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Premium Member a life I never knew existed

It is two a.m. I am totally non-sleepy
Do I consider a sleeping pill? No.
Three twenty. I am impressively awake, watching TV
At 4:15 a dog licks my face, waking me up.
I am on the couch, not comfortable, so I move to my bed.

Both dogs move with me.
We wake up at 7:41 a.m.
I used to leave for work at six
I love this feeling of sleeping in
Retirement is incredibly easy
I cannot believe how hard I fought it
Now I am living a life I never knew existed.
A life that is showing me how to really live.

Premium Member Song of The Adonis Blue Butterfly No 12: AABB

Colorful butterflies, shadow's midst light,
impressively, true blue male hue, in spite
of the female shadows in a brown hue,
yet, it's the white margin, brilliant sky blue
the wing topper real showroom stopper,
BLUE STEEL ... VICTOR/VICTORIA ... partner.
A kin to Euro, "The hills are ALLIED ...,"
to well TORN in the Eastern CURTAIN side,
the species mate truly RUSSIA WITH LOVE.
Pupae flights May through October ... speak of,
open spaces, fallow ground, sunny slopes,
while within day's light, wings open and scopes
bound to tall grass, midst others -- falls in threats,
one of nature's pleasant, worthwhile assets.


Premium Member Bright

I could not imagine a more perfect universe than one made in your image
It is the version of my life that I love when I look at your visage
Like I am looking at perfect symmetrical splendor
That is the sheen that you radiantly render
Searching to discover new ways to make happiness your only normality
Is the best use of my everyday,  of my lifetime, in
perpetual reality
To have a positive impact on your overall happiness
I hope you know how much I appreciate giving this
Know that you are treasured perfection in my life, heart, arms, and soul
My prayers were answered the first time you allowed me to show you why you make me whole
It's like I found a missing part of my humanity
You were the missing part of my emotional dexterity
With overwhelming purity, your luminescence is so impressively bright
I will never understand how fate gifted me even a moment of your light
Form: Rhyme

Oh Dear One

Oh dear one, for many years we have hurt and hugged.
Brought up the spears of contention and have been mugged.

Could I have been the one to compose your sorrow?
I guess time will tell when we reach that tomorrow.

The premise was so impressively constructed.
Yet like a streetcar that was poorly conducted.

Placed upon a pedestal that was bound to fall.
Oh dear one, how I long for thy spirit to call!

date:1/10/23
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Well-Lit Powers

Too much enlightenment
with not enough empowerment
depresses me to feel isolated
and surrounded by self-impressed fools,
like me
or against me.

Too much empowerment
with not enough enightenment
anticipates
and advocates
and avidly endorses
narcissistic egocentrism
for my individual self
and
manically unrealistic 
anthrosupremacist
Other Otherers

Super Patriarchal-Capitalist powers
against Earth's
and polycultural EarthTribe's resilient
self-organizing 
health and wealth care

Long-term 
indigenous wisdom potential
for healthiest RightHemisphere 
felt co-empathically empowered
and wealthiest LeftHemisphere 
verbally enlightened

For great grand future regenerators
of all secular ergodic 
sacred synergetic
cooperatively greased relationships

Reducing trauma for squeaky,
curious
compassionate future 
multiculturing secular 
LeftYang diversity
inter-religious sacred 
RightYintegrity
pre/re balancing generations

Of transcendent 
co-invested 
wealthy and wise storytellers, 
co-empathically enlightened;
and cooperatively healthy 
ecofeminist 
history makers, 
impressively co-empowered.


Premium Member Nature's Treasures

Nature's Treasures


                      She sees their crowns had impressively grown
                      Taller than the obelisk now merely ancient stone
                      Deepest green like emeralds set on her mystic ring
                      Forever cognizant and nurtured by a life-giving spring

                      A gentle presence caresses leaves fervently breathing
                      Reaching toward heaven imbibing celestial blessing
                      Over her heart a talisman deciphers cryptic rune
                      Trees are endowments from beyond the moon
                     
                       Without trees and grasses fostered by a star...
                       Planet Earth may inevitably mirror God of War!






                ***This is an expanded version of the previously posted 
                      poem Cognizant Gems, now with a different title, 
                      "Nature's Treasures"***





10/25/2022
6:20 P.M.
Aboard Rhapsody of the Seas
Limassol, Cyprus
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Maple Tree

A fine maple tree, Courageously
Stands in the meadow, Beautifully
With great dignity, Impressively

In spring, emerging from its sleep
In summer, spreading its branches
In fall, displaying all its glory

A seedling full-grown, Glamorously
God’s great workmanship, Marvelously
Poetic beauty, Breathtakingly

O maple tree in your awesomeness
Artistic wonder of splendid beauty
A poetic metaphor in seasonal dress

A good lesson from the Maple Tree
That begs to transform both you and me
To live out our years, dutifully

