Premiere Contest WinnerDark Sightings

The forest crowds the small campsite
By dying fire’s meagre light
I listen for the furtive flight
Of Nature’s creatures of the night

As chirping crickets’ songs unite
The fearful in diurnal flight
Race through remains of day’s last light
From Nature’s creatures of the night

Soon eerie fireflies ignite
A spectral vision taking flight
Make clear their presence here in spite
Of Nature’s creatures of the night

And owls hid deep in trees recite
Relentless question to the night
But answerless remain despite
All Nature’s creatures of the night

In dark foreshortened without sight
But limned and measured by the quiet
My patience placidly invites
All Nature’s creatures of the night

As dawn resumes its daily rite
I do not revel in her light
For I have witnessed more than sight
Through Nature’s creatures of the night

Written 5/23/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Belated congratulations on bringing home the trophy, Brian! Enjoyed the content, imagery and rhyme. You appear to have tackled this monorhyme with apparent ease! Regards // paul
Densham Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Thank you! Late compliments graciously accepted at par.
Brewer Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 5:03 AM
Excellent monorhyme, well crafted with striking atmosphere - and wit (I love ‘the owls’ relentless question to the night’). Very well done, Brian
Densham Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 12:08 PM
It feels really nice to be appreciated. Thak you!
Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Superbly done, Brian. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
Densham Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Much appreciated. Thank you.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:04 AM
I can see why this one made the dodium. Well done, congrats.
Densham Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you!
Pandit Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Congrats Brian for the top win.
Densham Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Appreciate that Vijay.
Onclaud Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 10:34 PM
a worthy top award, brian! sweet congrats to you!
Densham Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Many thanks.!
Gentry Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this beautiful nature monorhyme. Well done! Imagery is awesome and your rhymes are excellent.
Densham Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Very much appreciated. Thank you.
Roper Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Congratulations on a great nature monorhyme win.. hugs eve
Densham Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thank you!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Woah fantastic poem! Congratulations on a well deserved trophy win! You have written a gem Brian. xomo :)
Densham Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thanks so much!
Tinadrua Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 10:25 PM
ahahahahaa you have a brilliant sense of imagination my friend ! :) xoxo
Densham Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Thank you kindly!
Sietesantos Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Great monorhyme with great imagery and flow, Brian. This should do very well in Shadow's contest! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Densham Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Oh Pandita! Apologies for not noticing the autocorrect misspelling of your name. I'll watch more closely now.
Densham Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Pandora! How did I know it would be you. Thank you for your support.
Densham Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Submitted for poetry contest on monorhyme
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