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Vast emptiness

~

as I gaze out upon the
tranquil surface of a moonlit ocean
I am taken by the vast emptiness
that I see

and I wonder if this
perpetual body of water
is taken by the vast emptiness
that is me

~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/12/2019 6:57:00 AM
Soft and serene, a peaceful write, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/12/2019 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren
Date: 9/11/2019 4:07:00 PM
i like the way this one is penned, it makes one ponder thoughts, as you are as you wrote it...clever my friend :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/11/2019 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Sandy. I am happy you enjoyed my "test" poem, shhhhhhh. : ) Seems I can reply from here as well.
Date: 9/11/2019 3:06:00 PM
pure poetry, chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/11/2019 3:45:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your wonderful comment
Date: 9/11/2019 2:56:00 PM
Beautifully written Chris! I love this one :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/11/2019 3:44:00 PM
Thank you so very much Linda.