At Nambucca heads, upon the shore are the beds where oysters were galore
I climbed upon them ragged rocks just
A kid, I got a shock, i slipped and fell and
Out i reached, grabbing the boulders
As i lost my feet.' Now oyster shells new
And old; are sharp and cut, some blood did spurt from my right hand that steadied me against worse hurt.'
So i had luck indeed i see, and learned a
Lesson for life; as you might see?)
Lots of
people online
that we
do not
personally
know
tend to study
peoples poems
to psychoanalyze
their everything
but don't realize
the person
they might be
analyzing
is actually
very kind
and very calm
and very mature
but perhaps treated
like a servant
or maybe not
but they still hate
or they orchestrate
socially
engineered
situations
to try
and throw someone
emotionally
and spiritually
off balance
because their joy
offends them
which is maybe
why they restrict
and try to
judge folks
for how
they choose
to respond to
their jabs
and tricks
all while
everyone else
wonders why
I personally
always distance
myself from
other people
who take pride
in their cultural
sociopathy.
Everlasting vicious circle Breaks
Up again,
Only to slip into the dark.
I wait for hands to pick me up,
White-knuckled and holding on,
Until I finally fall in
The circle never breaks.
Steady for a second,
Then the floor gives way.
Gripping tight until my palms ache,
Up again.
Off balance, but not alone.
Someone pulls me from the shadows
and plants my feet on solid ground.
I hold on, eyes toward the light,
breaking the circle to become my hope
Language is writing your program,
Amplifying the thought system,
So you will get lost within them,
Wondering where they stem from,
Underestimating some,
They come in like a wrecking ball,
Calling on you to fall,
Stalling the ambition engine,
Hiding your intuition,
Within the constant flow,
Throwing you off balance,
Dancing with emotions,
Advancing into a commotion,
An ocean of questions arise,
Improvising life on the fly,
Thoughts will try to divide you,
And some will guide you through,
All of them are not true,
Language has defined your view,
A stew of thought will keep you distraught,
Because you were taught to read,
Needing to feed you their greed,
A seed planted deep in your core,
Before your old enough to implore,
The need to acquire more,
Don't explore the reason why,
Just try to fit in and sit down,
Thoughts staring down nouns,
Students pronounce sounds,
On their training grounds.
The power you hold.. a man of many talents
The way you move just throws me off balance
There’s fire in my blood, a hunger in my veins
The way you look at me just drives me insane
There’s more room for love, no room for pain
I’ll drink to you now so pass the champagne
You’ve even got me here dancing in the rain
I think of you so much that it’s hurting my brain
Call the ambulance because I need a medic
This man is so holy and goddamn magnetic
To the angels above.. is this even ethical?
To make a man so perfectly symmetrical?
I want my hands to run all over your skin
I want your magnetic pull again and again
I wanna know every place that you’ve been
No more talking, let our souls speak from within
In this time of revolution
All that really matters is the turning
Until what remains is just a spinning
Wheel of a hamster with no sense
Of goal or hope of end.
The revolution itself become the end
Turning over any sense of order
Changing for the sake of change
Keeping US all off balance
‘Till in our dizziness anything can come and go.
For when revolution is internalized
It can never really end
Until the destruction is complete
With nothing left to live for
And nothing left to gain.
(11/9/25)
There’s no doubt about it, no escaping it;
Living in the material world.
Yet mind and body end up at odds about it,
What it is, what it requires, what it has to offer.
It’s a work in progress
For us all.
Work that doesn’t appear to have an end in sight.
But also work in a world
That appears to have it’s own path forward
Despite what we want and say and do.
Thus our own mind and body
Sometimes being at odds,
And of course in and with
The larger world of others
Who are each at odds within,
And without themselves…
But the material world for all its limitations
Is certainly accommodating,
Generous to the extreme
Tempting with potential fulfillment,
But always within limits.
This is how you train a soul after all.
You give them just enough
To meet their individual need
And require of them just a little bit more,
Continuously.
Always off balance, a little out of sorts,
They then are compelled to keep falling forward
And so eventually learn to walk.
The longest journey may begin
With a single step
But all that requires something
To stand upon,
At least with the illusion
Of solidity.
(10/15/25)
When the sublime symphony of summer
is about to enter its last movement
The mysterious curtain of magic
Nature transform into golden colors
yellow, orange, red and even purple
Eye-catching spectacular color shades
Walk in the quiet respite of autumn
while breathing in the lovely fresh crisp air
The season's most beautiful adventure
With autumn, the weather changes quickly
The wind takes hold and throws me off balance
Ripe apples, pears and plums fall to the ground
AI is groupthink, it’s hewed to pre-existing work,
which it aggregates into something bland and flat.
