Winter Mounds

tumbling quietness
as soft snow slips off branches
pillows under stars












Haiku revised: January 24, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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January 14, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Heya Brian, very disappointing this little beauty got an N/A, can be very disheartening, but not at all surprising, the contests are a peculiarity in their own right on the soup, cheers David
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January 14, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Hi David, Thanks for your message + encouragement. You are quite right - there is no figuring out the thumbs up or down of Souper contests. But I write on. Thoughtful of you to comment. Best wishes, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:26 AM
Ahh!! I like this one. It would be a cold nap one would have on those pillow though. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Sara. Appreciate your comment though my Haiku received an NA in contests. Be well. Cheers, Brian
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