Best Ascent Poems


Premium Member Descent To Ascent

……Somewhere a lone survivor of a plane crash

A man of sound and reason 
   standing tall and proud. 
But a voice of lies and madness 
   whispering words of doubt. 
His mind a fortress sturdy 
   no shadows in the crowd. 
But a path of doom and darkness 
   waiting to break out.

Delusions like a serpent, 
   coiling in his brain, 
Paranoia like a venom, 
   oozing from his core. 
Twisting truth and logic, 
   driving him insane. 
The world a hostile army, 
   waging endless war.

Dissociation like a vise, 
   squeezing his soul tight, 
A mirror of identity, 
   shattered into shards.
Lost within the maze, 
   his selfhood out of sight. 
The pieces of his being, 
   scattered near and far.

Psychosis like a demon, 
   dancing in his mind, 
The music of madness, 
   playing its eerie song. 
Illusions like a spider, 
   weaving webs to bind. 
As his grip on sanity, 
   was slowly being wronged.

Not working…..
He found a radio, a possible voice of hope and light.
…..Working

Then a change of course, 
   a turn of fate’s design, 
A mind once plunged in madness, 
   now rising to the fight. 
From blackness to brightness, 
   a force of hope divine. 
An ascent from affliction, 
   a story of great might.

As his grip on sanity was 
   slowly being restored, 
Illusions like a spider 
   weaving webs to break. 
The music of madness 
   playing its final chord. 
Psychosis like a demon 
   dancing in his wake.

The pieces of his being 
   scattered near and far, 
Lost within the maze his 
   selfhood comes to light. 
A mirror of identity 
   shattered into stars. 
Dissociation like a vise 
   squeezing his soul bright.

The world a hostile army 
   waging endless peace.
Twisting truth and logic 
   driving him to sane. 
Paranoia like a venom 
   oozing from his fleece. 
Delusions like a serpent 
   coiling in his mane.

But a path of doom and darkness 
   waiting to fade out. 
His mind a fortress sturdy 
   no shadows in the crowd. 
But a voice of lies and madness 
   whispering words of doubt? 
A man of sound and reason standing tall and proud?

A lone survivor of a plane crash……

Ascent

They left every stone unturned
Every rose untouched 
In the rubble of a shrine 
Of those who once had loved
They lie quietly
Faces upturned
Towards the sun
Their tears vaporize
To ascend
To become 
A story that will never end
Life begins at the turn 
Of a long winding way
Journeyed in a day.

Premium Member Ascent of Virtue

ascent of virtue
  its ardor lasts a lifetime
source-pulse-point perfume
  sweet honesty seduction
 sensation of married flesh


Premium Member Final Ascent

Round and round, they twist and rise;
Without a sound, towards heaven’s skies.
Pure energy, it cannot die, despite a skeptics protest;
It brings a soul to new heights; there, it has its rest.

When the light, it does appear, an all-consuming fire;
Life renews; becomes dear as we transcend this ugly mire.
With electricity; souls are called into the light; 
The clay and water, reduced to ground; as souls alight.

The one part of your self will rise, 
to touch and stay in Heaven’s skies.
Just know you go where you’ll be free;
Across the void, to your Creator, you see.

Life’s not easy, but when lived well; 
back to the Source, we all will sail.

Premium Member Descent and ascent

Line of inquiry:
“on an as is where is basis we choose
descent of consciousness into the gross
then we rise again following heart’s muse
higher than where stood, bearing love’s cross”- unseeking seeker

Few have been my conscious acts
of very high or low.
More have been the trials that
have disrupted my joy’s flow.

Some tribulations sent me reeling,
feeling like I was in hell.
More fortunate than some am I.
And this I now know very well.

The modern world lends comforts
to which we feel entitled,
while there are poor souls on this earth
where horrors reign unbridled.

My trials, mostly physical,
I’ve managed to get through.
Though life brings torments even now,
with God’s gifts I can still make do.

I thank the Lord that life has been
mainly kind to me.
No too-high mountains have I climbed.
No monsters have I had to flee.

From my ups and downs I’ve learned
everyone – my sisters and my brothers -
has woes to bear that I can’t know.
We must have empathy for all others.