If you don’t want your work scraped and copied by AI, try
writing off-balance ideas that aren’t for everyone and have faith
that AI will never be able to actually rival human creativity.
Deny AI the echo chamber of predictable content on which it feeds.
I polish my pieces to a pointless sheen, which gives
them an algorithmically indecipherable quality.
When it comes my to poetry, I have to admit,
I’m working through mediocrity—hoping that it’s just a phase.
If failure is essential for growth
I’m going to be a giant
But after all, someone has to define the baseline.
You’re welcome.
Ok, Let’s wax poetic..
There are thousands of stars
in that black outer-place
where gravitas holds them
firmly in place.
I fret not about avian abductions,
or unidentified flying soccers,
still, I’ve a waxed on them
in multiverse
.
.
Songs for this:
I Like You (A Happier Song) [feat. Doja Cat] by Post Malone
Late Night Talking by Harry Styles
Listen to the rock’n’roll of the fifties
alive, raw, unfiltered, throbbing
away in your ears, your veins, your pulse
racing along with your feet…
From Elvis to Little Richard
Jerry Lee Lewis to Richie Valens
You’ll squirm, you’ll wiggle, your heart’ll
giggle ~ it’ll keep you off-balance
Don McClean sang of the day
the music died
I say 50’s rock is here forever
to stay ~ never ever to go away
Angels stand before me,
Restoring a body,
Only they can see.
Clearing negativity,
From my reality.
Silently fighting,
Delighting in Victory.
When Asked to be,
Part of the Story.
They're hard to see,
Through dark and stormy,
Seas of energy before me.
This Physical form,
Clashing, gnashing,
Splashing energy,
Against the foundation.
Rocks crumbling,
Emotions are Bubbling,
Off balance, Tumbling,
Into The darkness.
Plunging,
Against the Resistance.
The Disturbance,
Eroding patience.
Turbulence from the Currents,
Drowning my excellence.
In my last moments,
I catch a glimpse,
Angels in the distance.
Awaiting the chance,
To lend their hands.
Just waiting on my command.
Until then They'll Stand,
Angels At Attention.
Feeling balanced,
In a world that always seems unbalanced,
Is awkward when you want others not to feel unbalanced,
When you are expressing feelings that to them may seem unbalanced,
Yet to stay balanced,
You feel the need to express theses feeling or risk becoming unbalanced.
I guess on balance,
For the sake of feeling balanced
You need to do whatever makes you feel balanced,
And trust others will on balance,
Accept you even when off balance.
Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High
will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.
—Psalm 91:1 NIV
I’m loved by God
safe under his wings and secure
though the world is on its tilted axis
often I’m off balance
pillows are thoughts not as grounded as puffy clouds
I travel over and under arms - memories
of past steps, foretelling future
fluidity of feeling but gently tethered
I read scripture
pray, obey, love my fellow man
in the Spirit, the best I can, perfect
though not in my power
the ethereal takes over and changes lives
lies exposed, incised; friction sharpens, bonds kinship
I touch eyeballs, expose the light
the touch of God felt between us - a first-rate hope
Jumping over the jagged rocks of Jupiter's sixty-seventh moon
My soles are bleeding, but my soul continues chasing the memory
Maneuvering between boulder and ice
Irritating eyes to turn frost-bitten
Bitter wind whirling across my cheeks calling attention to the sky
Surrendering a quasar to quiet my noise and drown out darkness
Distant behemoths to haunt and torment
Terrestrial echoes of another life
Legs pumping violence since leaping across the volcanoes of Venus
Visions stream and seep into my subconscious, scratching the surface
Stars blind but ignite a fuse
Fueling the search for my story
Stored somewhere in the brainstem to throw my body off balance
Breathing hitches and heart rate halts, the race interrupted
Ions charging at one another
As the Greeks attacked Troy
Totally silenced for a mere moment in that grey galaxy sleeping
Soundly in the cold recesses as realization rocket-launches past neurons
Neon panic propels me to Neptune
Numbing nerves to prepare for judgment
As I sat at the table in the cafeteria I was eager to feast on the food staring at me. I was oblivious to anyone around. A hysterical laughter caught my attention and pulled me out of my cocooned world. I looked towards the direction from where the laughter came. There were three men seated deep into a cesspool of friendliness. It wasn’t that that was the highlight of that summer noon. It was the table adjacent to theirs. I was frozen for some minutes. The old lady and the young lad in the middle of a conversation threw me off balance. I could see my grandmother talking to me, telling me pastime stories and teaching me my fast-eroding culture. I could hear her calling out to me to come to her garden to aid her in transplanting her purple flowers. Tears streamed down my eyes.
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