Wonder Struck Poems | Examples


Fleeting sparks


On a vacation trip to the Susunia hills 
Green paddy fields smiling outside 
Trees happy in the robes of silk
Sun in the game of seek and hide

Quite a long pine standing in front 
Light green looks like in your eyes 
Great banyan tree from a deep bough
looking at me, in wonder-struck eyes 

Before our eyes the hills slowly move out 
narrating the stories of dense green curves 
In the sky graze the white lambs and cows 
In the branches, galore of whistling birds 

Fleeting sparks, from our petals and thorns 
Ephemeral light in the wings of herons

Premium Member My Perennial Garden

My perennial garden is peaceful and tranquil
A timeless place of beauty where calmness will instill 
Vibrant blooms emanate sweet and savory scents
No fake or synthetic wafts among the floral presents

Birds flutter and dip in the rustic metal bird baths
While chipmunks nibble and play along their tiny paths
Swirling garden spinners whisper in the light breeze
An illusion of flying spindles, adds a whimsical tease

The solar fountain is a balance of sounds and silence
As water trickles and flows and provides some reliance
Bees and dragonflies hover and then stop to take a drink
As butterflies flutter in vibrant wings of purple and pink

Asiatic lilies open their bright orange petals of luck
Their beauty instills feelings of awe and wonder struck 
Hummingbirds often visit the garden to stop and sip
Delicately feeding on phlox while wings flutter and zip

My perennial garden is a sacred and treasured place
Where nature is welcomed to visit and take up space


Rain

I hail rain 
In wintery nights 
When it showers 

And scented puffs of damp
 Cool breeze
from my orchard 
Strikes against my 
Cheeks

While I stand  in 
Corridor
Where 
Phantoms of the yester_ years
Awaits
All bathed in sleet

While autumnal leaves ships
Float 
And fall in yard 
And compose music 
On
Wind pipes
Telling ancient stories 
While earthen lamps flicker in casements
Thousands of hazy shadows
Of hopes and dreams 
 come muffled and
Enshrouded

I hail them all 
With leaden eyed

While in yard 
Clouds still shed tears
Lady of night stands  still 
drenched in tears 
Of clouds
And 
Puffs knocks the wooden doors 
Mysteriously
Moon will be somewhere
Behind the clouds
I think
That 
He must be mesmerized
By my earthen lamps
Flickering
In such a rainy night 
And thousands of
candles 
Flicker and shine
In
Wonder-struck 
Eyes
While soul hears
In ecstasy 
The soothing melodies

Of Gushing rain

I Stood Stupified

They told I had delivered a boy,
I was beside myself with joy.
I couldn't see it happening
just heard the sound of crying.

They showed my baby,
I was mesmerized, wonder struck!
How could this be inside me?
How humans get created out of sperm and egg?
And grow  within the body automatically?
How can a baby live in mother's body?
How does it know when to come out?
How does it come out through an opening so small?

Milk started coming out of my breast.
As I brought my son closer, he knew he had to suck!
Who taught him that?
How did the milk come all of a sudden?

My baby blinked his eyes, kicked his legs and cried,
A new motherly feeling surged within, 
a new being was born,
I watched enthralled, stupified!

Premium Member Awe With You

AWE WITH  YOU

I am amazed 
Filled with astonishment 
Surprised 
Filled with amazement 
   And I'm in awe with you
   Of all of the things you do
   I am  in awe with you, I am in awe with you

I'm astounded  startled 
Filled with wonder
Lost for words
Discomposed
None of this has to do with luck
Stunned thunderstruck 

   And I'm in awe with you
   Of all of the things you do
   I am  in awe with you, I am in awe with you

Unable to believe one's eyes and ears 
Wonder struck shaken up 
Taken aback flabbergasted
Dazed filled with awe
I was bewildered bemused
Flummoxed floored knocked for six 
Bowled over Lord God blown away 
Mercy me  I'm gobsmacked staggered
I'm in awe, in awe, in awe ahhhh... 
Lord God, I am  in awe with you

  And I'm in awe with you
   Of all of the things you do
   I am  in awe with you, I am in awe with you
 
3/21/18
   Written words by James Edward Lee Sr.©2018


Fearful

Fearful of taking the leap;
Fleeing an alleged stability
Wonder struck – can my devotion be so deep?
Resigned to a prevention of ability

Escape this captured state?
Scared of rejection
Cowering from the pain you may aggravate
Not understanding the complexion

Perchance I have been conditioned
To accept and commit;
Wronged into position
Ashamed at wanting to quit

I’ve taken the easy option
Remaining on a rocking vessel
Preceding with caution
Emotions all a wrestle

He blows hot and cold
Insulting words then beautiful flowers;
I know it’s wrong to be controlled
But charm empowers

I’m a ship aground;
A story untold
A pulling tide restrained to the sand
A flower unable to unfold

I’m a boat marooned;
You’re young and yet to settle
You’ve chosen a rose that cannot bloom -
a bird entangled in nettles

Flowers and Eyes

In you,I  see a garden, always giving pleasure and solace							
  And  your those dreamy eyes remind me of the most gorgeous flowers							
  Every time I gaze at them they sprinkle love-showers							
  I am in tears or I am in joy							
  They leave me mesmerized for hours and hours							
  Flowers have petals small and big,every one unique							
  Your eyes get colored in every feeling which leaves everybody wonder-struck							
  Deep down in your eyes there  lies an eternal honey							

  To taste it I am ready  to become a tender butterfly or a small bee

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