Blue Baby

Mother still round, in love with child anew
Easy to overlook the subtle hints
Of the fracture within, trained eye sees clue
Eighty-two shines your number, bluish tint.

Tearful farewell, fated day has arrived.
Pained mother’s face as we pass through the door
Invisible cord stretch, tense and alive
Umbilical phantom limb evermore.

With tubes, scalpel, we enter sacred space. 
The threshold crossed, commitment becomes real
To hold numbers, sounds, instead of your face. 
The care within transmutes into sharp steel 

Foreshortened, stolen, your time may well be
Yet you touch the hearts of all who touch thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/11/2016 2:50:00 PM
Heart-touching sonnet !!!! A fave.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/11/2016 8:34:00 PM
Thank you!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/11/2016 7:42:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/27/2016 8:33:00 AM
Great sonnet my friend and on a very important subject you have written in such fine verse. A7
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Date: 2/21/2016 7:45:00 AM
lovely poem. LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2016 8:07:00 AM
Thx! First and only (so far) published one--in a professional journal. It's re babies born with congenital heart disease.
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