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Rain gently falling Making soft sounding music On my window pane Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Revised

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Date: 2/6/2018 10:41:00 PM
A relaxing write!
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/22/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Kim
Date: 2/6/2018 8:59:00 PM
A very gentle poem, a very peaceful poem. Perhaps an essence of the feelings of the writer at time of writing.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/6/2018 9:43:00 PM
My friend, you are a wise individual.
Date: 2/6/2018 7:26:00 PM
such a soft poem Carlos, beautiful
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/6/2018 9:44:00 PM
You are very kind Lewis. Thanks.

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