Premium Member Ascent From Misery

It’s a long slow trip into misery
It starts by putting that bad feeling aside


By narrowing your expectations
And removing all of your pride
 

And as you make you humble
You actually cripple as well
 

You reach so far to have someone else
That it actually puts you in hell
 

It’s a long slow trip into misery
From which I must return


And in order to do this
I must internalize the lessons learned
 

To believe in me
To set me free
 

To walk into the light
And possibly disappear from sight


Ascent from Misery – 2001 (C) Susan Manley (on my divorce)


Premium Member Ascent

wholly
utterly
completely
devoting
dedicating
committing
striving
exerting
straining
victory 
triumph
conquest
smiling
grinning
beaming
gratitude
appreciation
acknowledgment
modesty
humility
prayer

Premium Member Descent and Ascent

On an as is where is basis, we fell—
down the elevator shaft of the day,
into the buzz of a fluorescent hum, the smell
of reheated takeout in cracked Styrofoam trays.

The descent began when the train doors jammed,
and I was stuck staring at my own reflection—
the stale grime of the carriage, the paper ads,
my face mirrored against the strangers, expressionless.

I finally made it home, my shoes untied,
the hallway dim, someone’s dog barking through thin walls.
The key caught in the lock, metal snagged on silence—
inside, a burnt-out bulb flickered above the sink.
Bills were piled high, half-shoved in a drawer,
an eviction notice crumpled at the edges,
yesterday's dishes stacked like monuments of failure,
and in the fridge—two eggs, a leftover apology.

Then I saw it: a post-it, bright yellow,
crookedly taped above the empty fruit bowl.
A scribbled heart, in a child’s writing, "You're the best,"
the 's' in 'best' drawn backward, rushed—
a small love, pressed into a square of paper.

That night, I folded laundry in silence,
shirt by shirt, sock by unmatched sock,
finding something steady in the rhythm—
the sound of breathing is as good as sleep
when sleep is nowhere near.

I climbed into that feeling, inch by inch,
with each minute stretched, each dollar exchanged
for time, each deep breath drawn. The city
buzzed outside, the cars skating down wet streets,
but here, it was the small clicks of our life—
turning off the TV, the snap of clean sheets,
the drip of the bathroom faucet needing fixing.
I knew it was enough—this climb, this small scaffold
we built to hold us up.

Now I stand, the city alive beneath my window,
swapping scar tissue out for the heat of the moment, 
for the feat of staying—my laughter penetrating 
the cracks in the walls—a song that makes each broken 
piece of the ascent worth saving.

Engaging the Ascent

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       tectonic defense
                 contemplative reflection
                             remorseful summit
© Abe Lopez  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Mountain

Mountain 

No sherpa, rope
Or faithful steed
In stocking feet
I do proceed 

Each day I climb
Relentless slope
To rest my weary head
And hope 

That once the peak
Of my desire
To elevated place
Aspire 

Concludes. 

No flag or 
Selfie pose will take
No Instagram.
No front page stake. 

Just me.
To hear the lost applause
Of decades climbing
For the cause 

And when the final
Bell tolls here..
The challenge ends.
The final year. 

My human vehicle
Now kaput 
The mode of transport
No sock dressed foot 

My rationale
I will defend
As heaven's stairs
Now, I ascend 

The greatest mission
Has to start..
An expedition 
Of the heart


Jinjagoliath
13th April 2023

Premium Member Descent And Ascent

I fall a raindrop from stratus to stratum
birthed from clouds pregnant with thunder
a lion’s roar —a pride in the sky— fierce!
armed with lightning’s rip and slit
the scythe of claw and tooth finds its prey
knifing sunset’s skin  desecrating cranberry rays
it’s red demise fills my see-through-eyes 
Sun’s canvas shredded
I fall through tattered pages of watercolor-layers
accumulating dust and blood of the slayed day

I arrive not a predator but a peace-maker
my raiment fleece of lamb not mane of beast

I come to rest 
a drop of rain who clings to a windowpane
… translucence transforms me
inside a room I see myself with my possession-pain  
a swaddle-bundle I rock to soothe
pain held against my breast like a newborn
crying to be fed
nurtured with lemon-squeezed tears
and sticky sick-sweet milk of revenge

my fingertips trace my descent down the glass
I pray not to let the dark moon be my doom

I know myself like turmoil-seas know the shore
let the salt-sea’s seethe meet still grains of sand
abrasions cleanse one of crime and grime
      
I know myself like the night knows the morn
let the night be a knight 
and capture rapture with light-swords of dawn

