tonight
Anxious in the night laden in dark

Stars are opaquely hanging listless
Like the glimmer of her grieved vibes
Dimming in saddened teary eyes
Refusing to proffer a happy smile

A chatter heard from birds’ nest
Breaks their muffled silence
Quivering pulse of anguished feelings
Rattling summer’s lavender dreams
Drifting away in coral winds
From fragrant garden’s ruby appeal

A lone bird now leaves its abode
And sits close by, staring at him
Ambivalent of travails it heard
Unsure to yield, unwilling to leave

Bawl of strife’s persistent despair
Slowly fades in decaying night
As moon is starting to pierce dark,
So are the twinkles of distant stars
Waning in purple of rising dawn
Glinting on blush of the tinted arc

Seeing the lone bird sprinting above
Spanning wings in blazing speed
Fleeing emptiness of vacant scene
Much like him… way ahead of him

July 12, 2020
July Na Or Hm Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Hm received in contest judged on 7/14/2020
Contest Name: Completely New (9) Any Form Any Theme


Emptiness of Living

The confusion of the living
With its sad and futile passions;
Is wearing out the people
As a woman wears out fashions.

What men have taken from the many
Is now the property of few;
The commandment not to covet
Is what men now love to do.

The dream of being equal
Would give abstinence from pain;
But they counted all the cost of things
That were not theirs to gain.

The landscape of life's summit
That bathed itself in glory;
Has told us what we now can see
With judgment on the story.

All the banal thoughts
Of self-righteous grasping men;
Never found the satisfaction
In truth written by a pen.

The friends we have today
And those that we once knew;
Are not more than the memory
That we once listened to.

Believe the fleeting moments
Find what they never gave;
For the sins of selfish living
Finds no comfort in the grave.

Premium Member An Emptiness Inside

something feels out of place,
 maybe my thoughts are twirling in the wind
- i am just not sure which one, at this moment in time -
i wish i knew. . i wish i could explain it (breathing out a deep sigh)

there is a void, yes- an emptiness here

emotions toss, back and forth - 
they don’t seem to have any direction;
none at all

how can this be?

my heart aches and it slowly breaks
yet, i don’t know why

. . something feels different, not like it should be
i just wish i understood, so i could explain it to my heart

___________________

- sometimes, thoughts tangle every emotion -
* a little scribble from the heart *

Author's Note: One should always feel happy, safe and at peace- in the Poetry World.  This heart of mine is having a hard time understanding how negative thoughts, bullies and anger, even jealousy can reside in Poetry.  

(Always be different from the World)

Premium Member Days of Emptiness

She sits by herself
on the grains of white sand
basking in the warmth of sunshine 
staring out at the sea 
while waves of sapphire blue crept towards her.

Tears stream down her face, 
another day of emptiness, 
another day filled with pain.

This was where they made love 
when they first met 
under the cover of midnight
and the waves' lullaby.

She closed her eyes 
thought erupt in her soul
holding him once more 
leaving a calm.

     He was gone. 

          Or was he?

11/6/2018
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.


Premium Member A Sense Of Emptiness

You feel empty inside;
robbed of its passion, your spirit has died.
It was a deftly theft,
no trace of trust was left;
you're now feeling bereft,
and can't shake that feeling; God knows you've tried.

A shadow in the dark;
your soul has lost its spontaneous spark.
"Poor invisible me,"
no one can hear your plea;
a teardrop in the sea,
your fate is looking increasingly stark.

Your inner voice goes mute;
when the pain of loneliness grows acute,
and faith's put on trial.
You've not smiled in a while,
and it has cramped your style;
for, once, love leaves; hope's a poor substitute.

The victim of a lie,
your heart is a place where dreams go to die.
For they cannot exist
where fantasies desist;
and nagging doubts resist
attempts to trust in love, or even try.

Premium Member Soundless Met Emptiness

Today I sat in silence gently closing my eyes
Saying goodbye to sounds that makes our world alive
Slowly I started to drift, deeper into an unknown black
Where sound has never been heard, where life also lacked

The deeper and further I went, uncharted by any man
Where silenced echoed it's silence, right back to our future plan
In this void of soundless emptiness, dust particles brushed me so
Prompting me to open my eyes, allowing my eyes to glow

So fortunate I think to myself, being present at the beginning of time
Finding the truth of yesterdays tomorrows, now knowing where man has climbed
I watch the particles spinning, over millions and millions of years
Creating planets we know now, aligned are these magnificent spheres

Gradually I work my way back, enlightened at what I had viewed
Knowing that we are only a blip in time, being here is so misunderstood
So many follow their paths, knowing of their yonder 
So today I sat in silence, gladly closing my eyes I wandered

Premium Member Emptiness

I am full
Of emptiness
I long for longing
Crave contentment

The insensate pain
Of intangible touch
Indecipherable ciphers
Choreographed madness

Craggy comfort
Of blunt condolence
The decorum of anarchy
Deserted crowds, social solitude
Miles given to intercept steps

At the dawn of abundance
I see only
bones of ghosts 
Whose meager admonishment
I forgot to unlearn

Unredeemed
And unrepentant
I am in love
With loneliness.

