V. Deepa Poet Free verse

Immersed In Stardust

Fusing with the dust particles in the universe
Arms stretched..I lay, probing my pair with blazing eye
Many other bodies were spiralling around me
Not knowing what they were up to..
Was busy flitting in the air amidst space glinting..
Slowly perceiving that-I was in sky as a gleaming star.

15-6-2020

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 15, 2020 at 2:01 PM Hello Deepa, oh such a wonderful poem.You saw yourself as a gleaming star. Have a nice day my friend. Love Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu June 20, 2020 at 8:57 AM Hello Deepa, oh why not feel like a star. Enjoy. have a nice day my friend. Love. Darlene. V. Deepa June 16, 2020 at 3:10 AM Hai mam, I am pleased that you liked it.:-) Ha ha... yes I see myself as a star:-D Feel lovely to read your reviews. Take care Mam.Have a wonderful day.With love~Deepa