Winter Mounds

tumbling quietness as soft snow slips off branches pillows under stars Haiku revised: January 24, 2021

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David Kavanagh

Date: 1/14/2021 8:58:00 AM

Heya Brian, very disappointing this little beauty got an N/A, can be very disheartening, but not at all surprising, the contests are a peculiarity in their own right on the soup, cheers David

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/14/2021 9:07:00 AM

Hi David, Thanks for your message + encouragement. You are quite right - there is no figuring out the thumbs up or down of Souper contests. But I write on. Thoughtful of you to comment. Best wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/2/2021 3:26:00 AM

Ahh!! I like this one. It would be a cold nap one would have on those pillow though. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/2/2021 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Sara. Appreciate your comment though my Haiku received an NA in contests. Be well. Cheers, Brian