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Downs and Ups

There are times when waking up is hard
Easier when you are near yet difficult if far
That's when I stay down like a fallen card
As though I am as stuck as a star.

Do you watch the moon while I see it shine?
Are there lights or is it darker
I have chills running through my spine
And you're straightening it with a thick marker.

Strange as can be that falling asleep is worst
Always staying awake until I see the sun has risen
My sleep patterns are reversed
My soul is in prison

Even when I try nothing seems to work
All I ever do is lay awake
While our memories lurk
In my dreams with multiple retakes.

Flowers bloom but always die
Beautiful until they fall to the ground
Their petals disintegrate as they lie
And they do it without making any sound

I just want to be loved for who I am
All of the negative simply makes me ill
Through every tear, I still swam
Because I still have plenty in life to fulfill.


Written and posted on May 2nd, 2016
By: Michelle Corbin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/25/2018 6:03:00 AM
hi Mischelle you have crafted the whole picture of ups and downs of life very well. I like this line most.... Flowers bloom but always die Beautiful until they fall to the ground Their petals disintegrate as they lie And they do it without making any sound
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Date: 7/23/2016 11:44:00 AM
Michelle, this is beautiful! Really loved the flow of words.
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 7/25/2016 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed <3
Date: 5/6/2016 9:39:00 AM
Michelle Corbin, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 5/8/2016 10:06:00 PM
Thanks, girl! Your thoughts are very much appreciated! <3

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