Lacklustre Poems | Examples

Premium Member Out of This World

Sipping her tea without  any visible relish,
Her crumpled bag of shopping at her tired feet,
Alone she sits in the cafe  and isolatedly apart
Stranded in her  sorrowful sea of sadness
Only to raise momentarily  her sightless eyes
At the sound of the peripheral  trivial vivacity
Portending the levity of another tomorrow
Before relapsing into her inward gaze 
To consider not the future but endless eternity.
That picture echoed in  her hollowed out cheeks
Her funereal clothes, lacklustre look and lifeless lethargy
Spelling  out a life no longer enjoyable
More of a sentence to be endured.
She drags herself out of her chair
Gathering her belongings together
For her unsteady exit
To enter  upon the remaining days
 Of her final moribund pilgrimage

The Sun Cant Shine

Plastic Alice
through the looking glass
Her daughters have Pans merriment
Hungry for the here and now
Culpability over reality
They are non traditionalists
Parking on yellow lines 
Forever disobedient
The Sun can't shine
forever lacklustre
is their main amusement

Premium Member At a Museless Wake

My muse is on fire, she burns at the stake 
  guilty of poetasting, and glaring mistakes
  Inferior rhymes with old Monoku outtakes 
  blaze all around her, as embers are raked 
   Badly blistered syllables, spark and flake
   Whilst lacklustre stories, continually bake 
  A bard fans the flames, but he too’s a fake 
  for mincing his own words, with juicy steak
  Making ado about nothing, soliloquy spake 
  Glory to the Efilist god, ha! give me a break 


                A dedication of respect 
              for rendering down a bard
                         #    #     #
                  However unpalatable 
           and repugnant the suet tastes 
                         #    #    #
        From March madness to April fool’s 
    digesting copious amounts of insipid tofu 
                         #    #     #
                    Only to wipe it off 
                 in an all encompassing 
              persistent vegetative state 
                

By
David Kavanagh IV


Premium Member Nismo Is So Nimble

Bulky ute voyeur selects sleek sporty stalion
    Driving by, supersedes her oversized sedan
    Wide wheel arches have Porche comparison
    Voracious engine's enthuse easily enchants


     Large car cast dispelled by lacklustre Calais
     Original conjur 370Z parked beside boring
     Low leg swing exclusive slide in, magic valet
     Over revved start stabs adrenalin assuring 
     

     Our dear Dara, choice contacted in December
     Available last minute to test drive his beast
     Black gloss road boss, enlarged 'lungs' terror
     Capable crazy bitumen baby, tester pleased


     Ultimate Man concurs, the amenable outcome
     Keys in her hand a few days after, aura froze
     Couldn't imagine huge generosity from anyone
     Racing car reap, increase on what she sows

 
     Merry go round roads, another showoff slotted 
     Silver pole stabilised glides in Surfers cycle
     Crosslane carousel onlookers, briefly besotted
     By hot hoof nimble Nissan race horse style






         28th March
         Too Great of a Man

Parking Lot

The parking lot

 No seagulls are flying high today, sitting on roofs and shrieking
 to each other, and sometimes there is a clash of wings
There are no ships at anchorage in the bay waiting for a pilot
on this day of stillness under a grey sky and lacklustre clouds
there is no promise of a better tomorrow.
The supermarket’s parking lot is looking down at a cemetery
here we have the mainstay of human life the price of food
and the cost of a funeral, food is needed, and death is avoided.
People walking among gravestones, some are humble some
 are posh with the picture of the deceased on.
None of these matters in the long run; the supermarket will
close and move somewhere else, the death’s place will be 
ploughed under and potatoes planted, time is a sticking plaster
when the plaster falls off, death has a plot out of town next
door to the glorious new supermarket

Premium Member Twilight Rising

TWILIGHT RISING

icy&
in a lacklustre
  glow
a
 relished pallor
leeched out
then
assimulated

  a blended allusion
 repeated&
advocated
   in images
evokes
  the absent
yet so

transcendent
  transmutated
in
 sheer
emptiness
  an
embraced
blankness
  implicit yet
seemingly
  personified
in a gleam
   of sunlight

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived


Flamingo

 With the classy curved beak
You nudge your mate's cheek
And you both give a romantic look
Oh! That's my favourite click

Those slender zig-zag legs float
on water like the beautiful boat
And amidst that seren lake
emerges my angel to ruin my ache

White gown, the normal angels don
On you, the pink and red hues drawn
Such a special archangel you are
And so shining like a pink star

Lacklustre lake it was; neglected
Until your graceful advent
You dipped the dull monochrome frame
in reddish hues, the place now, a fame

Oh my dear Flamingo
Your colors, flaming! Oh!
My pain you take and go
Oh my dear Flamingo 

Dedicated to my dream bird Flamingo.Yearning to see it atleast once in my lifetime...

Premium Member A Tragic Affiance

Absurdity walked this path of a whorish lane,
Dauntingly decked in a dark seductive  garb
Egregiously seeks the thrones by craftiness,  
Nebulous transverse for the wayfaring man. 
Illusions of a well worn thigh concealed with facial mascara.   
Killjoy bipolar nagging for control, demanding dominance by demonic antics,  
Eccentric public commodity makes it the brothels for quickie.   

