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Immersed In Stardust

Fusing with the dust particles in the universe Arms stretched..I lay, probing my pair with blazing eye Many other bodies were spiralling around me Not knowing what they were up to.. Was busy flitting in the air amidst space glinting.. Slowly perceiving that-I was in sky as a gleaming star. 15-6-2020 Note: StarDust Poetry Contest. Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 6/15/2020 2:01:00 PM
Hello Deepa, oh such a wonderful poem.You saw yourself as a gleaming star. Have a nice day my friend. Love Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/20/2020 8:57:00 AM
Hello Deepa, oh why not feel like a star. Enjoy. have a nice day my friend. Love. Darlene.
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/16/2020 3:10:00 AM
Hai mam, I am pleased that you liked it.:-) Ha ha... yes I see myself as a star:-D Feel lovely to read your reviews. Take care Mam.Have a wonderful day.With love~Deepa

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