You Tell Me Poems | Examples

Premium Member Con You Tell Me the Answer

  In case you’d like a test
    that doesn't always rhyme

  Is the opposite of ‘protest’~ ‘contest’

Premium Member When You Tell Me That You Love Me

You came into my life
You didn't ask so much of me.
You're the one giving out
I'm the one taking in

You came into my life
Expecting nothing from me.
You're the one letting it out
I'm the one keeping it in

One day you left me
Without saying a word.
I looked for more of me
Without you on board

One night you came back
And gave me answers I needed
To questions that pulled me back
And made me strong and mended

I was sorry for hurting you
And regret not keeping you
I am whole again for what you said to me
When you tell me that you love me

With you by my side
Keeping me on the bright side
I can feel the joy and laughter you're giving me
When you tell me that you love me
Form: Lyric


Premium Member A Mystic Verse, Questions

A MYSTIC’S VERSE-2, ”Questions”


How shall I see you in heaven?
Do you glow?
As the creator and temple of love,
Do you stand in unparalleled  radiance?
Is there a glimmering of your aura?
Does your knowing all truth
Put a sparkle in your eyes?
Do the flames of your purifying fire
Leap up?  And May we  hear
Their snapping sparks?
Does music rush out ahead
To proclaim your nearing footsteps?
Does the silence of your visitings
Keep dancing within its rhythms,
Within its divine timing, which
We cannot comprehend?

Will you sit with me awhile longer
To tell how rainbows find their smiles?
And how you know I want to borrow
Some colors for my challenged days?
Tell me, too, how when
I told you in a prayer that, “I love you,”
You answered completely and simply,
“I know,”
So from that night on, my soul
Has been dressed in an eternal light?
Tell, how you see
Going on separate from you is
Lasting on,
Not a life, not living on?

*********.          ***********          ***********
(c) Sally Young Eslinger 9/13/20
Written in sympathy for Jane Ethel Ethel

How Can You Tell Me

You don't see what I see
or what goes on in my head,
so how can you tell me
that the sky is not red?

You can't feel my passion,
eternal flame in my heart,
so how can you tell me
from my pain won't come art?

You can't listen to my soul
or the melodies it sings,
so how can you tell me
that I don't come from kings?

You don't suffer my pain,
nor have you witnessed my story,
so how can you tell me
that I'm not destined for glory?

You don't value my people,
but know the price we were sold,
so how can you tell me
that your black's not my gold?
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Can You Tell Me

A father tends to his children's fears
with sweet kisses while drying their tears.
And his hug embraces them with love,
prizing each as a gift from above.

Can you tell me of a father's kiss?

A lover acknowledges your past pain,
supporting you as you smile again.
And desire brews an erotic scent
as sweat drops and sexy thoughts ferment.

Can you tell me of a love like this?

A child reaps the innocence of youth,
a magical time of trust and truth.
And laughter's heard almost every day,
resounding in the echoes of play.

Can you tell me of such childhood bliss?

A man sees God in a starry sky,
and he's no longer afraid to die.
Faith doesn't require anything more
than he believes; to make his soul soar.

Can you tell me of truths I dismiss?


(Rhyme)


6/3/2016
Form: Rhyme


You Tell Me You Love Me

Drunken slurs
Vacant stares
More broken glass
Wishing this was the past
Slammed against the wall
Bloody, broken, and bruised
                 Dying
Bloody, broken, and bruised
                 Dead

What You Tell Me

“What You Tell Me ”
© 2003 Michelle Lynn LeBlanc



You tell me that I’m beautiful
You tell me you love me so
You tell me I need to trust you
In order for me to grow

You tell me I need to open
You tell me I need people's love
You tell me that I’m precious
And that I'm one you're proud of

Yet, I tell you ,“inside I’m ugly”
I tell you “love really means pain”
I tell  you” it’s hard to trust you
Because how others said words in vain”

I tell you ”I need these walls”
I tell you ” I can’t handle people's love”
I tell you, “I’m just too broken
When their push comes to shove”

Yet You always draw near to hold me
To tell me I can trust your heart
Even when I run away so far
Your love always leaves its mark!