O, for a moving of The Wind
That brings a freshness to life and
Awes the Maker of the Maple Tree
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Representation of Reality

REPRESENTATION of REALITY

facing
  heightened awareness
patterns
   embellished
in
opulent possessions
 & sumptuous attire
with
 no constraints

a contemporary
      accessory
in a draped
costume
    tronie like

in faithful reflections
   manipulated &explicit
 depicted
     impressively
 engraved
    merging
  personality
in a monumental
significance
of
mature
   manners


THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Form: Other

Premium Member Dual Interest

DUAL INTEREST
 tablescopic
   ephemeral
with
a
sparsity of detail

composed
collecting love
shaped
 with
 complexity
in a
flattened
  perspective
&
a
reluctance to talk

but

impressively
determined&
original

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Form: Other

On Chanukah

On Chanukah we dreidel spin
And chocolate gelt we hope to win.
If we get Gimel ‘stead of Shin,
Let’s celebrate tonight.

We eat some latkes, oil-fried,
Which balabustas* made with pride,
With applesauce served on the side,
Our smiles sweet and bright.

At sundown as the candles glow
We tell the tale of long ago
And sing the Dreidel song we know,
Our spirits free and light.

We open presents, wrapped with care
To see the gifts well-hidden there;
With so much love for all to share,
It’s Chanukah, all right!

*impressively competent homemakers
Form: Rhyme

That Is the Tea

Maybe I’m just being petty 
let me state my case are you ready
When we first met your swagger 
made me stagger honestly 
I stammered over your use of grammar 
Like a hacker who was 
attacking with your rap....   
Your words were so deadly....
Such a clever endeavor 
whenever your around 
a bearer of wealth and treasure 
leaving me bound 
Silently you’d sit, 
yet righteously you’d come back violently 
leaving those who tried you, lifeless
Your very vibrancy excitedly delighted me
How they would think themselves majorly 
Lol but truthfully only minor league
Always hittin what you were spittin 
don’t you agree
We were a dynasty 
I say that modestly 
Always being the talk of society 
we were their delicious tea
Over time now I wonder 
do you still notice me 
Or perhaps Im just too devoted see 
I’ve promoted my motive endlessly
Lowered my guard just a poetess, 
writing poetry 
Noted all the unknowns graciously 
As I’m steadily trying to 
write impressively
Countless pieces I bring in 
a myriad unnoticed seriously 
So curiously am I petty? 
You got me 
I guess that’s it 
point, blank, period 
that’s the tea
Form: Rhyme

Cogito Ergo Sum Libero

“Destiny” implies
a controlling external force - 
the random positioning of planets in solar orbit,
or the mysterious machinations of a spurious spirit in the sky - 
both impressively improbable and laughably unlikely.
Occam’s razor slashes!
And free will is the last rational refuge standing...

September 14, 2020
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member When Dreams Clash With Reality

Thoughtlessly formed and impressively spoken
		by a naive and dreamy-eyed youth,
		they floated and billowed until they collided
		with an ugly reminder called truth.

		Then, overwhelmed by superior power,
		they plummeted wildly to earth.
		Victims of time and demands of the real world,
		they failed to establish their worth.

		What does a middle-aged dream-maker do
		when his last youthful fantasy dies?
		He worries and labors, complains, and wipes teardrops,
		dreams new dreams, and watches them rise.
		This time, more aware of reality's boundaries,
		he'll plan more and lower the skies.


July 30, 2020
entered in the Completely New (15) Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member All Colleges Need These

Ivy vines made a slow lazy crawl
up the side of the red bricked walls
competing with resilient cobwebs
their pretty ascent protected by spiders

Ivy’s shiny verdant points impressively sharp
making a soundless but dynamic impact
the contrast reminding spectators of holidays
all colleges need a building like this one
Form: Imagism

Premium Member Resilient Health Caregivers

ANTI-THESIS

Competitive economic experience
breeds business as usual
capital-growing cultures
with a special preference historical
for white privilege patriarchal
remembering and designing 
left-brain dominant educational systems.

THESIS

Cooperative ecological economies
breed more organic networks
of permacultural health 
and nutrition
and communication experience,
with a special historical preference
for ecofeminist Earth-empowered
deep learning
listening
noticing prime primal attachment relationships
between internal ego-
and external eco-
systemic balance,
harmony,
interdependent equity,

RightBrain HealthWealth Prominent,
liberal leftwing progressive,
freedom from isolated loneliness,
depression,
repression,
suppression,
AND
LeftBrain WealthHealth Dominant,
conservative rightwing defensive,
freedom to impressively
robustly
compassionately 
nutritiously thrive

without eating the less brilliantly aristocratic help

and remembering to at least say 
Please and Thank You and You Are Welcome,
is where civil rights end
and co-responsively begin.

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