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Retakes Poems - Poems about Retakes

Cinquain

...I might prefer time to alter my line,
Ends up replacing ofences against good takes.
That aims perfection to surplus my present,
Merrily got up as a cause to those opted processes,
And now I am wh...
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Categories: retakes, anxiety, career, change, confidence,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberDelphic

...Title 1

"The forest is my loyal friend A Delphic shrine to me." ... by Ralph Waldo Emerson

The written word bears roots abound
Hail favored mist of hallowed ground
Announced ...
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Categories: retakes, appreciation, beautiful, caregiving, creation,
Form: Rhyme



Premium MemberFly by

...Who am I 
To seek to fly
Touching the sky
Left life behind
For peace of mind
Wondering
Blundering
Making my share of mistakes
In my mind living the retakes
Hard I have I tried
Lord knows I ...
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Categories: retakes, confidence, creation, humanity,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberA Big Affair

...“You don’t indulge in much self-reflection, do you?” Peter asked me.
“Are you asking about that time in Reno I shot a man just to watch him die?” I answered.


A poem from a friend (by Peter)...
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Categories: retakes, boyfriend, humor, poems, school,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberInevitability

...Inevitability 
David J Walker

This is how I turned 20 
With plenty of time left to 
Opine its wastings awaiting 
The sun to set
	The weekend to come 
Christmas 
	Birthdays 
		Summer vacati...
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Categories: retakes, allegory, life,
Form: Free verse



Premium MemberPraying For Reincarnation

...Praying for Reincarnation
David J Walker

David is someone else and
I am merely playing his part
Memorizing then repeating 
His lines 
	That I would never say
Stumbling over mistakes 
Beggin...
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Categories: retakes, allegory, life,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberBeryl the Peril

...My auntie her first name is Beryl
Put other road users in peril
She mounted the sidewalk
The pedestrians squawk
and report her to Sherriff Merrill

The Sherriff puts her under arres...
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Categories: retakes, car, scary,
Form: Limerick

Premium MemberHey, Babe Its Me Here

...Hey Babe, it's Me here!
The day's on the run!
The remakes
And half takes
Are for the boss
And the bum!

Hey Babe, it's Me here!
The chase is for the bit!
The truck is not 
A train yet 
The...
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Categories: retakes, age, best friend, confidence,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberThe Silent One

...It's at this time I like to write
No longer day, but not yet night
Where Sun and darkness can not see
The Silent One come visit me
Where shadows flow like whispered rhymes
Of sorted tales and gr...
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Categories: retakes, imagination, inspiration, muse, write,
Form: Rhyme

No Love Part 2 the Revival

...I've found land again, the darkest land that I have seen,
And I can't see a single thing.
I sense these peoples ears perk up as I begin to lie again,
"I'm staying in sick again",
Huhh these lies ...
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Categories: retakes, depression,
Form: Rhyme

Go Girl

...Get up girl its 6 o clock
Ur duty strts of pick nd drop
Hurry up! Now its almost 8
No time for a nap ,u r already late.
Dress up nice nd get ready for ur class,
U gotta tone tht tummy nd kick su...
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Categories: retakes, appreciation,
Form: Rhyme

How I Feel Rap

...I got butterflies 
Up and down my stomach 
If you feel the same way show me how bad you want it
Whenever you come around
I try to act cool, be smooth
But I keep on fumbling making mistakes
Wish...
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Categories: retakes, emotions, feelings, heart, life,
Form: Lyric

Premium MemberHappiness An Illusion Delusion

...Happiness is an illusion, a mirage, a delusion
    fostered by a trial separation of truth from reality.
You have to be made to be happy
Or succumb to the happy state.
Few are born happy, newborn...
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Categories: retakes, happy, heart,
Form: Free verse

Crazy Stupid Love

...He gives me a heart-ache
And wants me to take a break.
His love is crazy & full of retakes
Yet he knows I will always be with him 
Whatever it takes...

They say it right, love will find a way
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Categories: retakes, cute love,
Form: Light Verse

Try To Retry

...There is no retry. 
There is not a checkpoint. 
There is one try, to get across your point.
No do-overs, no re-do's.
No starting over, no take-two's.
No retakes.
No sequel.
Leaving mistakes.
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Categories: retakes, life, lonely,
Form: Rhyme

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