Once in a While

"You are perfect the way you are!" - they said.
Weird, isn't it?
Was I ever perfect,
Or did I simply fit in?

I watched the gardener,
Softly edge the Bonsai into a rounded "masterpiece."
Beautiful, yes - 
Sad, too.
It never truly grew. 
Is that what perfection means?

Once in a while,
I felt proud - "The woman I am."
But then, 
I looked at the girl
I once wanted to be. 

Oh -
What a perfect stranger I have become to myself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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