Fading Day

sunset's bright sky show
red swathe, big Broadway splashy
night's rise, second act














Haiku revised: January 27, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 2:53 AM
Creative work. A descriptive way of seeing a sunset. Thanks for your visits. Sara
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July 18, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Thank you, Sara, for dropping by + leaving a supportive comment. Much appreciated, Brian
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