Eternal Sadness Rewritten

It shouted to him from the rooftops and he was prepared to jump

‘Go out with a deafening bang’ for the bell had told crashing demise

Sadness and bitter oblivion pointed the way from screaming nowhere

Yet deadening cacophony arrested his mind in utter procrastination


A once melodious mind in waiting struck in a terminal station


The oncoming train roared ‘Mind the Gap’ crescendo and coda

Head splitting clatter on destiny’s track voiced harmony’s void

Morose and moribund Tim listened to his shattering epitaph

Yet he was ahead of his time as agonising apathy saved him


A once razor-sharp compassionate soul turned from incision


He was dispossessed by devilish applause and a three-pronged fork 

Of garish Past mute Present and the poison of silenced Future’s voice

He did not own a gun but a scalpel would surely sound the final note

Yet ice water in his veins froze hell of clamorous festering heat


A once rapturous Self in retreat composed nothingness’ chimes


The oven blasted ‘I am your fervent friend and companion’

One strike from his lighter would ignite endmost explosion

His thumb on the spark wheel in limbo only messaged the rafter

Yet he writhed his creaking neck and switched of gas’ soothing


A once euphonious life snapped mistuned detonation and creaked


The rafters engulfed by inhibited silence noted the stand off

Wood wormed instruments wound misaligned imagination

One more loop while crescendo joined fortissimos’ claim

Yet the rope snapped and weeping guitar strings whimpered


Once upon a time Tim surged again and danced to his drums


Birds started chirping

Flowers erupted

A rainbow appeared

Violins bowed 

Chanting bowls rang

Play mates gathered

The moon turned the tide

The solar eclipse had passed

The sound of earth span again


Tim would not change his depression for any sweet lullaby

It taught him everything he needs to know about life’s balance

Love Kindness Compassion set to temperate omniscient Peace 

The drama nestles in rapped poems wrapped in experience


And the scythe of the hangman can croak his own blades



(Poem inspired by Dorothy Parker’s ‘Resume’)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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