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Rain

Rain gently falling
            Making soft sounding music 
        On my window pane 
                        
      
Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Revised

Copyright © Lunita Blanca | Year Posted 2018

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February 6, 2018 at 10:41 PM

A relaxing write!

February 22, 2018 at 9:13 AM

Thanks Kim

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

February 6, 2018 at 8:59 PM

A very gentle poem, a very peaceful poem. Perhaps an essence of the feelings of the writer at time of writing.

February 6, 2018 at 9:43 PM

My friend, you are a wise individual.

February 6, 2018 at 7:26 PM

such a soft poem Carlos, beautiful

February 6, 2018 at 9:44 PM

You are very kind Lewis. Thanks.

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