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The Forest Immersed

the forest immersed
in the silence of twilight . . .
deer tracks in fresh snow

Dec. 8, 2019 for Tania Kitchin's A Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest

winterhaiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

May 20, 2020 at 2:28 PM

Hello Andrea, you painted a lovely scene in this poem. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

John Watt

February 21, 2020 at 10:14 AM

Congrats on your premier win for this lovely word painting ~ John

Paul Marc

February 17, 2020 at 9:49 AM

Thank you for painting such a lovely view ~ congrats on the trophy win!

Richard Lamoureux

December 14, 2019 at 9:51 AM

Like Debbie says, simple like porridge. I love short form poetry when it is done right. This one is perfect.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 13, 2019 at 8:53 AM

Gorgeous picture this paints in my mind, congratulations on your fine win! xomo

David Drowley

December 12, 2019 at 12:02 PM

'Andrea, Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Beautifully written.' David

Sandra Adams

December 11, 2019 at 10:47 AM

beautiful imagery...congrats on your trophy win :) hugs

Peter W Iversen

December 11, 2019 at 10:17 AM

Wow, wow and wow, congrats, Peter

Joseph May

December 10, 2019 at 11:03 AM

Great haiku Andrea..Congrats on your win

Constance La France

December 10, 2019 at 8:23 AM

Andrea, a perfect haiku, congratulations on your first place and trophy win in the contest, well done !

John Lawless

December 10, 2019 at 8:10 AM

probably looking in the window to catch a glimpse of warmth. Well done Andrea

Na Na

December 10, 2019 at 12:29 AM

Congrats on your winning poem Andrea

Quoth Theraven

December 9, 2019 at 11:17 PM

Andrea, Sweet Haiku arisen from Winter's sleepy hibernation. Congratulations on your win! -Richard

Juliet Ligon

December 9, 2019 at 11:12 PM

Beautiful imagery. Congrats!

Line Gauthier

December 9, 2019 at 9:13 PM

Lovely poem, Andrea. Congrats on your gold medal win.

Tania Kitchin

December 9, 2019 at 8:14 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your trophy win with your gorgeous haiku, striking imagery!

Gershon Wolf

December 9, 2019 at 2:51 PM

Lovely imaged and crafted perfectly, Andrea. Those fresh deer tracks summon up memories embedded deep in the soul. Season's Joy! ~ Gershon

Matthew Anish

December 9, 2019 at 2:13 PM

Nice haiku - you stuck to 5 7 5 which is all to the good! Yours Matthew Anish

Tom Cunningham

December 9, 2019 at 12:25 PM

Love your image Andrea, good luck in the contest. Tom

Running Wolves

December 9, 2019 at 7:22 AM

Moonlight glimmers...soft breeze blows...snowflakes dance...like falling glitter...a wonderland...where nothings bland...trees are dressed for winter...a home for all God's critters... Love your poems...

Vijay Pandit

December 9, 2019 at 6:45 AM

Superb imagery, Andrea. All the best.

Kai Michael Neumann

December 9, 2019 at 5:20 AM

How I long for snow. I imagine myself in a chariot pulled by those reindeers. To leave Christmas behind and get ready for Easter. Great haiku and good luck in the contest. Kai