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EXPECTATIONS enjoying compromises   mildly invigoratin & fizzing the heady brevity  to replicate feeling without intense  resistance riotous explosiveness   midst the relentless contemplative focus atmosphere  is all ambiance unceasing unsurprising  in  moments of tranquillity albeit of a somewhat incoherent hue a living  etching obscured  by shading so precise & poignant subtle &searching is strangely inanimate  among the variegated  exaggerations pleasing freedoms nevertheless & with prolific  energy   against all the odds NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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