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Reflections of a Sour Drop - SK

A white tear bled from the foil seam,
a cold, lactic rot sliding down her woven leather heel,
drawing a pale, sour map across her instep.
I watched the porcelain skin of her shoe drink the milk,
and in that quiet curdling, my entire small frame snapped.

A choir of jagged iron shrieked beneath my skull,
tearing through the bone and behind my eyes:
a ruined child deserves no sun.

I did not wait for any reflex. 
I dragged myself by the throat, 
spat curses into my own ears, 
and ran.

I bolted past the garden gate, 
past the tall, unbothered grass,
my bare feet slapping the dirt in a rhythm of
self - contempt and fault.

In the damp dark behind the compost heap,
I pressed my face into the stinging nettles,
scraping my knees against the jagged limestone,
offering my own raw, bleeding shins to the air
to pay the debt for what I had done

praying the earth would swallow the wretched thing I was.

Premium Member Sour Grapes

In the never ending dream I keep walking
Through the insufficient scheme I keep talking
It’s a crying shame, still not quite enough 
You may call it lame, call it boring stuff
In the morning street on a shady sidewalk 
I move on whispering inner monologue 
Wouldn’t be surprised if you do the same
We’ve got something to alter this lose-lose game
In the fading dream, that doesn’t fade too much 
There’s a hidden door, that I can’t unlatch 
But I tend to suspect it’s an exit door 
Must be cold outside, colder than before
So this narrow passage leads to square I know
And I’m welcomed in again, where I used to go 
And the waiter turns up with a tray of grapes
Offering a complimentary aftertaste.

Premium Member Lemony Taffy and Sour Kisses


Lemonade flows
  fluted fountain 
    diamond rivers 
gentle rainy sprinkles
          honey 
sweet or sour kisses
   dew faeries dancing
      opus romance
coveted rose essence
   open window
      summer breeze
        memories
lemony taffy 
   scented peppermint
      sour kisses.


Our Sweet-Sour Hour

Tamarind Candy to Eat
By: Feb Francisca Chaves 

In my loneliness heart of our night,
I closed the curtain and blown off the candle light,
Then I stared at the glance of the sky.
As they watching twinkling like a wink of an eye.
As a look up far in the balcony at the pearly moon,
We share our first night of our consummation.
He pull me closer through his arms tightly and I riding me up as moaned.
We making love and I have no shame of it.
He serve me a Tamarind candy to eat.
And we kept doing it as I aroused until the clock of eight.
I want this to stop but he keep clapping on to the top.
He made me calm by brushing my cave and dig a mine.
After that we wrap ourselves a blanket in the bed — sleep.
And rest my head and close my eyes to keep.

Premium Member Spring

spring buds bloom on every bough
green life wakes within the now
dark mold creeps across the wall
rotting fruit/ sours it all.

Sour-Sour Sweet Sweet

I want to sing something
relevant
Sing what I tell you to sing
do as I say
do as I say!........

oh winters postlude
the winds the trees
the toppled and twisted branches
oh to have a warm day
----------------------------------
Do your thang
just keep me in mind
I do the same for you
that's just being sweet and kind
scratch my back
I'll gladly scratch yours's
what's a man suposse to do
it's what ah man supposse to do
you my freind and lover
we still chill and carry-on
got ah good thang witcha
like what we got going on
es and snitches
often try to mess up
we stick together
my sweet Alguien
when things get tuff
full respect darling
see what I'm saying
What gotta good thang here



Yes, burrowing clams help make natural gas, specifically methane (
), by fostering the production of the gas in marine sediments


I'm in love
and you know I aint playing


Horribleness

If only fate could allow me death ,
I could forever be grateful,
If only destiny would cut me loose ,
I wouldn't wonder again.

If only death was a stone throw away ,
I could pay a visit without turmoil,
If only I had known ,
I would have never existed!


I dance with flames ,
I sing with claims,
So  big you become a venture ,
A truth sorted beyond reach .


Come to me gentle love ,
Come to dear hope ,
Kiss me not so long ,
Death I wish for ,you are my sunshine.


If only tears would let me see ,
If only guilt would let me act ,
If only the past would let me live ,
I would be with you dear death .

Tell me a soothing warning,
Shout at me a command to follow ,
I can't leave kissing ashes without that fire ,
Burn away the tiring joy .


