Chris Green Poet Free verse

Vast Emptiness

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as I gaze out upon the
tranquil surface of a moonlit ocean
I am taken by the vast emptiness
that I see

and I wonder if this
perpetual body of water
is taken by the vast emptiness
that is me

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Anne-Lise Andresen October 11, 2019 at 6:23 AM - I see, infinity   ... the most important source on earth, Chris - Humans are a part of it all - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green October 11, 2019 at 6:48 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

John Hamilton September 26, 2019 at 12:58 PM Clever idea for a write, perfect execution! Chris Green September 26, 2019 at 1:27 PM Thanks my friend. Check your mailbox.

Paula Goldsmith September 24, 2019 at 3:44 PM Beautiful and peaceful. I love to gaze on the water of blue...................... Chris Green September 24, 2019 at 4:02 PM Thank you so very much Paula.

Ernilando Tugaff September 24, 2019 at 5:06 AM Chris, enjoyed reading it. Post some more. Ernilando Chris Green September 24, 2019 at 8:22 AM Thank you so much.

Caren Krutsinger September 12, 2019 at 6:57 AM Soft and serene, a peaceful write, Chris. Chris Green September 12, 2019 at 8:14 AM Thank you so much Caren

Sandra Adams September 11, 2019 at 4:07 PM i like the way this one is penned, it makes one ponder thoughts, as you are as you wrote it...clever my friend :) hugs Chris Green September 11, 2019 at 4:20 PM Thank you Sandy. I am happy you enjoyed my "test" poem, shhhhhhh. : ) Seems I can reply from here as well.

Ilene Bauer September 11, 2019 at 3:06 PM pure poetry, chris! Chris Green September 11, 2019 at 3:45 PM Thank you my friend. I appreciate your wonderful comment