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Immersed

Intoxicating bubbles that flow within 
The smell of damp bark and leaves trickle down into my lungs
deep somber comes after I realize I have to leave 
Immersed with beautiful thoughts and prayer
as I immersed in the air

Immersed

A gaze so tender,
Even from afar so amber,
Heart jumping in aflutter,
How can a person so much render,
In perfect voice and eyes so wanting,

Taking my time to grace this occasion,
Extending my hands in persuasion,
Allow me this invasion, 
I am willing to be indicted
Of this love accusation. 

© Written Whispers


Premium Member saturday afternoon

Reading another poetry anthology 

Looking at the words; thinking mirrors, 

Reflecting no image, capturing my spirit.

Magician savants, transporting my feelings

Across life’s terrain with eyes that feel 

The heartbeat of the stones, 

The breath of every tree, 

And the memory of every Poet

That has ever lived.

Premium Member Immersed In Our Role

Immersed in our role, we vent rage
Let us then doublethink
Why needless mind battles we wage
Let us repair this chink

Stupor is our illness
Stillness path to wellness
Ushering blissfulness 

Love and light our goal
Immersed in our role

Premium Member Immersed Huitain

Fire burns through the old me raging 
it triggers my transformation;
The ashes fall with the cleansing 
and build a rugged foundation;
Flames bring about reinvention 
that forces my cocoon to burst 
and kickstart this revolution 
with passion I become immersed.


Premium Member Immersed Freed Verse

IMMERSED
so fascinating
 I recognise
a participant
existence
 engaged
&critically
alert
& bewitched
 I love
hearing
the torrents
 of sound
this sensorium
 throbbing
 in an array
of art
 inundated
by light
so
alluringly
 mystical

experienced
in this way,
  formal terms
sensation
& consciousness
fused
freestanding
yet
cascading
merged
in a detonation
of colour
 saturated
images
of
surreal
dimension
both
spiritual both
&sensual drama
visual
 ebbs &flows
to inaugurate
sacrosanct
rituals
in
liberation
of the eye

fantasy
in
experience in
echo
under
immersive
 happenings
 dissolved into
 impressions

Haiku's Temple 302

A contemporary haiku-
ah! love and hate
rating high.

Premium Member Immersed

Feeling the moment
Absorbed.
Involved in the minute
Engulfed.
Buried deep
Filled with tears.
Mourn and weep
Immersed.

Immersed In Stardust

Fusing with the dust particles in the universe
Arms stretched..I lay, probing my pair with blazing eye
Many other bodies were spiralling around me
Not knowing what they were up to..
Was busy flitting in the air amidst space glinting..
Slowly perceiving that-I was in sky as a gleaming star.

15-6-2020

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Premium Member The Forest Immersed

the forest immersed
in the silence of twilight . . .
deer tracks in fresh snow

Dec. 8, 2019 for Tania Kitchin's A Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest

Premium Member Immersed In Blue

 I feel the silken flow of blue
across my flesh;
tranquil, pigment rolls
upon my soul like paint on a canvas;
caressing my spirit.

Blue scent of Lilac and Bluebells,
Bachelor Button blue wafts 
past my mind and I breathe in it’s
passion; a balance of
euphoric bliss and
etheric memory.

Heaven’s Elysian blue waves
roll across façade of mind;
Akashic enlightenment bleeds
through my soul;
the taste of ambrosia is
God’s kiss...
an electrical blue dance sparks;
I am alive.
Static energy bursts forth;
I am one, I am all, I am everything...
I am!

Immersed

Deeply
covered.
Surrounded.
Breathing,
eating, dealing.
Daily 
understanding 
wrapped in 
local realities.
Know 
nothing 
more, 
nothing
different. 
Local time
molds 
reality.
Different times
different realities.
Embalmed in
air, smell,
sight and
sound!
Realities of
a planets
creationism.
Each unique,
alien. 
Each foreign 
to each.
Universal 
diversity,
none 
the same.
Infinite 
possibilities
there be.

'immersed In the Ocean of Blessing'

Thoughts on World Diabetes Day(14th Nov.2018): 

'Immersed in the ocean of Blessing'



Immersed in the ocean of blessing,

God's mercy all times encompassing.


Even then all times Iam complaining,

Petty things I never forgetting.


At the 'have-nots' Iam never looking,

My own self, I keep on prodding.


A young man on dialysis was running,

Our water-works are really fascinating!


With a white cane a lady was walking,

Eyesight is miracle,for all who are retaining !


Whose heart is aching and failing,

What a blessing this pump entailing !


On the above three as Iam pondering,

Each insult 'diabetes' was causing.


God always Iam thanking,

For the health & right path He's showing.


Diabetes always I'll be fighting,

The suffering I'll always be guiding.

Everyone Is Immersed In Corporality and Wealth

Everyone is immersed
in corporality and wealth.
No one,no love from anyone.

What will happen tommorow?
Nobody realizes this.

Everyone is immersed
in corporality and wealth.
No one,no love from anyone.

Every human being
is incomplete today.

Regardless, everything
is right with him.

Wealth,fame,bunglow,carriage,
Do not give sleep, someone dear.

It now the whole world,
but still no one remember this.

Everyone is immersed
in corporality and wealth.
No one,no love from anyone.

Immersed

Setting sunlight glimmers across your form
               Waves with enticing, smiling eyes
     teasing, flashy,
                              dancing-hypnotic,
to all who are nearby

With promises to never leave,
               your currents kiss my feet
     the ebb and flow - a pull,
as you caress my cheek.

"Find your peace," trickles softly in my ear.
               Cradled in your soothing embrace
     rhythmically stroking me 
                    away from weighted years

Sunlight streaming through
                              my warm cocoon
               looks on with tenderness 
                                            our union
I've found my place - my soul at home
     
                    forever love
                    forever more
                    forever one

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