Acrimony well taught from the market square by “Iyaloja”
Damaging defiance conscripting father to “garri Ijebu” and Fish 
Egomania derailed from home and deprived of morals, 
Sagged and perforated  lurid frame perfumed for a prey 
Offensive forlorn factious feigned facades 
Lacklustre and noxious mien  seduced the prey by lewd bait, 
Absurd Incentive the goal, merchandise of greed, A week of affiance.

Premium Member Surviving Solitude

Loneliness lurks like a live leprechaun,

Leering at her loss of love and laughter;

She leads a luckless lamentable life,

Lacking light, leaning towards lunacy,

Laden with longing and lacklustre lies;

Listlessly lingering in lethargy,

Labyrinthine lady looks lachrymose.



03.25.2021

Premium Member Do We Dare Waterfall

Pummelled intensity, underneath we face her force
Exhaled wide eyed in white, witness rainforest exhibit
Splashed grins enfold a third tongue, waterfall
Her glistening christening combines us in sublime


Drilled by severity, her embrace as strong as yours
Like waterfall's flattened rock, I erode, smoothed 
Standing fused firm against her punishing torrent
Insatiable waterfall baptism pelts my opened senses 


Cleansed by new beginnings, deafened by dedication 
Buckets of vision catch my breath in virgin shroud 
Faces almost touching give lee from ferocious gush
Together steadied in her rapidly travelled path 


Lacklustre lizards, afterwards secure sun's approval 
Ancient rock sears wet backsides without burning 
Snoozing pulls us here and there consecutively 
Amorous dreams unmeasured as Saturday morning 


Drying dares our sizzled legs go again to her vigour
Your rigid gaze raises my temperature, raging 
Exposed thoughts post drenching return me
Pause flushes me with water's unwieldy ways



20th August 2020

Premium Member A House Divided

Only within lacklustre eyes
does the saddest one shout,
while sorrowful tears run in grimy profusion.
Oh God! The clarity of our beginning
is more prevalent than ever,
if we take the word ‘Prejudice’
out of the dictionary, will it disappear?
We do not need the world stained
in bloody mindlessness, or
dwell in one hell of a holy mess.
Oh, where are you Jesus Christ?
Every day I wear your symbol around
my neck, my prayers unanswered.
My youth caressed gentle faces
today anger enters, this, a different pace
masked in veils of despondency.
The system demands continuing
improvements, says we cannot stand still
must move forwards. 
Yet all I feel is a raging heart beating abrupt 
exasperation, against an invasion, 
at best risqué because I know
there are those in the east, that wait
for our very own self destruction.

© Harry J Horsman 2020

What's Her Name

I’ll never forget what’s her name;
That teacher who bored us to tears
Whose voice seemed to drone on and on
And lessons appeared to last years.

Her minuscule lacklustre eyes
Peered over a spectacled nose
No glimmer of passion in sight
No colourful facts to expose.

She reeled off the kings and the queens
The plight of Marie Antoinette,
Victorians, Tudors and wars
And all with a face firmly set.

I’ll never forget what’s her name
Oh how I was left uninspired.
It’s rumoured her smile first appeared
The day when at last she retired.

16.09.19

'I'll never forget what's her name contest' : sponsored by John Lawless

Premium Member Bland

invisible bars
around your lacklustre heart
the colour of you

© Harry J Horsman  2018

Spills and Thrills From Russia 2018

Beautiful game, crazy game that draws maximum adrenalin
From hypnotized, soccer crazy minds
Glued to television screens to gobble spills and thrills from Russia with hopes lean
Driven to the brink of despair behind Venetian blinds 

Betting, arguing, opposing, supporting
Non African teams that their subjective minds favour
Jibing, imbibing, consulting, insulting
African teams their fickle fantasies endeavor

To predict wouldn’t win
A single match based on mere whims
That claim an African queen
Throws her royal weight behind teams

A particular set of soccer fans deem fit
To take the day
While another set of soccer mad warmth seekers claim African teams should quit
Cos they lose and embarrass supporters everyday

With their lacklustre form
Lack of determination to spring a bit of magic
Although some supporters claim a reform
Needed to put to an end to the tragic

Performance African team display at the World Cup in Russia
Becoming whipping boys
But argues a wisecracker, ‘Shouldn’t forget Algeria beat Prussia
In Spain. So, African teams ain’t no toys.’

Premium Member Send Not To Know

No favourites does lacklustre  death play
With equal fervour the doors
Of paupers and kings he strikes
Whether high or low
He does not care
At his summons
All must follow
To where their worldly status
Matters not
Only Tantalus,Sisyphus,Ixion
And their likes
Fear what lies below
Along with parricides and traitors
Those who thought themselves
Above divine law
Will find sentences condign
Eternally repetitive
As for the rest
Mere wraiths most will become
Pining
For what they have left behind
For some few 
Consolation comes
With the brightness
Of the Blessed Isles,
Sweet Elysium

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