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New and Improved

Our crumpled thoughts don't leave for good - They saturate and brew, Emerging back just when they should. Revised, they feel like new. January 14, 2021

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John Lawless

Date: 1/17/2021 10:18:00 AM

If as they say "Brevity is the soul of wit" then you have mastered it. Well done Margarita and thanks for participating in the contest

Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/18/2021 3:43:00 PM

Thank you! And for the "wit" :) M.

John Gondolf

Date: 1/14/2021 12:04:00 PM

I have been revising some of my crumpled thoughts lately to see if they can emerge as beautiful poetry. Nicely penned, Maggie. Hugs.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/14/2021 2:37:00 PM

And they do emerge:) M.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/14/2021 10:29:00 AM

This quatrain is a delight Margarita.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/14/2021 2:38:00 PM

THX :)