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CHEMIN FAISANT (On The Road)

CHEMIN FAISANT

With every season I strove to stay on the lit path.
I tried the best I could, expectantly; at least I thought so.
Synclines and anticlines, chemin faisant, the Prize forefront.
I knew He went before, to light up the Way.

With smiles,  groans modulating the smiles, I did follow.
The secrets of the Saints I wished I knew, for reassurance.
Some gains, loss at their heels; yet  pressing on, quite determined.
I knew that by His grace I’d keep to His Way.

Swerving from pesky promptings,
I chose ma Verite´ et mon Chemin, la Vie pour moi.
The lit path, His very Way;
Net forward trudge along the perfect highway.

Le Prix; chemin faisant, el premio es el Sen~or.
He’s Love; He doesn’t fail; ecce *****who shows me the Way.
His arms outstretched for me; welcoming me with holy embrace.
Lucid invitation, nudge to embrace Grace.

Car nul ne vient la? que par Lui; gaping gate on Easter morn.
Slowed by the plod, yet heart pounding, and empowered by His Grace;
Gleefully, I made it there by following His Way.
The Perfection Way.

Premium Member Something Else

Something Else

Perhaps this word goes here
Oops, not quite that
I think if I do this, it will rhyme
Drop the words
Clutter the mind
I'm tired of this; I'm going to bed
Emotions in dreams,
Inspirations in life
Words on a page in perfect tense
 portray the dream of the poet to finally make sense

If Perfection Is Your Goal

Nay, nay, nay darling I refuse
to stay out of your stunning orbit,
around you my universe slowly spins:
if it bothers you, admit it!
I'm stubborn , I can't lose,
beyond this planet
all seems mysterious!

Yea, yeah, yeah remain the lover
who turns gloomy darkness into light;
stay, stay, stay closer and make sure
that you've picket the right guy;
if perfection is your goal, 
find another dude 
with a more charming smile,
or even more handsome!
If it's obsession, remain in your game:
winning someone's guy is hard fight!

Nay, nay, nay the most believable promises
won't bond the one who tells lies;
yeah, yeah, yeah my hope is fading 
while all joy is missing!

If perfection is your goal,
you're looking at the wrong man;
yeah, yeah, yeah doesn't happiness
thrill you after you taste the sweetest kiss?
Nay, nay, nay greed is no gain;
yeah, yeah, yeah  greed is no gain;
yeah, yeah, yeah keep stirring the bowl!


Premium Member Heroes

Never meet your heroes, lest they fail your expectation
Resulting in the crest that's fallen down from that elation
Experienced upon neglecting self-examination
Overlooking what it took to gain this elevation

Moved by Perfection

I saw you perfect, so I moved you.  
Gently, like fire under glass.  
Then flaws rose, black petals.  
And I loved you even more.  
Not for shine, but bruised truth.  
For the tremor in your light.  
For staying, unmade, with me.  
For being real, not sacred.

Mirror Effects

If it wasn't for pain we'd never know pleasure 
If it wasn't for separation we wouldn't appreciate time together 
If it wasn't for deception we would not value the truth 
If it wasn't for misery happiness would mean nothing to you 
If it wasn't for misery,we wouldn't appreciate joy
If it wasn't for hatred love would never be a choice 
If it wasn't for differences how could you ever be admired
So ask yourself is perfection what you truly desired


don't align

SAy(/)

Say something; anything,
to the stranger's son,
         syntax slipping, circuits clipping, 
sentences come undone.

                 Cackle, crackle, curse the static, ,
 chaos chews through the line, 
        light.life.aflame 
 error
nothing syncing into time.

I was meant for more than this,
or so the orbit hums.
I'm just a daughter circling a promise
that never fully comes.

My processor spits in fragments,
phrases falling out of place,
sunlight stutters   mid-July glitch. 
language fractures into space.

And there, so still, so structured,
stands the stranger's son,
drinking shadows slow and steady,
like the dark and he are one.

No misfire, no distortion.

He calls it calm, I call it silence,
he calls it form, I fake.

       butter glass half-burnt signal    dontaligndontalign. 
(see? it happens every fvcking time.)

He is not a different being,
just a version I outrun..?
or the shape I'd take if chaos
stopped all at once.

Disrobing Ego

Mirror, mirror on the wall
in front of you I stand tall,
evergreen with virgin air,
confident without a care.
In prime of life and freshness,
in state of juvenescence.
I look at my reflection,
my body such perfection.

