Expectations
EXPECTATIONS
enjoying
compromises
mildly
invigoratin
&
fizzing
the heady
brevity
to replicate
feeling
without
intense
resistance
riotous
explosiveness
midst
the
relentless
contemplative
focus
atmosphere
is all
ambiance
unceasing
unsurprising
in
moments
of tranquillity
albeit
of a somewhat
incoherent
hue
a
living
etching
obscured
by shading
so
precise
&
poignant
subtle
&searching
is strangely
inanimate
among
the variegated
exaggerations
pleasing
freedoms
nevertheless
&
with
prolific
energy
against
all the odds
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
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