Long Elderliness Poems

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the wealthy people

The wealthy couple

who live on an island in the Far East
but once a year, they visit Europe
every year when I see them, they have changed 
Alas, I wish it had been for the better
both are followers of a health regime concocted
by a Guru of the type that prays on the rich
they are now advanced middle-aged (below 61
and in the hope of staving off the time of elderliness
they trim and live on a lettuce a day.
Their effort are valiant but in vain time always win  
At a distance and in the afternoon light, they look fine
like upper-middle-class people generally do,
She looks like a crow that has stolen a canary 
plumage, but her match stick arms and legs 
tells of the losing battle, and her conversation 
consist of diets and clothes and important
art exhibition coming up, where one can meet 
the right sort of people.
He, her husband, is still slim (too slim ?) and plays golf several
times a week, but his eye sockets are dark and
tells of loneliness and a silent disappointment
a sadness that comes about when a partner let
the dominant person decides the outcome of
a life spent together.
Soon, they will be back on the island, where
all are middle-aged and served by the local young.
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Antique Village

Antique village

Houses around me are emptying the old, reaching the age of dying.
A timeworn man went missing on Monday, was found miles away, 
the local constabulary drove him back home.
He had tried to flee, didn’t to where he had no money.
Behind closed doors in dark rooms, he tries to stave off the fated.
Sunlight unbearable reminds him of the sunrises he will not see.
When a car stops outside his house, he trembles in fear, is a hearse 
coming for him?
Voices of children are like the scorn of his elderliness, he longs for peace 
but fears death’s endless cruelty.

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House Hunting

House hunting

 
 I´m looking for a flat in a small market town nearby.
The lady showing me around ought to wear a chador.
One of the features in the flat is a new dishwasher
and other kitchen utensils of interest.
The flat has a balcony with a view of other houses,
not a tree in sight.
My almond tree is in full bloom make spring beautiful.
This town has shops, a post office and an elder centre
where we elderly can play bingo.
The landscape in my village is odd it used to be farmed
people moved away and left it to go back to the wilderness.
Today, I saw a fox, a rabbit and a boar, also a cow hanging about
 chewing cud and lost in thoughts.
Flowers hide under a crippled tree and are beautiful for their own sake.
The chador-lady is right in a wrong way.
I will wait only move when spring and summer is over
when winter murk hangs in my vale and mist is like a childhood of sorrow
Then I will leave and wear a grey coat of elderliness
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the sad vicar

the sad vicar

The vicar walks in front of the funeral procession
appears a bit wobbly, perhaps due to elderliness
eyes are watery, and the smell of lotion is too strong 
He lost faith years ago praying in churches, asking 
to be released from his throbbing masculinity 
which left him affairs with female parishioners
past their first youth, but with adult feelings about 
sexuality hidden in a black dress of widows 
God had left him, he blamed himself especially now 
that he was no longer young his discreet advances 
were no longer useful.
The vicar had lost his faith, he went through rituals 
that had no meaning, he was not a man of the cloth 
His mother had been deeply religious and wished 
her son will join the priesthood which he did partly
because to please her, and the idea of saving the world 
from the evil that lurked in the heart of man.
He didn't know at the time, his male sexuality was
his downfall, when he knew, it was too late to do 
anything about this problem, that youngish widows 
was happy to assist in solving
Someone called his name, deep in thought he had
walked past the interment place, ah, they thought 
our old is lost in prayers
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a house and its dog

a house and it's dog

I had a cottage out in the sticks, the home
was built on a slant and had steps into every room
from the kitchen to the hall was
three steps down
Two steps down, the bathroom to the right,
was one step down 
To the room where I wrote was
Also, two steps down, but my bedroom
was one step up
This is romantic when one is young, but
But with elderliness a burden
Then my dog died in a silly accident 
But I woke up in the night and heard someone walking
to the door of my bedroom to see if I 
Ok, when I switched on the light, I saw
her shadow disappears
I got up, called her name, hoping she
had not died, even though I saw 
dead body, I didn't like my house anymore
I met a woman
I met a woman ot the cuddly kissing type
I sold my house and live in a big flat
Late at night, after a glass of wine and
There is silence. Bambi, my dog, still visits
to see if I'm ok.
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the dread

the fear


The fear that has no name, it is there, churning away
for no reason, until today when awake
with peace in my heart
I used to be angry with myself, which made me disengage
With life around me, I became morose and bored
to serous, no fun to be around
I used to wake up early, sit by the bed for hours, not
getting anything done, getting up, drinking coffee
Shall I eat a cake or not
I had seen that day at the local supermarket
to elderly gents on holiday, they had bought beer and
looked at ease in their elderliness 
That was what I had to do, not pretend to be a pretending youth
But embrace myself, sagging stomach, muscular arm
turned into chopsticks 
What the , you silly man, you can write and
express yourself and be fearless of your opinions
With my sanity restored, I slept until eight
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Autumnal

Autumnal

The leaves on the big trees on the avenue begin to fall
a giant vacuum cleaner that looks like a truck swipes up 
the leaves in the gutter

The chocolate brown leaves on the still green lawn are left in peace, possibly because the two colors harmonize mourning the summer gone.

There are bald patches on the lawn no longer possible to hide not even the longest straw can camouflage the dark soil which is the beginning of plants and humans.

The sun feels mellow today this has to do with its elderliness that renders the bravest of the brave humble
one day it will disappear and a new sun arise. 

From my collection “The Last Diary” 2015
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Form: Elegy

Premium Member Age, Stepping Stones To Now

The number of years, the length of life is meaningless,
   the days, months, years on earth, our decline;
all the stages and chapters of our life to elderliness,
   merely stepping stones to the here and now.
        Fifty, sixty, seventy, eighty,
        those advancing years- nothing;
        fifty is the new thirty,
        that is what I hear.
I intend to enjoy each day as it comes by,
   not dwell on numbers but on living life;
not afraid of fifty or even death if it calls me,
   keep active, think big, and just don't worry;
        that's my advice . . . 

_______________________
April 16, 2017


Verse/Age, Stepping Stones To Now
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elderliness and Helen Mirren

elderly and Helen Mirren


It is hard work to be old; many people prey on us, the elderly
My wife is better at telling people to fob off than I am
When people tell me a sob story, I tend to believe
What they, why else will they tell
My wife and I are very different; she likes to speak to
people in a cafe or a waiting room at the doctor's, yes, we
Do see many doctors, with age comes the infirmary
I sit there and try not to look at the clock 
She comes from an upper-class family without money
I am from a modest background with a tendency not to spend
money, but safe for a day, it might rain, and we will be
caught in the downpour without an umbrella
Yes, in public, we hold hands, we get the condescending
glances, oh, how sweet they are
I feel annoyed like Helen Mirren, wishing that people would
 off and leave us in peace
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The Groceryshop

The grocery/ wineshop 

Once when he lived in Faro (Portugal) and walking about
he came across a grocer shop that was new in 1950.
As window display a packet of washing powder, fossilized
the name of the powder was Blenda, of the same type
 his mother had used and tinned sardines.
He entered and was gripped by the sadness of the shop.
It was bigger than he had thought, barrels of wine, and in 
a dark corner, old men sat drinking in silence.
So, it was an unofficial wine shop, a hiding place
for the aged who had resigned to their fate of elderliness.
He had a glass of red wine served by a woman older than the shop.
The wine was surprisingly good. He had another drink 
and joined the men in the corner.
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