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Premium Member Rewritten Chemo, Puberty and the Fourth Watch
Chemo, Puberty & the Fourth Watch by Patrick Cornwall Wake up—rush for the toilet, say my prayers. Stomach races, chasing bowels, anxious like horses shot from a gate. Chemo, the man said. Takes time to get used to. And I’ll ring you. I take a shower. Just trying to rinse the sick away. Ready for the day. The sun leads me out— then gas...

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Categories: rewritten, death, devotion,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Rum n Raisin 17 - Bird Talk :Rewritten:
Rum got to his feet and said, “Let’s go play in the street.” Raisin said, “I’m up for that; some fresh air would be neat.” They were soon outside and heard a sound… FLAP FLAP… THUD… TWEET What a shock it was to find a young bird at their feet A scruffy ball of feathers that could clearly not...

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Categories: rewritten, bird, cat,
Form: Narrative



Premium Member In the temple of silence, where the past awaits to be rewritten
In the temple of silence, where the past awaits to be rewritten, I wrap my longing in the mantle of night, searching for the lost ring of destiny, That sacred symbol, forged in the shadow of agate forests, Its color, a gateway to the depths where green meets the night. I dared to...

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Categories: rewritten, fantasy,
Form: Free verse
I'm Sorry: Rewritten
I’m sorry… I’m not perfect, Yet you expect me to be. I mess up. I make mistakes. But I don’t care. I’m sorry you hate me For how much I have changed. It’s a direct result Of the consequences of your actions. The repercussions of the pain you’ve caused me. Also, I lied. I do care. Sorry I let you get to me. I never uttered my...

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Categories: rewritten, emotions, fear, feelings, friend,
Form: Free verse
Ascension Rewritten
Ascension I walked on the vast plateau the everlasting wind of time had blown away, the sand exposed millions of skeletons and the memory of man wench the brain was walnut-sized. The brain is larger now, filled with images of *********** and wars on many fronts. I came to an oasis I must drink or explode into atoms but the water...

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Categories: rewritten, blessing, books,
Form: Blank verse



Premium Member Grief Passages Rewritten
Grief Passages Rewritten Shards of shame lay splintered in unresolved pieces ~ Bits of crystal if only intentions not repairable Minutes of I wish regret unreachable, not revived ~ Lifeless echoes sighing with no resuscitation In a whirlwind tornados uproot shallow graves ~ Screams at the unknowable why unanswered Yeah but excuses expletives and bargains with denial ~ Blank...

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Categories: rewritten, grief,
Form: Verse
Hearts Rewritten
. for public domain Love stories on our hearts rewritten, imbued on parchment of those we've smitten where whose love was laid to ruin and waste, fibers with woeful letters erased again and again, thin the paper, til none remains to print one more story....

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Categories: rewritten, love,
Form: Free verse
Oh, God Expand My Narrow, Cluttered Room Rewritten
Oh God, expand my narrow, cluttered, room! And clear the clutter out, so I may see! And still my Seas, as You did, Galilee! Life threatens to collapse in, with a Boom! Like Aspen, that arise after a fire, Or ground-cover that sprouts from ash and dust Or sweet alyssum permeates the must About the room, through window of desire, So, pray I,...

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Categories: rewritten, angst, christian, god, hope,
Form: Enclosed Rhyme
Premium Member Eternal Sadness Rewritten
It shouted to him from the rooftops and he was prepared to jump ‘Go out with a deafening bang’ for the bell had told crashing demise Sadness and bitter oblivion pointed the way from screaming nowhere Yet deadening cacophony arrested his mind in utter procrastination A once melodious mind in waiting struck in a terminal station The oncoming train roared...

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Categories: rewritten, depression, encouraging,
Form: Free verse
Nobody Rewritten
I was always told as a child I had a lucky face. A bone structure that resembled somebody famous. ‘There’s something about you kid, you’re different,’ they said. ‘I don’t know what it is but you’re different.’ I was force fed this ******** Until it oozed out of me from every pore. The stench of it Worse than a French whore. And now...

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Categories: rewritten, depression, loneliness, sorrow,
Form: Dramatic Monologue
You'Re Loosing You Rewritten
Soul's mirrors and mind's study are the eyes, and the verdict is clear, wild animals cave in the hollows of your mind, herds, escorting your thoughts and opening your eyes wide, front window to a spacy mind's fantasies, and easy smiles drawn, as thorny roses pricking your fingers, you're hurt. Call it gathering of the herds, or.... the others...

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Categories: rewritten, anxiety, sympathy,
Form: Prose Poetry
Premium Member Images In Sophisticated Colors - Rewritten, Have Another Go
In early morning light I wheel myself outdoors. The vibrating air lively with small dancing aphids. In distance near, that booming sound of crashing waves against the sand, waves with their perpetual wish to walk the shore. Waves, so powerful, so strong yet so dumb, a caged animal wanting to escape. I want to escape...

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Categories: rewritten, beach, dance, health, sea,
Form: Haibun
A Bucket List Rewritten
To climb a mountain, but I ran out of steam Sat down on a boulder to wait for the team To learn to ski, but that did not go well Cracked my tail bone when down I fell To learn to dance, in my youth t’was grand Now with bad feet I am lucky to stand Think I'll make a new...

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Categories: rewritten, humorous, poetry,
Form: Rhyme
Rewritten Rusted
No more gleam, no more shine, not once Once I rolled the production line Llnes busted and broken, no more sublime Sublime when rolling the production line Line producing joy and glee Glee in the past, no one loves me, no No one loves me, each day I pine Pine for the days of the production line Line when I was neat and...

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Categories: rewritten, betrayal,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Rewritten
I measured my words carefully Sweet verses I wanted you to drink To help you escape your misery A new beginning awash in pink Tears in your eyes, I watched you blink A slight smile a knowing look I witnessed how your shoulders shook Your sadness was breaking away Rewritten pages in your book Colored words a brand new day Inspired by Dr. Ram Mehta...

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Categories: rewritten, abuse, blue, change,
Form: Dizain

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