Is it not tears I look forward to ?
Death,is it not the burning I long for ?
Is it not the curse I want ?


Take pride in my torture,
My body is a template ,
A canvas written with a bleeding scalpel,
Kill me but let me fall onto your hands .

24 Sour Tweet

24.

Sour Tweet



Aloft where challenging gray sheet & proud minds meet

Silence envelops air but robins hum so sweet

In seats all uniformed seem petrified

Mr. Serious conquered everyone's pride

“Til lonesome breaks by non-bird, human farts sour tweet.



-01/12/2007

(Dumarao)

*Topsy-Turvy Limerick Ironic

Not grapes, sour seem ways to mend

Vaults of wealth, goodwill
Grabbed fistful, spill o'er like sand. 
No one's worried still.
Sweeter are found fruits in hand,
And sour, higher up to fend.

Mocks a mocking bird:
Not grapes, sour seem ways to mend,
Change ere sour turns curd.
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Tanka (Senryu) | 08.11.2025 | bird, change, fruits, goodwill, wealth
Note: Wealth and goodwill when invested and nurtured would yield well. But man’s first instinct is to grab like a miser. For, grapes are sour if too high to fetch. A mockingbird mocks in this Tanka.

Sour capuccino

The capuccino is sour
The cigarette does not feel good
The day feeld a series of repeated tasks
Boring
What I am lazy to do
It is a rainy november day
And I lack motivation
Put me to sleep.

Premium Member Le Tour turns sour

Final leg, still a chance
Focused, head down
Pain
Energy fading
A foot slip
Concentration meets exhaustion
Pedalling harder, slowing down
Quick look down
Something is wrong
I swear
I stop
No other way

A broken chain did end false, grand hopes
I jolt, knees lock, my nerves, open panic
Quietly raging, steward turns up, voices warn
Xanthopsia, yellow zephyr

Wheels flash passed
Peloton already distant
Stragglers stare
Endgame
Consoled by crowd
Devastated
Punctured dreams

I India

Once I was trapped just as a pet, 
And let them do what they set. 
Some people call me dirtiest place, 
They do not know about the race. 
Race of development, race of grace, 
Race of making a perfect face. 
I got freedom years before, 
Yet not properly - the truth is sour. 
A day I will reach so high, 
And thus I will keep to try.

Premium Member Dreams Turn Sour

     Princess
     does not
     meet prince,
     never
     happy
     ever
     after

     Perhaps
     a frog
     is kissed,
     perhaps
     a fool
     with his
     laughter.

     Ruby
     slippers
     cannot
     take you 
     home sweet
     home; dreams
     turn sour.

     The hour
     getting
     late, late!
     Shelter 
     now in 
     your strong 
     tower.

Premium Member The Archive for Sour Sorrows

In the vault of sorrows, the lights are dim,
Memories dangle stiff, stark, cold and grim.
In glass-fronted vaults of remains half-dead,
Haunting to avenge losses, regrets and dread.

Bitterness is grit, dust and rust—
Metal relics wrapped in tempered crust.
Too sharp to hold, too old to appeal,
Scars embalmed, behind bars of steel.

Fur skins and feathered bones, long dead.
Eyes once bright, are now glass instead.
Stuffed with pride, stitched in despair,
They rage within riles, gasping for air.

Old garments show arguments, long of old,
With threadbare cuffs, and buttons of gold.
They're sour of fit, and hung too tight,
To ever again leave shadows in bright sunlight.

Such bitterness belongs in museum displays.
Where you can visit it on sad, rainy rue days.
To see such hateful feeling-disheveled, dismembered.
Covered in dust, to be forgotten, not remembered.

Lock it up, behind the glass, don’t let it breathe,
Bitterness will bloom, when we fail to believe.
It should be kept under lock and key.
Where all such sour sorrows, are meant to be.

Meant to be, Meant to be-!
That's the key, That's the key!

WHEN SWEET TURNS SOUR

It hits the tongue without warning
Burns the throat where it once soothed
Makes breathing feel like drowning
You gasp but nothing moves.

Like love
When it shifts without a sign
Leaves two hearts beating strangely
Out of sync & out of time.

The light that once felt certain
Starts to flicker & then to fade
And every step you take alone
Feels colder than the shade.

When a heart slips out of reach
Memories build what truth can’t cross
A bridge that leads to nowhere
Not quite on path, not yet lost.

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