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Premium Member The Forest Immersed
the forest immersed
in the silence of twilight . . .
deer tracks in fresh snow

Dec. 8, 2019 for Tania Kitchin's A Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest...

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Categories: immersed, winter,
Form: Haiku
Immersed
Where now does the black rose sleep?
The rains that fell before, bleed harder.
On grass that does not weep.

The lightening’s strike bears no sound.
Yet bursts afresh the stony ground.

Where hence do the voices go?
Their melody dancing, around trees flits.
Downwards on with the rivers flow.

Concealed within the...

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Categories: immersed, analogy, confusion, imagery, metaphor,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Immersed In the Depths of Your Love
the meeting of us
when being with you, life's a wow
with every smile
your soul sinks deeper in me
then our hearts touch, we're both home





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Categories: immersed, i love you, life,
Form: Free verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry



Immersed
Setting sunlight glimmers across your form
               Waves with enticing, smiling eyes
     teasing, flashy,
              ...

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© Sara Ella  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immersed, water,
Form: Personification
Wholly Immersed
Your tender voice anointing my ears
        the delectation of my spoken name
that look of adoration in your eyes,
 speaks to me softly 'neath intensely lit moons,
    'midst subtly mesmerizing whispered passion
    ...

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© Paloma P   Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immersed, emotions, feelings, heart, longing,
Form: Prose Poetry
Immersed In Verse
Immersed in Verse

Natures reflection so vibrant
Stilled beauty revealing pure grace
Colored precision tis brilliant
Timeless completion, glowing face 
Creates a heartbeat in the soul
Rises toward heaven to extol

Carole Cookie Arnold
John Freeman's contest
Nature Verse...

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Categories: immersed, nature,
Form: Rhyme



Immersed In Peaceful Thought
A beneficial mediation for the mind...
being immersed in peaceful thought,
seeing clouds drift towards sunset,
imagining places pristine and wild.


On a shining rock facing the breezy West,
I lay whispering what comes naturally...
to make a connection with the Almighty;
I praise His creations being laid down to rest.


Colors are...

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Categories: immersed, happiness, love, me, nature,
Form: Rhyme
Hymn: With God Immersed
Our God who lives, flows in waters,
drifts in clouds and glows in snow,
flashes silver fish in shallows,
darts in darkness round the rocks,
blooms afresh as showers bring flowers,	
freshens scent for bugs and bees.	
Here we live together woven,
one with God in wonder held.

Our God who lives, moves...

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Categories: immersed, christian, creation, environment, inspirational,
Form: Verse
Premium Member immersed
oh …

imagine the hues …
the shades and shapes and colors -
the breadth of light and exquisite beauty
that blind people …
SEE …
think of the music, untranscribed and emotive,
that those without hearing spin
within their minds …
for though we feign superiority,
we ‘normal’ folk are limited by
the constricted boundaries...

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Categories: immersed, analogy, life, senses,
Form: Free verse
'immersed In the Ocean of Blessing'
Thoughts on World Diabetes Day(14th Nov.2018): 

'Immersed in the ocean of Blessing'



Immersed in the ocean of blessing,

God's mercy all times encompassing.


Even then all times Iam complaining,

Petty things I never forgetting.


At the 'have-nots' Iam never looking,

My own self, I keep on prodding.


A young man on dialysis...

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Categories: immersed, allah, inspirational, spiritual, thank
Form: Verse
Immersed In Your Thoughts
In your thoughts I have immersed and lost myself,
Without you  I yearn to be immersed and lost again all by myself

Forever...lost in your thoughts,
Aimlessly wander with my thirstful wish to be silently quenched sought,

I wander aimlessly
On the brink dwell, now my lonesome life ...

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Categories: immersed, love, lost, lost,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Immersed
Feeling the moment
Absorbed.
Involved in the minute
Engulfed.
Buried deep
Filled with tears.
Mourn and weep
Immersed....

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Categories: immersed, anxiety, emotions,
Form: Free verse
Everyone Is Immersed In Corporality and Wealth
Everyone is immersed
in corporality and wealth.
No one,no love from anyone.

What will happen tommorow?
Nobody realizes this.

Everyone is immersed
in corporality and wealth.
No one,no love from anyone.

Every human being
is incomplete today.

Regardless, everything
is right with him.

Wealth,fame,bunglow,carriage,
Do not give sleep, someone dear.

It now the whole world,
but still no one remember...

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Categories: immersed, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form:
Premium Member Immersed In Our Role
Immersed in our role, we vent rage
Let us then doublethink
Why needless mind battles we wage
Let us repair this chink

Stupor is our illness
Stillness path to wellness
Ushering blissfulness 

Love and light our goal
Immersed in our role...

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Categories: immersed, anger, spiritual,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member saturday afternoon
Reading another poetry anthology 

Looking at the words; thinking mirrors, 

Reflecting no image, capturing my spirit.

Magician savants, transporting my feelings

Across life’s terrain with eyes that feel 

The heartbeat of the stones, 

The breath of every tree, 

And the memory of every Poet

That has ever lived.
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Categories: immersed, 9th grade, birth, blessing,
Form: Free verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry