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The Forest Immersed

the forest immersed in the silence of twilight . . . deer tracks in fresh snow Dec. 8, 2019 for Tania Kitchin's A Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/20/2020 2:28:00 PM

Hello Andrea, you painted a lovely scene in this poem. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

John Watt

Date: 2/21/2020 10:14:00 AM

Congrats on your premier win for this lovely word painting ~ John

P.M. Richter

Date: 2/17/2020 9:49:00 AM

Thank you for painting such a lovely view ~ congrats on the trophy win!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/14/2019 9:51:00 AM

Like Debbie says, simple like porridge. I love short form poetry when it is done right. This one is perfect.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/13/2019 8:53:00 AM

Gorgeous picture this paints in my mind, congratulations on your fine win! xomo

David Drowley

Date: 12/12/2019 12:02:00 PM

'Andrea, Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Beautifully written.' David

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/11/2019 10:47:00 AM

beautiful imagery...congrats on your trophy win :) hugs

Peter W Iversen

Date: 12/11/2019 10:17:00 AM

Wow, wow and wow, congrats, Peter

Joseph May

Date: 12/10/2019 11:03:00 AM

Great haiku Andrea..Congrats on your win

Constance La France

Date: 12/10/2019 8:23:00 AM

Andrea, a perfect haiku, congratulations on your first place and trophy win in the contest, well done !

John Lawless

Date: 12/10/2019 8:10:00 AM

probably looking in the window to catch a glimpse of warmth. Well done Andrea

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 12:29:00 AM

Congrats on your winning poem Andrea

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/9/2019 11:17:00 PM

Andrea, Sweet Haiku arisen from Winter's sleepy hibernation. Congratulations on your win! -Richard

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/9/2019 11:12:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. Congrats!

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/9/2019 9:13:00 PM

Lovely poem, Andrea. Congrats on your gold medal win.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/9/2019 8:14:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your trophy win with your gorgeous haiku, striking imagery!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/9/2019 2:51:00 PM

Lovely imaged and crafted perfectly, Andrea. Those fresh deer tracks summon up memories embedded deep in the soul. Season's Joy! ~ Gershon

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/9/2019 2:13:00 PM

Nice haiku - you stuck to 5 7 5 which is all to the good! Yours Matthew Anish

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/9/2019 12:25:00 PM

Love your image Andrea, good luck in the contest. Tom

Running Wolves

Date: 12/9/2019 7:22:00 AM

Moonlight glimmers...soft breeze blows...snowflakes dance...like falling glitter...a wonderland...where nothings bland...trees are dressed for winter...a home for all God's critters... Love your poems...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/9/2019 6:45:00 AM

Superb imagery, Andrea. All the best.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/9/2019 5:20:00 AM

How I long for snow. I imagine myself in a chariot pulled by those reindeers. To leave Christmas behind and get ready for Easter. Great haiku and good luck in the contest. Kai

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/9/2019 3:27:00 AM

I can see it, and it is lovely, Andrea.

Susan Woodrow

Date: 12/9/2019 2:04:00 AM

awesome haiku! :)