A Sense Of Emptiness

< center>I feel empty inside,
robbed of its passion: my spirit has died.
It was a deftly theft;
no trace of trust is left,
I am feeling bereft:
and can't shake that feeling; God knows I've tried.

A shadow in the dark,
my soul has lost its spontaneous spark.
Poor invisible me,
I'm a tear in the sea
where no one hears my plea:
while my future looks increasingly stark.

My inner voice goes mute,
when the pain of loneliness grows acute,
and faith's put on trial.
I've not smiled in a while
and it has cramped my style,
fantasies become a poor substitute.

The victim of a lie,
my heart is a place where dreams go to die.
For hope cannot exist
where fantasies desist;
and nagging doubts resist
attempts to trust in love, or even try.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 14, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Congratulations on your win Emile! Love the line ... my hollow heart's a place dreams go to die. Nicely crafted!! ~Judy
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January 15, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Thanks so much Judith, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
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January 12, 2018 at 1:47 PM
There is no heartache like the loss of love Emile. So beautifully expressed! My congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : )
Pinet Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Thanks Connie, you are one of my biggest fans and I love it my friend, Emile.
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January 12, 2018 at 8:16 AM
I really felt this one. Congrats on your win.
Pinet Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Thanks so much Richard, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
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January 12, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest. You have penned so many wonderful lines with this poem, an outstanding write and I love your image too!
Pinet Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 9:12 AM
Thanks so much Broken, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in your contest my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 5:28 AM
so poignant and full of woe, loved it congrats :)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your continued support my friend, Emile.
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January 11, 2018 at 10:51 PM
Congrats on your win, Emile. Well done.
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January 12, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thanks again line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
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January 11, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Emile, so very sad, but so beautiful.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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January 12, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thanks so much Eve, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
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January 5, 2018 at 2:58 PM
Congrats, Emile. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Thanks Line, I welcome your support my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 1:35 PM
love the rhyme scheme and rhythm, great poem congrats dear Emile :) -luloo
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Thanks you so much Laura, I bask in the sunshine of your praise my friend, Emile.
Barden Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 12:23 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Emile - blessings and best wishes for a Happy New Year, friend! :-)
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Thanks so much Gregory, I welcome your comments and wish you a Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:31 PM
A beautifully sad poem Emile. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Thanks Susan, your kind words are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
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January 3, 2018 at 11:21 AM
Lovely poem although sad Emile, always a pleasure to read you, congrats on a fine placement!
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Thanks John, your kind words have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
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December 21, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Very beautiful expressed even if sad, lovely write Emile.
Pinet Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Thank you Arthur, I welcome your comments my friend, Emile.
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