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When Dreams Clash With Reality

Thoughtlessly formed and impressively spoken by a naive and dreamy-eyed youth, they floated and billowed until they collided with an ugly reminder called truth. Then, overwhelmed by superior power, they plummeted wildly to earth. Victims of time and demands of the real world, they failed to establish their worth. What does a middle-aged dream-maker do when his last youthful fantasy dies? He worries and labors, complains, and wipes teardrops, dreams new dreams, and watches them rise. This time, more aware of reality's boundaries, he'll plan more and lower the skies. July 30, 2020 entered in the Completely New (15) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 8/2/2020 12:41:00 AM
Such an elegant muse of wisdom and experience Janice. Loved it. :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/5/2020 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Aditi. Janice
Date: 7/30/2020 6:45:00 PM
Now, how would someone as young as you know about middle-aged people coming crashing back to earth?! lol. Great write, Janice! ~ Icarus
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/30/2020 7:22:00 PM
Hey, you're right, Gershon. I'm only 68. LOL! Thanks so much for the comment. Janice
Date: 7/30/2020 5:22:00 PM
reality is a rude awakening from infancy to adulthood , a theme coinciding with my thoughts today, I feel as if this poem enhances my chackra.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/30/2020 7:20:00 PM
Reggae, THANK YOU so much! Janice
Date: 7/30/2020 4:44:00 PM
This holds so much wisdom, love those last two lines!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/30/2020 7:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Michelle! Janice
Date: 7/30/2020 2:07:00 PM
Your poem has the sound of poignancy--so true--reality has its boundaries. All the best, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/30/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 7/30/2020 12:04:00 PM
Karma certainly makes life interesting uintil we learn our lessons! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/30/2020 1:38:00 PM
True, Rico. Thanks so much. Janice

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