Flowers and Eyes

In you,I  see a garden, always giving pleasure and solace							
  And  your those dreamy eyes remind me of the most gorgeous flowers							
  Every time I gaze at them they sprinkle love-showers							
  I am in tears or I am in joy							
  They leave me mesmerized for hours and hours							
  Flowers have petals small and big,every one unique							
  Your eyes get colored in every feeling which leaves everybody wonder-struck							
  Deep down in your eyes there  lies an eternal honey							

  To taste it I am ready  to become a tender butterfly or a small bee
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Callus Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 1:02 PM
Lovely and romantic, Anand. The eyes say it all...no need for words, except those of the author who is caught under their spell! Regards // paul
Parmale Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 7:49 PM
Thank you very much for pleasure of your visit and comments,Paul..Cool words lik these is what a writer expect from viewed..Thanks for such lovely mate ,Paul..
Selfa Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 11:07 AM
This one is very unique among all of your works. You did well in using metaphors and other figurative languages. This work is close to everyone's heart. :D
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 10:24 PM
this is SO sweet , Arnand. One of your best. a SEVEN
Hicks Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Ahhh lovely metaphor for those captivating eyes ... "I am ready to become a tender butterfly or a small bee" ... exquisite musing, Anand. Eyes have captured the human imagination for thousands of years, and yet still there is more to say about them ... great imagery.
Salehi Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Self-expression to the needy don't belong, benevolent love is the path for old and young... Nicely done. ..
Makama Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 1:08 PM
This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Ahh!! Very romantic..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
A   Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 12:16 AM
wow, Now that's putting yourself in the picture... I enjoyed. LINDA
Parmale Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Thank you for your pleasant and encouraging comments, Linda. Regards
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 3:37 PM
- A wonderful poem Anand, a lovely picture this gives me from your mind and heart - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
Parmale Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Thanks AL
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