It Walks

Six legs, two arms and often a tail
It greets its own kind with an expectant wail
They may well converse and they may form a pack
But what do they keep in that very small sack

There’s others that come bearing more heads and limbs
And some that appear when the light of day dims
Its plans for a peaceful encounter can fail
Often the culprit has foreshortened tail

Quite unlike what might occur on the X-files
It doesn't spit fire but does hurl projectiles
It then splits in two, it knows where each one lands
And rushes them back to its other halve’s hands

It’s salvo continues ’til someone cries ‘ouch!’
One half then watches the other half crouch
It scans its surroundings to feed the small sack
Wherever it’s from it’s then time to go back

But first it must visit the red hi-vis bin
The small sack, now loaded, deposited in
Its travels may take it up hill or down dale
Six legs, two arms and often a tail

                            *

If you don’t get this, your minds full of fog
Or your brain just went south on a train
It’s only the tale of one man and his dog
So why don’t you read it again?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/3/2021 6:10:00 PM
Hello Terry ... you got me well and truly. I was leaning towards some kind of bug. Re -reading put a new light on your fine verse - Lindsay
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/4/2021 12:46:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay. Im sure you know the niggling doubt that a tale such as this instills in the writer’s mind... is it obvious from the start or will no one get it? Glad IT got YOU! Terry
Date: 5/3/2021 10:27:00 AM
Terry, wonderful write, fun to read, peace _Constance
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Date: 5/3/2021 10:54:00 AM
Hi Constance, so glad you enjoyed. Thanks. Terry
Date: 5/3/2021 9:26:00 AM
This has really cheered a wet, miserable, windy, cold Bank Holiday Monday. Not a day to be out with the dog !
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Date: 5/3/2021 10:59:00 AM
We lost our incomparable German Shepherd, Tara, (see my avatar) around six years ago. If we could have her back I’d happily walk her in a hurricane... I get your point though. Glad to have brightened your day, Peter. Terry
Date: 5/3/2021 8:26:00 AM
This one was lots of fun Terry. i did not figure it out until the six legs, two arms and often a tail. outstanding work:)
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/3/2021 11:04:00 AM
Phew!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 5/3/2021 9:00:00 AM
LOL I meant at the end after reading the poem. I'm a pretty smart fella but not that smart.
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/3/2021 8:38:00 AM
Crikey, I hope you mean six legs etc at the end and not the beginning, otherwise I failed big time. ;-) Terry
Date: 5/3/2021 8:12:00 AM
The one part of walking the dog I dont miss, thought you were leading us into the twilight zone lol. Hope you've had a better bank holiday, its like a winters day down here. Tom
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Date: 5/3/2021 8:48:00 AM
I’m on the Isle of Wight, about as far as us Brits can go without getting our feet wet... and it’s blinking freezing. Cheers Tom. Terry
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