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Flowers and Eyes

In you,I see a garden, always giving pleasure and solace And your those dreamy eyes remind me of the most gorgeous flowers Every time I gaze at them they sprinkle love-showers I am in tears or I am in joy They leave me mesmerized for hours and hours Flowers have petals small and big,every one unique Your eyes get colored in every feeling which leaves everybody wonder-struck Deep down in your eyes there lies an eternal honey To taste it I am ready to become a tender butterfly or a small bee

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/7/2017 1:02:00 PM

Lovely and romantic, Anand. The eyes say it all...no need for words, except those of the author who is caught under their spell! Regards // paul

Anand Parmale
Date: 12/7/2017 7:49:00 PM

Thank you very much for pleasure of your visit and comments,Paul..Cool words lik these is what a writer expect from viewed..Thanks for such lovely mate ,Paul..

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 5/10/2017 11:07:00 AM

This one is very unique among all of your works. You did well in using metaphors and other figurative languages. This work is close to everyone's heart. :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2016 10:24:00 PM

this is SO sweet , Arnand. One of your best. a SEVEN

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/23/2016 3:03:00 PM

Ahhh lovely metaphor for those captivating eyes ... "I am ready to become a tender butterfly or a small bee" ... exquisite musing, Anand. Eyes have captured the human imagination for thousands of years, and yet still there is more to say about them ... great imagery.