Ascent

They left every stone unturned
Every rose untouched 
In the rubble of a shrine 
Of those who once had loved
They lie quietly
Faces upturned
Towards the sun
Their tears vaporize
To ascend
To become 
A story that will never end
Life begins at the turn 
Of a long winding way
Journeyed in a day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bones Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 1:08 PM
good poem my friend
Petropoulos Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Great writing. Strong message.
Rutherford Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 7:49 AM
I remember your wonderful writing on lulu , good to read you again.This made me think of my husband forever looking to the sun.Great writing as usual. Anne
Squyres Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 6:06 AM
The hope of a happy journey...once this one has reached its end. I love this poem...it touches a place in me. Will make it one of my favorites so I can re-read at will. Look forward to reading more of your poetry. Again..nice to see you on the Soup !! God Bless !!
Goudreau Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 5:57 AM
A profound, captivating and moving read. I love this write. You are awesome. I kept your information verses www.lulu.com/spotlight/bullbla and will order soon. Million thx for the info. I've also deleted carefree as I wanted to delete my comments...had no choice but to delete the poem in order to do this. I will post it again later...perhaps tonight. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated! Love, Sue
Northeast Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 11:29 PM
Love lives on even after the journey especially in the hearts of those left behind- blessings- enjoyed your poem, Brenda
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