Marvin G. Celestial Poet Haiku

Altering the Past

Reminiscing mind
Figuring out vivid mode
Choose probable opt

Make choices at once
Altering past experience
Changes come amidst

Go free and detach
Vain still exists within thoughts
Create brighter ends.

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Pandita Sietesantos February 8, 2017 at 7:21 AM Hi Marvin, this haiku is so deep and inspirational haiku! I haven't written one in quite some time and you gave me something to think about! Well done and a 7, my friend! Pandita