Immersed Huitain
Fire burns through the old me raging
it triggers my transformation;
The ashes fall with the cleansing
and build a rugged foundation;
Flames bring about reinvention
that forces my cocoon to burst
and kickstart this revolution
with passion I become immersed.
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