Unsurprising Poems | Examples


Fibromyalgia

and then buzzing starts below skin
shocks shoot along veins

I hold my arm 
a different pain today

it buckles the knee 
grinds the shoulder
it burns the elbow
gnaws the hip

I rub my back
a deep breath and sigh 
ricochets ribcage-aches like children 
playing at pinball machines

another new pain today
another old pain tomorrow
the everywhere everyday unsurprising surprise

and a spasm grips within muscle

Premium Member Expectations

EXPECTATIONS
enjoying
compromises
  mildly
invigoratin
&
fizzing
the heady
brevity
 to replicate
feeling
without
intense
 resistance

riotous
explosiveness
  midst
the
relentless
contemplative
focus

atmosphere
 is all
ambiance
unceasing
unsurprising
 in
 moments
of tranquillity
albeit
of a somewhat
incoherent
hue

a
living
 etching
obscured
 by shading

so
precise
&
poignant
subtle
&searching
is strangely
inanimate
 among
the variegated
 exaggerations

pleasing
freedoms
nevertheless
&
with
prolific
 energy
  against
all the odds

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand


22

I’ve lost all my faith

Meeting people who were double-faced

Who caring nothing, except their money

Even if I’m simple and naive

Love leads me to believe

That everyone will find the land of milk and honey


I’m 22 years old

Seems that I’m already big girl

But I’m so far from realizing

If I did wrong or right

I can’t see the final light

My future seems so unsurprising

 

surprising

 

I wanted to know

Who I was, who I am

But I’m afraid of what I’ve become

Mistakes, fails and falls

Like scars on my heart

They prove nothing new

Under the sun

 

Almost lost all my faith

But I’ve met people who ain’t double-faced

Who caring ‘bout me, forgetting ‘bout money

They helped my dreams, they are my stars

I’ve found the land of milk and honey

Astonishing That We Should Live At All

To fulminate against the hands of fate
To vent our anger on  beloved friends
Will not repair our ills and our mistakes
But may bring friendships to  a bitter end.

For who are we to know what is the best?
Who are we to choose when loved ones die?
And  do not think this is a needed test.
As if on us God wastes his time to spy.

Once  we were a joining of two cells
The lively sperm, a salmon riding high.
The egg awaiting without  need for bells
Is fertilised and grows that which  shall die.

Astonishing that we should live at all.
Unsurprising, that a loved one falls.

Tears With Vince

Gone
Like I meant nothing
two years of nothing
unsurprising really
I always knew I loved more

Heart breaking
I keep it together
allowing only private tears
so family and friends 
remain unconcerned

They never knew 
exactly how much 
I loved you
We loved our way
away from them

Another break
we’d had several
and always fixed it 
but not this time
this time you left

Outwardly I smiled
went places with friends
Danced, sang
but inside I crumbled
My joy was gone

Living on hold
loving long distance
waiting for the call
a connection to prove
I was not forgotten

Friends assumed
I was good
ready to move on
They never knew
Until Vince sang his song

Right there
in front of them 
welling in silently
as the dam cracked
and then flooded

Love and Loneliness
flowed from cracks
and proved the song true
“I never knew lonely
‘til you”

Song: I Never Knew Lonely by Vince Gill
Heartbreak circa 1992


Premium Member Humor's Rumored Tumescence

Seems like good humor grows positive, 
healthy
resonant
confluent
sometimes co-invested
passionate consciousness

And bad humor grows negative,
unhealthy,
dissonant
contentious
dispassionate unconsciousness

So, maybe compassionate consciousness grows 
global intelligence.

And, perhaps shared intelligence could grow 
universally cooperative 
sacred unitarian integrity,
co-passionate joy
commingling health and beauty,
co-invested peace,
wise therapeutic humor,
amusing comprehension.

Wouldn't it be unsurprising if love's omnipotent comprehension
feeds good humor,
feels healthy,
breeds universally wise 
and unitarian wealthy,
trauma-free compassion?

Tiny Kisses

Silver threads amongst the gold
They have  a story to be told

Of balmy nights and satin sheets
Of hands a touching and kissing feet

Lying in a bed of flowers
Steamy fun under the shower

Legs entwined tongues on fire
Nerve ends found more explosions sired

Hormones racing,  bodies writhing
Exploding together thats unsurprising

Lying close body well seeded
Touching his manhood , more needed

Bodies not satiated  need more loving
Need to shout out name whilst groping

Tiny kisses oh so sensual
Our lovemaking is not conventional.    

Love to love, to want to give
To have to hold as long as we live

Older now but loving still able
Even If it's just footsie under the table


16/2/2013

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