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You feel empty inside, robbed of its passion, your spirit has died. It was a deftly theft no trace of trust was left, so you're feeling bereft and can't shake that feeling; God knows you've tried. A shadow in the dark, your soul has lost its spontaneous spark. Poor invisible me, no one can hear your plea; a teardrop in the sea, your fate is looking increasingly stark. Your inner voice goes mute, as the pain of loneliness grows acute and faith's put on trial. You've not smiled in a while, it hardly seemed worthwhile for once love leaves, hope is no substitute. The victim of a lie, your heart is a place where dreams go to die. For they cannot exist where fantasies desist and nagging doubts resist attempts to trust in love or even try.

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Date: 1/14/2018 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Emile! Love the line ... my hollow heart's a place dreams go to die. Nicely crafted!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/15/2018 9:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Judith, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/12/2018 1:47:00 PM
There is no heartache like the loss of love Emile. So beautifully expressed! My congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : )
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Date: 1/12/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Connie, you are one of my biggest fans and I love it my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/12/2018 8:16:00 AM
I really felt this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/12/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/12/2018 7:53:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest. You have penned so many wonderful lines with this poem, an outstanding write and I love your image too!
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Date: 1/12/2018 9:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Broken, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in your contest my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/12/2018 5:28:00 AM
so poignant and full of woe, loved it congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/12/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your continued support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/11/2018 10:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 1/12/2018 7:36:00 AM
Thanks again line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/11/2018 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Emile, so very sad, but so beautiful.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/12/2018 7:36:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/5/2018 2:58:00 PM
Congrats, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 1/5/2018 7:19:00 PM
Thanks Line, I welcome your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/5/2018 1:35:00 PM
love the rhyme scheme and rhythm, great poem congrats dear Emile :) -luloo
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Date: 1/5/2018 2:01:00 PM
Thanks you so much Laura, I bask in the sunshine of your praise my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/5/2018 12:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Emile - blessings and best wishes for a Happy New Year, friend! :-)
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Date: 1/5/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Gregory, I welcome your comments and wish you a Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/4/2018 8:31:00 PM
A beautifully sad poem Emile. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/5/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Susan, your kind words are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/3/2018 11:21:00 AM
Lovely poem although sad Emile, always a pleasure to read you, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 1/5/2018 11:22:00 AM
Thanks John, your kind words have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/21/2017 4:40:00 PM
Very beautiful expressed even if sad, lovely write Emile.
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Date: 12/21/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Arthur, I welcome your comments my friend, Emile.

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