© 2003 Michelle Lynn LeBlanc
Form: Rhyme

You Tell Me

YOU TELL ME

I cannot be there
the way you 
say
cobalt expanse
littered with
bright
shock

a stranger here
with a pen
as sex fills
the air

humid  humility
many of my
lovers taken
down
kissed by crimson
roses that have
exalted without
crown

I have no lover
just a pen
yet I am told
by millions
I am adored
but…
no one calls


so I return
to you chasing
down an
endless
storm

you tell me
what direction
to go…



© Kim  van Breda

Premium Member Sonnet : Can You Tell Me Why

Sonnet: Can you tell me why?~
 (English sonnet)


 Can you tell me why babies everywhere die?
 Can you tell me why this world feeds from hate?
 Can you tell me why we all have to cry?
 Can you tell me why some can’t find a mate?

 Can you tell me why sorrow conquers laughter?
 Can you tell me why some kids are unloved?
 Can you tell me why men just riches chases after?
 Can you tell me why some valued no beloved?

 Can you tell me why God most men reject?
 Can you tell me why sin springs like water?
 Can you tell me why most lives are wrecked?
 Can you tell me why there’s so much slaughter?

 Why? Why? Well, only God knows exactly why
 But sin and lack of God, Love, makes world cry!



 Dorian Petersen Potter
 aka ladydp2000
 copyright@2007



 January,09,2015
Form: Sonnet

Can You Tell Me

Can you tell me why I feel so upset?
Can you tell me that you have no regrets?
Can you tell me why I’m emotional,
Can you tell me anything at all?
Can you tell me what I’m doing wrong?
Why is the day taking so long?
I wanna know why I feel this way,
I wanna know why people cant change.
Why is there so much violence... why is there so much pain?
Why are we – So full of hate and grief?
What an end to a ****ty day, oh,
What an end to a ****ty day!
Can you tell me why I feel so confused?
Can you tell me why I knew it was too good to be true?
I don’t know what's goin on in my head,
let alone yours, now I’m feelin brain dead.
I want you to wanna talk to me,
I don’t care what about... just ANYTHING!
Can you tell me why I feel so upset?
Can you tell me that you have no regrets?
Can you tell me why I’m emotional,
Can you tell me anything at all?
Can you tell me what I’m doing it wrong?
Why is the day taking so long?
Form: Lyric

If You Tell Me You Love Me

If you tell me you love me...

Love me not for the color of my eyes,
But for the way they speak-

Love me not for my lips, not for my smile;
Love me for the all the things I smile for-

Love me not because I create art,
But because what I create is art to you-

Love me not because I deserve to be loved,
But because you can't help it...

I don't need to be loved...
But I need to be loved like something real.

What You Tell Me Fear

I am the ear peiece device
They attach when your hearing fails
I am both the coffin and the nails
Your scary bed time tales
Of night stars and prison bars
I am the bug that lairs inside your head
Scaring you from going to bed
I am you
And I am what you tell me
Because you drive me

When You Tell Me

When you call me beautiful
 
What does it mean?

What exactly do you see?
 
One is ever lasting
 
The other is passing
 
 
  
When you tell me you love me
  
What is its meaning?
 
What exactly are you feeling?
 
One is deep within your soul
 
The other is easy to be told

 

When you tell me forever

How long do you mean?
 
Where exactly will we be?
 
One is intertwined in happiness
 
The other is dwelled in loneliness
Form: Rhyme

If You Tell Me

If you tell me to go away, I won`t do that.
I won't listen to that nonsense.
And my feet won't obey your silly words.
If you tell me to shut up, I'll keep silent.
But I won't hear your curses.
It's not you who will speak but your pride.
If you tell me to forget you, I won't do that. 
I cannot forget the one who is in my blood,
The only one who possesses my heart,
The only one idiot who is able to make me happy.

Premium Member You Tell Me

Words sway
have you noticed?

Life is
pretty much what you make of it

Experience
now
there's where the rainbows and butterflies dwell longside
the spit and vomit.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

it's all stuff

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