9/20/19

Premium Member In The Chill By My Windowsill I Sit Alone

Oh! How I despise dawn’s blushing optimism
and dried hydrangea blooms sepia skinned and papery thin.
Humdrum hands beat doldrums drum.

Why won’t the summer solstice light this darkness?
A gnawing hollow where my heart should be.
Where cinder clouds float in negative space
memories collect like nesting sparrows beneath eaves.

I stray, a waif lost with my armful of loss.
Your death did steal my breath and heartbeat like a thief
while October’s wind trembled aspens like harp strings.



(Ten Poem Titles)

The Corruption Of My Lust For Life 
Autumn Side Of September 
Mundane Matters Of Mortals 
Theft Of My Will To Survive 
In Woes And Throes Of Sorrow 
A Vanilla Dove 
Escape Of The Bluesman’s Song 
The Sham Of My Humanity 
Death Is The Bane Of My Existence 
The Shedding Trees Of Autumn

Premium Member Emptiness

The silent house
it's mouth firm and shut
the crying eyes
the trails of tears
can't beat the mourning sky

The silent man
locked up inside
he tracks the tears
counts empty bottles
cuts words from yellow
newspapers

In random order
it now says:
"evening chaos car prime-minister"
He thinks this might become
a masterpiece
A lamenting poem about
absolutely nothing.

***

August 18, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White

Premium Member A Sense of Emptiness

Yes the crystal shattered
       It was empty so it never mattered 
            Saved for a wedding day
              Carefully put away
                 “Just you wait” she would say
                   But like her heart the pieces were scattered

                    She was a pretty girl
                   Smitten by a handsome devil named Earl
                Oh how he made her purr
            His chest hair soft as fur
       Sadly not just with her
To a swine you should never give a pearl           

He made her insides sing
       Yet it was only heartache he would bring
            He pretended his love
              was a gift from above
                 She thought she was his dove
                  But sadly there would be no wedding ring

                   Her breasts he did caress
                  after carefully removing her dress
                She had hoped to be blessed
             Only body caressed 
        Oh why was she impressed?
She desired Love but found emptiness
               
                  
Written January 5th, 2017 for Broken Wings’ Rhyme Content.

Premium Member A Sense of Emptiness

A SENSE OF EMPTINESS 

		Empty I feel inside,
		No emotions left within since you died,
		A black blankness that drains
		a hollow heart remains.
		Shackled to chasmic chains,
		Leftover is a shallow shadow, wide..

	A null void consumes me, 
	Sensations have been sucked out, all thoughts flee,
	Nothing lingers behind,
	Not a word in my mind.
	Stark vacuum I find,
	A zilch devoid of tender tendency..

		A vacancy that tugs
		these numb heartstrings, as unfeeling soul chugs.
		This life slowly goes on,
		But you are dead and gone.
		Alone and woebegone, 
		I struggle with silent shivers and shrugs..

	In this vague state, I choke,
	Ah! To join you! I await death's one stroke!
	To you, my dry tears plead,
	In grave's abyss, I bleed,
	You're free. I'm not yet freed.
	Nothingness envelopes me like a cloak.


01.09.18


Contest: Rhyme me a poem 
Sponsor: Broken Wings

Vast Emptiness

~

as I gaze out upon the
tranquil surface of a moonlit ocean
I am taken by the vast emptiness
that I see

and I wonder if this
perpetual body of water
is taken by the vast emptiness
that is me

~

Premium Member Emptiness

When we met you literally swept 
me off my feet,
You were a pleasant surprise and 
a treasured gift.
I felt in my heart of hearts that
we were destined to meet.
But just like the season’s change
so did our relationship.

You went from a loving man to a
narcissist very fast.
The only person that you truly loved
was yourself alone.
Our story won’t have a good ending
and it will not last.
As I lay next to you I feel so broken  
and utter emptiness.
 













Contest: E Words Challenge 
Sponsor: Constance La France
02/11/2023
© Alexis Y.  Create an image from this poem.

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