Dark Sightings Premiere Contest Winner

The forest crowds the small campsite
By dying fire’s meagre light
I listen for the furtive flight
Of Nature’s creatures of the night

As chirping crickets’ songs unite
The fearful in diurnal flight
Race through remains of day’s last light
From Nature’s creatures of the night

Soon eerie fireflies ignite
A spectral vision taking flight
Make clear their presence here in spite
Of Nature’s creatures of the night

And owls hid deep in trees recite
Relentless question to the night
But answerless remain despite
All Nature’s creatures of the night

In dark foreshortened without sight
But limned and measured by the quiet
My patience placidly invites
All Nature’s creatures of the night

As dawn resumes its daily rite
I do not revel in her light
For I have witnessed more than sight
Through Nature’s creatures of the night

Written 5/23/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/6/2018 2:01:00 PM
Belated congratulations on bringing home the trophy, Brian! Enjoyed the content, imagery and rhyme. You appear to have tackled this monorhyme with apparent ease! Regards // paul
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Brian Densham
Date: 11/8/2018 3:48:00 PM
Thank you! Late compliments graciously accepted at par.
Date: 6/13/2018 5:03:00 AM
Excellent monorhyme, well crafted with striking atmosphere - and wit (I love ‘the owls’ relentless question to the night’). Very well done, Brian
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Brian Densham
Date: 7/8/2018 12:08:00 PM
It feels really nice to be appreciated. Thak you!
Date: 6/5/2018 3:18:00 PM
Superbly done, Brian. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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Brian Densham
Date: 6/8/2018 9:47:00 AM
Much appreciated. Thank you.
Date: 6/2/2018 8:04:00 AM
I can see why this one made the dodium. Well done, congrats.
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Brian Densham
Date: 6/3/2018 11:07:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/1/2018 6:09:00 AM
Congrats Brian for the top win.
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Brian Densham
Date: 6/1/2018 2:16:00 PM
Appreciate that Vijay.
Date: 5/31/2018 10:34:00 PM
a worthy top award, brian! sweet congrats to you!
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Brian Densham
Date: 6/1/2018 2:16:00 PM
Many thanks.!
Date: 5/31/2018 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this beautiful nature monorhyme. Well done! Imagery is awesome and your rhymes are excellent.
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Brian Densham
Date: 5/31/2018 6:08:00 PM
Very much appreciated. Thank you.
Date: 5/31/2018 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on a great nature monorhyme win.. hugs eve
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Brian Densham
Date: 5/31/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/31/2018 1:26:00 PM
Woah fantastic poem! Congratulations on a well deserved trophy win! You have written a gem Brian. xomo :)
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Brian Densham
Date: 5/31/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 5/24/2018 10:25:00 PM
ahahahahaa you have a brilliant sense of imagination my friend ! :) xoxo
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Brian Densham
Date: 5/27/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thank you kindly!
Date: 5/24/2018 3:25:00 PM
Great monorhyme with great imagery and flow, Brian. This should do very well in Shadow's contest! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
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Brian Densham
Date: 5/27/2018 8:41:00 AM
Oh Pandita! Apologies for not noticing the autocorrect misspelling of your name. I'll watch more closely now.
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Brian Densham
Date: 5/24/2018 4:31:00 PM
Pandora! How did I know it would be you. Thank you for your support.
Date: 5/23/2018 2:38:00 PM
Submitted for poetry contest on monorhyme
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