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Vast Emptiness

~ as I gaze out upon the tranquil surface of a moonlit ocean I am taken by the vast emptiness that I see and I wonder if this perpetual body of water is taken by the vast emptiness that is me ~

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2019 6:23:00 AM

- I see, infinity ... the most important source on earth, Chris - Humans are a part of it all - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2019 6:48:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/26/2019 12:58:00 PM

Clever idea for a write, perfect execution!

Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 1:27:00 PM

Thanks my friend. Check your mailbox.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/24/2019 3:44:00 PM

Beautiful and peaceful. I love to gaze on the water of blue......................

Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 4:02:00 PM

Thank you so very much Paula.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 9/24/2019 5:06:00 AM

Chris, enjoyed reading it. Post some more. Ernilando

Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 8:22:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/23/2019 4:16:00 PM

I read it, and said, WOW,! This gentle verse surprised me with its impact. Maybe I can relate to both, "vast emptiness" references. I made it a fave, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 5:01:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sandra. I appreciate your kindness