Foreshortened Poems | Examples


Premium MemberDIVISIONISTA degas signac

DIVISIONITA degas signac
superimposed
 shimmering
scumbles
  of tone
shades
 juxtaposed
pastel optics
in
  parallel pigments
intermingled
 closely
  aligned
   blended
spectrums
of
 elaborated
  illusions
foreshortened
Categories: foreshortened, art,
Form: Didactic

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RECAPITULATIONS
dynamics
 in flux
highlights
apparent
  in silent
expression
frozen
perceptions
  evocative
allusive

sightlines
  in
      suspended
animation
perspective
  foreshortened
boundary
close off
in
parallel

energy
  absorbed
concentration
thoughtful
  unbending

motif
  in movement
unconcerned
  unresponsivd
unyielding
quiet
&
  static
Categories: foreshortened, poetry,
Form: Verse


Premium MemberLove Is Always Love

Often when we attempt
to reveal the world
in true shades of light
and dark – we become
lost in the pallet of self – 

I don't know that
one needs focus
to be sharp (lasers
vs suns) as much of
what we do a mere carbon
copy of the great already
done – just on smaller
paper, to compensate
for the foreshortened
reach of human arms 
and minds – 

I love you
not out of need alone,
but simply for the sake
of loving – no love ever
wasted on the ears and
eyes of Heaven, our 
greater light 
and trajectory – 

Love is always
Love....
Categories: foreshortened, faith, heart, love, perspective,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberIt Walks

Six legs, two arms and often a tail
It greets its own kind with an expectant wail
They may well converse and they may form a pack
But what do they keep in that very small sack

There’s others that come bearing more heads and limbs
And some that appear when the light of day dims
Its plans for a peaceful encounter can fail
Often the culprit has foreshortened tail

Quite unlike what might occur on the X-files
It doesn't spit fire but does hurl projectiles
It then splits in two, it knows where each one lands
And rushes them back to its other halve’s hands

It’s salvo continues ’til someone cries ‘ouch!’
One half then watches the other half crouch
It scans its surroundings to feed the small sack
Wherever it’s from it’s then time to go back

But first it must visit the red hi-vis bin
The small sack, now loaded, deposited in
Its travels may take it up hill or down dale
Six legs, two arms and often a tail

                            *

If you don’t get this, your minds full of fog
Or your brain just went south on a train
It’s only the tale of one man and his dog
So why don’t you read it again?
Categories: foreshortened, animal,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberAs God Prospers Me

Lord! 'As You prosper me,' grant that I share from these gifts
though my lifetime's foreshortened from what could be mine
if I chose not to share, dreamt all wealth 'just deserts.'
May prosperity's plague not descend like a curse
on my kith and my kin, who I'd see own your Grace
(not just trade for a favor), extending Your will
and all life be a blessing as life groks it's blessed!
Give us hearts born to share, that aren't slaves to excess.

Lord! You request we stay humble, see 'good,' as life shifts
on planes out of our purview! Humility's shine
found in actions or trembling? Is one who exerts
will, who waits for Your leading, (in faith) risk-averse?
Was love given by others how Christ saw Your Face
when He felt at His lowest, His flesh on Earth still?
Place my pride in your guidance, my sin that’s confessed
Make my joy hate’s frustration, our world Christ’s success!


Long Tooth
Oct. 7th in 2020
Categories: foreshortened, caregiving, faith, love,
Form: Rhyme


Dark Sightings

The forest crowds the small campsite
By dying fire’s meagre light
I listen for the furtive flight
Of Nature’s creatures of the night

As chirping crickets’ songs unite
The fearful in diurnal flight
Race through remains of day’s last light
From Nature’s creatures of the night

Soon eerie fireflies ignite
A spectral vision taking flight
Make clear their presence here in spite
Of Nature’s creatures of the night

And owls hid deep in trees recite
Relentless question to the night
But answerless remain despite
All Nature’s creatures of the night

In dark foreshortened without sight
But limned and measured by the quiet
My patience placidly invites
All Nature’s creatures of the night

As dawn resumes its daily rite
I do not revel in her light
For I have witnessed more than sight
Through Nature’s creatures of the night

Written 5/23/2018
Categories: foreshortened, dark, nature, night,
Form: Monorhyme

Galley Slave To Obsessive Compulsive Behavior Part 1 Part 1 Part 1

prior to passing thru cervix, buck naked bare
this grandson of Aaron, the sole heir – 
   foreshortened to Sol Aire
evinced (as shown via ultra sound), 

   which at birth became crystal clear,
   an obsessive compulsive prone 
   human being, endear
ringly cute as a baby monkey possessed fear
some countenance tipping the scales needled gear
 
greater or lesser than seven pounds 
   (minus or plus a few ounces)
   with a mass of dreaklocked hair,
otherwise a gangly sack of many a lovely bone, 
   whereat obstetricians 
   could not help himself but jeer

thus upon exiting birth cana; found him twirling loose 
   kinky follicular fibers accord
ding to medical records, 
   a combination of his being bored

(with a really lee super strong arm penchant) 
   to sport dreadlocks, tough as hemp cord
an anomaly, which no app could com pare, 
   boot nonetheless highly adored

resembling inimitable indestructible filaments, 
   when taut could lift off the ground a board
dillow, which no reference manual could address 
even topnotch experts queried, could not explain
Categories: foreshortened, character, crush, judgement, life,
Form: Light Verse

Premium MemberFlux a Cinquain Structured Prose

The timeless flux of impressions,temporal
yet spacial & monumental,abstract yet
decorative,transparent,yet apparent,
hovering ,whirling rhythms foreshortened
becoming so private and personal

Hear me recite from my 4000+ (PS anthology compiled since 2007) on youtube under my pen name ichthyschiro..

catch my short forms @strandpoet on twitter..

read my Christian & Poetry kindle guides on amazon
Categories: foreshortened, imagination,
Form: Cinquain

Blue Baby

Mother still round, in love with child anew
Easy to overlook the subtle hints
Of the fracture within, trained eye sees clue
Eighty-two shines your number, bluish tint.

Tearful farewell, fated day has arrived.
Pained mother’s face as we pass through the door
Invisible cord stretch, tense and alive
Umbilical phantom limb evermore.

With tubes, scalpel, we enter sacred space. 
The threshold crossed, commitment becomes real
To hold numbers, sounds, instead of your face. 
The care within transmutes into sharp steel 

Foreshortened, stolen, your time may well be
Yet you touch the hearts of all who touch thee.
Categories: foreshortened, baby, caregiving, child, children,
Form: Sonnet

From Kew Bridge, 1864

A walk foreshortened by the Thames
that once would flow through field and moor –
now stitched and patched with dirty hems,
a city’s outskirts of the poor.

You used to walk here, years ago
when May put on her blossom-show.
But Progress is a subtle sweep
that changes worlds while we’re asleep.
Categories: foreshortened, nature
Form: Rispetto
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