Short Revised Poems

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When Dying

(revised to exclude question mark)

some pray – but die
others recover. . .
is our death day destined

October 21, 2019
Categories: revised, death,
Form: Questionku


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Winter Mounds

tumbling quietness
as soft snow slips off branches
pillows under stars












Haiku revised: January 24, 2021
Categories: revised, beauty, environment, snow, winter,
Form: Haiku

My Half - Revised Haiku

Without one, I'm lost
Troublemaker and savior
Mine, sincerely yours
Carrying you day and night,
Rest assured it won't wear out
Categories: revised, devotion, love, true love, trust,
Form: Tanka

Mistletoes Revised

M- Momentarily
I- Intertwined
S- Silently
T- Thinking
L- Lucky
E- Evermore
T- Tradition
O- Ordinarily
E- Eluded
S- Serendipity
Categories: revised, christmas,
Form: Acrostic
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It Was the Next October, Revised

you wonder why
the train came fast
for my past is forever black
i board the train
it was the next october
when i actually felt the rain...
Categories: revised, life, nature, time,
Form: Free verse


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Fading Day

sunset's bright sky show
red swathe, big Broadway splashy
night's rise, second act














Haiku revised: January 27, 2021
Categories: revised, appreciation, light, nature, sky, sun, sunset,
Form: Haiku
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Grant Me Compassion

Cover me please,
with reverent grace
at others’ losses
and allay their pain as well.

I am not the only one.

©Kathryn McL. Collins
revised
Categories: revised, emotions,
Form: I do not know?
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Flourish

blooms burst, spire vigor
saucy hues, earth's momentum
lemon sun, ruthless














Composed June 25, 2020 (revised July 23, 2020)
Categories: revised, flower, money, nature, summer, sun,
Form: Haiku
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One For the Poets--Just Revised

Words we write sometimes do matter: 
"Each candidate's like a mad hatter"
So please Trump and Hill
Take a suicide pill
We dislike the former and latter!
Categories: revised, heartbreak, life, poetry, poets, word play, work,
Form: Limerick

Fiddling the Books

A sly violinist named Max
In ethical finance was lax.
He pulled all the strings
To gloss over things
And fiddled his end of year tax!


revised 18.04.21
Categories: revised, funny,
Form: Limerick
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poetry of dance

They moved to a rhythm
of their own choosing
Their story shared by no other
A love story revised over time
In lovely ways others could never hope to understand
Categories: revised, dance,
Form: Free verse
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poetry of dance

They moved to a rhythm
of their own choosing
Their story shared by no other
A love story revised over time
In lovely ways others could never hope to understand
Categories: revised, dance,
Form: Free verse

Moonrise

The moon rises shy...                  
A fat honeyed egg climbing
From a nest of trees                  


 June 11, 2018--
revised October 11, 2019
Categories: revised, allegory, eve, moon, nature, sky,
Form: Haiku

Rain

Rain gently falling
            Making soft sounding music 
        On my window pane 
                        
      
Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Revised
Categories: revised, rain,
Form: Haiku
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New and Improved

Our crumpled thoughts don't leave for good - They saturate and brew, Emerging back just when they should. Revised, they feel like new. January 14, 2021
Categories: revised, time,
Form: Quatrain

Added Words,Reversed,Revised

Twisted words
Far from the truth
Spreading like wildfire
Quiet, non replying
Enemy in disguise
Truth shall stand
All other words revised
Judged in the Promise Land.
Categories: revised, day, future, judgement,
Form: Free verse
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Out of Focus (Revised)

In
the sky
dreams fade out,
as ambitions
die


Revised ekphrasis of Hollywood by Ed Rischa to complement my blog

http://www.artnet.com/artist/553156/ed-ruscha.html
Categories: revised, art, places
Form: Ekphrasis

Who's the Boss - Revised

Who is the Boss - Same old song?

I'll yield since you're very headstrong

        It'll be quite a blow

        But just so you know

It'll end in us both being wrong!
Categories: revised, funny,
Form: Limerick
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We the Sheep...Revised

You found a way to dismiss us, didn't you
Thought "we the people" really had no clue
The laws that congress passes
Apply only to the masses
May November find you feeling blue
Categories: revised, funny, life
Form: Limerick

War For the Sake of War [revised]

The infamy of war itself, whether in sacrificial victory or gloom defeat of story
Eventually determines who await cast of bronze
Eternally posed, for it's own never ending glory
Categories: revised, introspection, visionary, war,
Form: I do not know?

Shadow

Walk-in, out
a sign, a time
thine own
renewed
thy new strength
revised
compromised
analyzed
appreciated
the direction of a choice
new day, new way
new identity
shadow.
Categories: revised, journey, new year,
Form: Free verse

Shattered Dreams

With reluctance the call she received
Though she had not perceived
That the call could have her forever changed
Perceptions and expectations revised
As the message she received
Categories: revised, betrayal, emotions, heartbroken,
Form: Limerick
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Blizzard In the Himalayas -- Revised

The wind howls across
Heavy snow buries the world
and then deep silence

I liked this better:

screeching wind, death sings
heavy snow buries, survive
a deep silence mourns
Categories: revised, adventure, hope, mountains, peace, storm, weather, winter,
Form: Haiku

Pig Latin Revised

Oday ouyay owknay igpay atinlay?
Ethay irlgay oreway away essdray ofway atinsay.
Away ongsay ofway ovelay eshay angsay osay eetsway,
Idday ouyay enjoyway isthay ittlelay eattray?
Categories: revised, funny,
Form: Narrative
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2024 TiNmAn-

wooden people Plastic hearts Metal feet Aluminum socks It's... the Tin man revised
8/18/24 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr 2024
Categories: revised, adventure, allusion, character, image, myth,
Form: Free verse
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