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22

I’ve lost all my faith

Meeting people who were double-faced

Who caring nothing, except their money

Even if I’m simple and naive

Love leads me to believe

That everyone will find the land of milk and honey


I’m 22 years old

Seems that I’m already big girl

But I’m so far from realizing

If I did wrong or right

I can’t see the final light

My future seems so unsurprising

 

surprising

 

I wanted to know

Who I was, who I am

But I’m afraid of what I’ve become

Mistakes, fails and falls

Like scars on my heart

They prove nothing new

Under the sun

 

Almost lost all my faith

But I’ve met people who ain’t double-faced

Who caring ‘bout me, forgetting ‘bout money

They helped my dreams, they are my stars

I’ve found the land of milk and honey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/25/2018 8:20:00 AM
I like this one Alisa. You are quite wise for 22!
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 2/25/2018 10:31:00 AM
Hey James) Thanks for nice words. I wish I could be wiser, but that's impossible: D However, this poem is a part of my self- identity.I'm proud of this work.

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