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Margarita Lillico

New and Improved

 Our crumpled thoughts don't leave for good -
They saturate and brew,
Emerging back just when they should.
Revised, they feel like new.

January 14, 2021

Copyright © Margarita Lillico | Year Posted 2021

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January 17, 2021 at 10:18 AM

If as they say "Brevity is the soul of wit" then you have mastered it. Well done Margarita and thanks for participating in the contest

Margarita Lillico

January 18, 2021 at 3:43 PM

Thank you! And for the "wit" :) M.

January 14, 2021 at 12:04 PM

I have been revising some of my crumpled thoughts lately to see if they can emerge as beautiful poetry. Nicely penned, Maggie. Hugs.

Margarita Lillico

January 14, 2021 at 2:37 PM

And they do emerge:) M.

Caren Krutsinger

January 14, 2021 at 10:29 AM

This quatrain is a delight Margarita.

Margarita Lillico

January 14, 2021 at 2:38 PM

THX :)

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