I know myself 
the games I played with leather fringe and lace
his Marlboro face    the Moët taste
the magnet attraction pulled my limbs apart

I am a tear liberated from the storm
free to fall   free to fall   oh I had to fall so far to be free
fall from heights where lust-wishes glisten
slip the stardust handcuffs
fall from nimbus  find the limbus of self and soul
find a way to rise above black seams
and wanton scenes of my scream-dreams

translucence transforms me

I let go of the windowpane 
and die to myself casting off pleasure of pain and sin 
I fall to silent-sister soil  inhaled to be exhaled
on dizzy wind-whimsy-warmth of first light
I fall a new drop of dew wet with sky light
as I bear Love's cross like a white lotus bears its muddy birth

Premium Member Ascent Into Love, Translation of Carlos Bousono's Poem: Subida Al Amor

Ascent into love, Translation of Carlos Bousono’s poem : Subida al amor

(The first poem in Bousono’s first collection of the same name, written before he was 22,
sounds very much like being his declaration of « love » with life or rather his « testament » of 
love .  A good many of the poems selected by A. D. Amusco in his anthology : Poésia Antologia 
1945-1993 have been revised by the poet, himself. 
T. Wignesan)

Pay attention to the airs, Solitary Soul !
Sad soul which goes whimpering all alone.
Rise up, mount ! Love awaits you !
The summit looms high. Limit the harness !

Fluttering, trembling and pale,
I see you mounting with your force held back.
The sun returns where, until yesterday, the moon reigned.
The moon arrives where yesterday blew the north wind.

At last, life shines forth with light.
At last, death is dealt a deadly blow by light.
The summits sing, and so do the valleys. Sing !
those who’re always alive to those who never die !


Face to face together with God’s : listen
to the airs vibrating and live your dreams !
Life together with life, light bound up with loving light
and the humane heaven bound with love in heaven.

Lower the light of love, the light of life.
I feel with ease the minuteness of airs.
Let the light of God dissolve in that of the soul !
How clear it all becomes at once. What silence !

© T. Wignesan – Paris,  2013
© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member My Loves Ascent

I Know you from a distant dream.

     For splendid shapes that soften senses,
     capped peaks that tempt a caressing glance,
     to you, clambering, this cold heart doth dash.

     My hands embrace the danger of your delicacies,
     soft powdered curves that drift to tease,
     that lead to thoughts of conquests, yet,
     yielding mysteries willed to unfurl
     with each attempt to own such honor.

     Your granite plumes soar to touch the heavens
     but stoop to own one anguished soul.

     Possessed by none,
     Save God...


     Mountains Contest
     Sponsored by Julia Ward
     07/14/2016

Premium Member Ascent of Faith-Altitude

Almighty God, the supreme Father above
assures me, through Scriptures’ precepts, His divine affection
affirming His marvelous vibrant love’s abundance
always at work to grant pardon absolutely
and assuage my guilt-caused anguish*
as I confess my iniquities, spiritually atrocious…
along my heart’s repentant acquiescence.

Asserting  His grace, at all times amazing
Author of my faith awakens me against arrogance-attack
accommodating me around His fellowship’s altar 
auspicious  --- according to sovereign mercy’s assistance
available to absolve my sin-wages’ affliction
already paid by Christ’s blood of efficacious atonement...
…acquitting me from eternal condemnation toward heavenly abode.

Alertly apprehended against selfish appetency
admonished soul of mine, accepting adversities' alarms
asks forgiveness after ardent admission
aware of worldly enticements that grievously allure
amidst appeasing ephemeral affinities, carnally awry;
abiding now in His will, I  adore God, appreciating Him, gratefully awed… 
…ascending toward blissful service of faith-altitude.

*Psalm119:143 Trouble and anguish have taken hold on me: yet thy (LORD’s) commandments are my delights. 

Free verse with alliteration

October 26, 2019
3rd place, "Crazy A's" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton; judged on 11/3/2019.

Premium Member Pigeons Ascent

Adventure awaits, my feathered little friend.
Never will I know the distance you have flown.
Though sorrow fills my heart watching you ascend,
I know it won't be long before you are home.
You'll be on my mind from the start to the end.
Will you join other pigeons or fly alone?
Until I see you back here comfy one day,
My hope little fellow is that safe you'll stay.


Written September 3rd 2022
For the "Ottava Rima" contest
Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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