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Observation Poems - Poems about Observation

The quiet One
She doesn't speak, she just observes feeling all the hidden curves every laugh and every tear holding close what's far and near in the noise, she's calm and still quiet heart, but strong will things that burn inside her chest never spoken, never stressed she's the calm beneath the storm different, soft, a secret form the loudest voice you'll never see the quiet one, who...

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Categories: observation, class, deep, humor, i
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Observing Nature's Beauty
long tree limbs stretching over gurgling brook flowing minnows are dashing I sit on the bank observing nature’s beauty a calming moment ...

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Categories: observation, beauty, nature, senses, water,
Form: Senryu



haiku : hiku : crow
haiku crow polishes beak shine morning dew fresh washes window ~ gorgonzola sky _________ hiku wwww oooooo rrrrrrrrrr ...

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Categories: observation, allusion, bird, environment, extended
Form: Haiku
Premium Member Observation
Observation Dig Up All The Sediments Under The Seas Make Them All Frothy And Opaque. Pour All The Cool Waters Under The Trees Then Watch How They Run To The Lake. Clouds Burst & Starbursts... They Know What They Like... They Didn't Need Me To Delight 'Em. Rain Moves The Mountains. We've Got This Thing Covered! All The Wrongs We're Gonna' Write 'Em. -Gray Squirrel 05-24-2025...

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Categories: observation, life,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member HIKU and U a poetic observation
hiku & you & me are ENTIRELY FREE TO BE POETIC TRISTIC-HALLY HAIKU is a centuries old Japanese traditional phonetical & cultural poetic form whereas HIKU is a relatively recently reference to the 75year old established haiku in English. Hiku being an imagist tristich like its elder cousin,without a title,and with a similar economy of words ,inherently enigmatic & with a caesura...

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Categories: observation, appreciation, poetry,
Form: Tristich



vicariously through my mind
volatile observation suspended amidst reality and fiction, subdued voice echoes down a hallway of convictions; like a despotic fog blurring options for a swarm of insects who eventually finds way to a lizard's grotesque carcass. a feeling, in my gravel ribs, this might be a dead end staring up at the sky, an atheist's hollow vision; air and venom flowing...

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Categories: observation, angst, anxiety, onomatopoeia, true
Form: Free verse
Old Before New
Every day once a while I could see the construction of a new building going by, It proceeds slow enough to make some innocent birds mistake it for an abandoned shelter; They have begun building their refuge on its dusty window sills, lovingly nurturing it to become permanent, giving their everything....

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Categories: observation, allusion, childhood, city, heart,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member My Observation Notes
We seek wakefulness. What does Barbados mean to me? It’s the hot sun, broad-brimmed hats, and old khaki pants. It's robust men with warm, undertone skin that blends with the cultivated land. We seek constant reassurance from those we love—that they will be there for us in both good times and bad, just to feel...

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Categories: observation, allegory, allusion, angst, anxiety,
Form: Narrative
Premium Member Simple Observation 8 - Birds that sing
Birds that sing are doing so in praise of nature truly great people are not proud of their stature. _____________________________ ...

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Categories: observation, bird, nature, people, pride,
Form: Couplet
Premium Member Simple Observation 5 - Fruit that’s ripe
Fruit that’s ripe is easily picked from a tree but things which are forbidden are not free. _____________________ ...

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Categories: observation, analogy, bible, freedom, fruit,
Form: Couplet
Premium Member Keen Observation
A drunkard while piddling was struck by this fact incidental that holding a beer requires the same hand as at a urinal. ...

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Categories: observation, humor,
Form: Light Verse
Premium Member Simple Observation 3 - The oceans are deep
The oceans are deep and the mountains high the sun is warm when seen in the noon sky. __________________________ ...

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Categories: observation, deep, mountains, ocean, senses,
Form: Couplet
Premium Member just an observation
no 2 people can see the same light photon ~ yet both can’t miss the void one hundred trillion photons hits our eyes each second ~ don’t be devoid By David Kavanagh...

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Categories: observation, light, perspective, philosophy,
Form: Monoku
Premium Member Simple Observation 1 - Roses aren't all red
Roses aren't all red and violets all blue the grass is green most of nature is too. _________________ ...

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Categories: observation, blue, flower, green, meaningful,
Form: Couplet
Premium Member PAY ATTENTION
I pay attention. I see the sadness in a young schoolgirl’s eyes When she has been cruelly ridiculed and ostracized. For what? She doesn’t look the same As others; too tall, too fat, too blonde. Does she have the wrong last name? I pay attention. I see the old woman setting alone on her sunny porch Accompanied by lush green plants silently...

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Categories: observation, inspiration, introspection, philosophy,
Form: Rhyme

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