Altering Poems | Examples


Premium MemberLife Altering

Today is the day
Twenty-nine years to the day
Life changed forever
Categories: altering, remembrance day,
Form: Senryu

Premium MemberAltering the Landscape

    Hurling himself at his work
      passion-surpassing mission

    Setting aside sleep for nights on end
      fire growing with every line penned  

    His epic assuming its desired shape 
       altering the literary landscape ~

    When one troubled eve, his ardor on leave
       he pitched forward – eternity grieved
Categories: altering, fire, grief, literature, passion,
Form: Rhyme


Altering Nominative cases

Motivated by Lilibet Wallpaper

"Chickens will do." And a pause
"For another yard of georgette linens too."
And every capped reasons opened at last,
as a stair, for a stare, to ask about the rear,
"What about the full cotton fabrics or Chinese poplin?"
And impeccable time smiled on me, " Rather, this should be bobbling, that is inevitable."
"Ed good, this is still an issue room for mending.
Are you in?"
"Precisely! Exactly for what?" I heard. 
"Is it the hall room? Or the ballroom?" I asked. 
"It seemed a courtroom though." I heard my question answered, seemingly, in a bit startled voice.
"Nope. It is not a room, It is a table salt, tied to a prayer, that gifts the container, the neon, and the utility, and God willing, the next day we are expected to find the room." After a while, the assurance delivered.
"Though shawl thee!" I intervened.
"let's go home! Shall we?"
Categories: altering, allegory, clothes, computer, poetry,
Form: Free verse

Mind Altering

The time has come to face the facts.
Let's stop getting ourselves off track.

Doctors push the drug that helps them the most.
While it makes us feel like a ghost.

We know that we sometimes feel a little off.
Let's hope we do not get knocked off.

Some of the drugs that they do give us.
They only seem to hide us.

Mind altering is what the doctors will not say.
Because they do not want to scare us away.

Drugs of the mind alerting kind have no hope.
It might as well be legal dope.
Categories: altering, anxiety, crazy, depression, emotions,
Form: Other

Premium MemberLife-Altering Verses

“Precious in the sight of the Lord
Is the death of His saints”*,
What a reassuring record!
Such comfort this verse paints!

“So teach us to number our days,
That our hearts may be wise”**,
Help us, Lord to set right our ways
In your all-seeing eyes!



21st Aprill, 2022



*Psalm 116:15
**Psalm 90:12
Categories: altering, bible,
Form: Quatrain


Image Altering Reality

The wrath that they have for me and 
The envy they have for my dreams,
Man so much emotions they hating but
For fish: i walk on water,
For the hill: i climb my way to the top,
Rubber girls and metal men!
Im a wooden boy from deep in forests 
An outcast so i was Raised by wolves:
I sold hell to angels and Heaven to demons,
The leftovers i gave to mortals
Deep in the black market:
Giving out knowledge;
Watching out for the feds
I don't wanna go to jail,
But for what i believe in 
They can lock up me  for a thousand years. 

Hanging in the corners
Those pyramids for G's
G be Genius- Geniuses be the greatest,
Looking for formulas to conduct my new experiments:
Point of interest be dull in appearance
That's the difference
 between the top and the bottom,
What's above is not below: 
that's just the law of oneness so i'm not duplicating,
One be all- all be the mass
Mass be the people- the people be the masses.

Escalating, moving forward 
Rushes and blame me inches
Damn be ruin my phase,
That's more calculating 
Aeons to the modern day:
In the 1000th day i shall rule-
Giving code of ethics to individuals
So they too can enjoy the feast.
Categories: altering, deep, image, imagination, life,
Form: Verse

Altering the Past

Reminiscing mind
Figuring out vivid mode
Choose probable opt

Make choices at once
Altering past experience
Changes come amidst

Go free and detach
Vain still exists within thoughts
Create brighter ends.
Categories: altering, adventure, creation, freedom, imagination,
Form: Haiku

Mind Altering

Want to excite you inside out

By the time you realize

you're turned on, you'll

already be turned out.

