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[Verse 1] I’ve seen you sitting there, you've been here before, Always leave me wanting, restless for more. But never quite like this—lamp glow on your face, You must be from Heaven, not of this place. [Pre-Chorus] I come here to write, to chase down the muse, But now all my words are getting lost in you. [Chorus] Lines in the moonlight, dancing on your skin, Pulling me closer, don’t know where you end or I begin. You smile like a secret, a spark I can't define, I thought I came to write— But darling, you just rewrote mine. [Verse 2] You asked if I’d share, said “let’s trade a few dreams,” Your voice soft as verses in unwritten themes. You opened your journal, I leaned in slow, Two souls tracing stories the stars used to know. [Pre-Chorus] The night wrapped around us, so quiet, so still, I reached for your hand, and time stood still. [Chorus] Lines in the moonlight, dancing on your skin, Pulling me closer, don’t know where you end or I begin. You smile like a secret, a spark I can't define, I thought I came to write— But darling, you just rewrote mine. [Bridge] Every heartbeat echoes, like a whispered song, In this moment with you, I finally belong. With every word you share, you paint a new scene, Life feels like a canvas, vibrant and serene. [Chorus] Lines in the moonlight, dancing on your skin, Pulling me closer, don’t know where you end or I begin. You smile like a secret, a spark I can't define, I thought I came to write— But darling, you just rewrote mine. [Outro] So let’s fill the pages till the sun starts to rise, With stories and laughter, just you and I. In the glow of that lamp, I found more than a muse, You’re the song in my heart, a love I won’t lose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/16/2018 6:33:00 PM
I love the night sky as much as I love the early dawn..You make the night so special and the sky so beautiful with your lyrics.I don't know if I'm back for good over here on ps..But you should never leave here again..because you were born to share your poetry..or May I say..your musical voice through words..Nice to read you again..I'm enjoying it.
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Date: 7/12/2018 6:12:00 PM
"But never on a night sky lamp's glow on your face You must be from Heaven not of this place" I LOVE THIS! Great Job!
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Date: 7/11/2018 12:58:00 PM
Very simple yet magically lyrical. A dance for the eyes as they read.
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Date: 7/11/2018 1:32:00 AM
A nice write inspiration wears many coats and is stirred by the blessings of nature in all her naked splendour well done Tim
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Date: 7/10/2018 12:44:00 PM
Yes indeed. I am so glad we moved out here in the country away from the luminous urban nights. Ah, my eyes just love the taste of the celestial night! Enjoyed this shared share. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.
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Date: 7/10/2018 5:07:00 AM
Love the sky too! The night sky is so intriguing. Thanks for this one, truly enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/2/2018 11:39:00 PM
G'day Lyric Man … another nice compact set of entertaining lyrics. You're good at this - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 6/30/2018 8:19:00 PM
I love the night sky, it is full of wonder and possibilities. You have put it beautifully in lyrics. I can see why it is a favorite of yours.
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Date: 6/4/2018 10:47:00 AM
This is so lovely and beautiful!!
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