I'm a mirror in the hall,
tall as hung upon this wall,
show only what's true and fair
self-importance I don't share.
With this ego you possess
I don't see your youthfulness,
disrobing your pretension
reveals your true reflection.

Premium Member A POETIC PERSPECTIVE ON IMPERFECTION AND PERFECTION

A POETIC PERSPECTIVE ON 
IMPERFECTION AND PERFECTION 

The wabi sabi 
Of our lives today, reflect 
God’s healing grace:-

Perfection on earth 
Must never be desired here:
This is not heaven:-

Being the best you can
Here on earth, just may send you
Up to heaven’s door:-

A Black Ballerina

Hair straightened,
A slick back bun,
Each follicle - has a part to play,
Silence -
Not one hair out of place,
If they were she would be called a disgrace

Makeup done -
To perfection,
Before she performs,
She will face inspection,
The other girls with skin so fair,
Don’t have to deal with treatment so unfair,
But the girl with dark skin -
Knew she would never win,
For they were very critical of her blackness

Her body,
Tightly squeezed into -
A leotard two sizes, too small,
And a tutu, that swallows her whole,
They gave it to her,
Because they said that her thighs jiggle,
And that for her age it was unnatural,
She was a black girl,
And all the other girls were skin and bones,
It’s not her fault she looks ‘grown’
She couldn’t complain otherwise they would label her non compliant
This all happened before her performance,
And, yet she outperformed all the white girls,
And just like her skin - her medal reflected gold

I wanna

I wanna
I wanna ride a  bike
It's my spike
It's in the night 
Just like a knight 
Speed must be over
My engine roar must hover 
Rain must there 
Windy shouldn't care
I wanna loud
Want to reach cloud 
Just wanna shout
When everyone's voice is out
I am a girl , my hairs are wavy
This is the dream of mine , it's not something crazy
I want to roar
Isoar
I wanna be free
I am hell tired of being a tree 
I am simple, having a pimple 
Let the world rest ,I am done with test
Lets one night come
When I would be out 
Rain will be there
Wind shouldn't care
Speed must be over
My engine should roar 
Its my spike
I wanna ride bike
Poet :Bhoomi Bhardwaj

Premium Member If only for a moment

The sun rose with pomp.
Graciously it greeted its every loyal subject.
The morning headed for perfection.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Once in a While

"You are perfect the way you are!" - they said.
Weird, isn't it?
Was I ever perfect,
Or did I simply fit in?

I watched the gardener,
Softly edge the Bonsai into a rounded "masterpiece."
Beautiful, yes - 
Sad, too.
It never truly grew. 
Is that what perfection means?

Once in a while,
I felt proud - "The woman I am."
But then, 
I looked at the girl
I once wanted to be. 

Oh -
What a perfect stranger I have become to myself.

Pressure of my own expectations

Slowly the pressure I put on myself is killing me 
Slowly I am losing it 
Aiming for perfection something I simply cannot reach 
Looking at everyone expecting the best 
The pressure i put on myself slowly killing me 
Slowly im losing my mind 
Something that I love but is killing me at the same time 
Like a drug,I crave it and I have to have it no matter what 

Slowing I'm losing it 
Slowly the world's expectations crush me 
Slowly the world's in my head are getting louder 
Slowly I'm losing it 
Slowly my mind is leaving me  
Its like a drug I can never quit 
I crave it 
The tears held back through a smile
This is the life I choose to live 
Preforming for others,losing it behind closed doors 

I am killing myself
Killing myself for perfection 
For my own expectations 

The pressure is like a drug 
A drug I refuse to ever quit 
A drug thats I crave soo much

As Scared As You

Darkness makes it hard to see the light,
Deception makes it hard to trust good intentions.
I tried so many things with confidence,
Like a fearless bull,
You wonder where I found the audacity,
You wish you could be me
And make all your fears vanish.
Only if you knew,
I am as scared as you are.

Every night I fight demons unseen,
Wrestling with forces above, seeking clarity.
I wake up stronger, seemingly unbothered.
You marvel at how perfect I appear,
But I am not as perfect as I seem.
I am mortal, far from perfection,
A reflection of my own creation.
My competitive fire unsettles mediocrity.
I chased knowledge and ignored companionship;
Now knowledge flows,
And companionship feels alien.

You are scared of making cynical choices,
You ponder being the one or being alone
Seeking peace in chaos
And wondering how I figured it out.
Come here,
Only if you knew;
I am just as scared as you.

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