Slide my finger

down your mind's centerline, 

then zigzag between

creativity and impossibility

making your excitement

unbearable to even think 

Your reaction is starting

to peak.  Touching you 

so well, it almost feels

terrible cause you want to be

touched with more x's and o's

you need a play by play.

I came to make you whole

without falsifying reasons.

Like Levert I have a love 

for all seasons.

Next to, on top of, 

inches away or locked 

away in memories 

I want you thinkin of me

Your dream state lover

giving you the coordinates

to unbelievable destinations. 

Set sail with me

as we journey towards

a place only words

can put in view. 

I want to have a psychedelic

climax from touching you.
Categories: altering, desire,
Form: Free verse

Life-Altering Experience

Her eyes shut down,
Her life had been stolen, sleeping on a summer day,
Deeply, she’d snored in relief,
“She found the light”
The one she always searched for
Because the world is dark,
But her spirit can light up a town.
My mom met heaven,
Heaven approved,
And God introduced her to it.
I just didn’t think that God had to put her to bed,
For a whole month and a half,
Because we missed her,
We thought
We’d lost her.
But
You only borrowed her, 
She has returned.
Categories: altering, angel, change, for her,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member'altering Decisions'

You made a life altering decision
That changed your life.
A choice that left mine empty,
I hated you for 
taking my son away
with one bullet… 

I hated you for pulling the 
trigger that day
I wished you were dead too…  

I wanted you to 
feel my pain, 
to experience my heartache 
I never thought,  
I would ever forgive you
until that day,  
I realized that the anger 
that made you pull the trigger 
are consuming me,  
drowning me… 

The love that I had for my son 
almost completely gone 
wasted energy and time, 
time that would not bring my son back
neither would the denial
that you needed my forgiveness, 
in the end your sin 
would not be a continued cycle…

My life might have changed forever that day
but I also learned the divine gift, 
forgiving someone can bring about... 

Even if it took me years to embrace. 

*loosely based on a true story of a SA mother who forgave her son's killer.. The story was highlighted on Reconciliation Day* 

© All Rights Reserved
Categories: altering, forgiveness, love, son, life,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberAltering Elements

Like a warm summer’s day
her infectious smile
can melt even the most cynical heart,

Like the boisterous south easterly
that clears away the city’s fog
her mood sways from jubilant to poignant,

Like a thunderous night 
that holds the promise of a beautiful day to follow
her anger melts like a glacier to form crystal streams,

Like the Indian monsoon
her tears flow without warning
drenching all thoughts, 

Like the autumn leaves fall
so does her reticence 

Like the icy Icelandic tundra
her aloofness
can be felt when she is betrayed…

Like a full moon promises change
so does her demeanor
when it comes to love,

Easily hurt 
but just as easily loved… 

Contest: Tell Me About You
Placed: 4th
Categories: altering, introspectionautumn,
Form: Free verse

You and Your Girls (Needs Altering)

This makes me laugh, you really do
You think I care so much about you
Ok, I care, but not like the rest
I'm not in awe and your not my best
At first I was, I won't deny it
But i wasn't myself, not one bit
You and your girls, they swoon and fall
They'll always be one to text or call
I try my best, still i can't help but smirk
When you talk about them to me like dirt
I laugh as i think how i could be yours
The friends i'd loose, the line of closed doors
I'll give on thing, you do talk real kind
But little of it actually goes into my mind
Overall i just want you to know
It's probably best if i just go
Categories: altering, me,
Form: I do not know?

Altering Life

The thin barrier breaks,
And you're now bathed in cold, dreadful liquid.
The shock doesn't hit right away.
When it does,
You realize you're screwed.
Your life is now altered.
Your friends are about to bombard you with more water balloons.
They just found your hiding spot behind your father's truck.
Categories: altering, friendship, funny
Form: Free verse
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