Fleeting sparks


On a vacation trip to the Susunia hills 
Green paddy fields smiling outside 
Trees happy in the robes of silk
Sun in the game of seek and hide

Quite a long pine standing in front 
Light green looks like in your eyes 
Great banyan tree from a deep bough
looking at me, in wonder-struck eyes 

Before our eyes the hills slowly move out 
narrating the stories of dense green curves 
In the sky graze the white lambs and cows 
In the branches, galore of whistling birds 

Fleeting sparks, from our petals and thorns 
Ephemeral light in the wings of herons
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Agustin Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 5:39 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gupta Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 9:57 PM
Thank you so much. I am sorry for the belated response of mine.
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