From Kew Bridge, 1864

A walk foreshortened by the Thames
that once would flow through field and moor –
now stitched and patched with dirty hems,
a city’s outskirts of the poor.

You used to walk here, years ago
when May put on her blossom-show.
But Progress is a subtle sweep
that changes worlds while we’re asleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 5:13 AM
((()))((()))Clap!Clap!.Great work that has won a place..Congrats..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 5:40 PM
Nice use of the form it's sad the world over all cities are looking more and more alike! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
K. Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 1:43 PM
Ah yes, how sad progress can be sometimes... I love how you ended this, Taylor! It struck such a chord with me...Congrats!
Freeman Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 9:22 AM
Taylor, a beautiful poem friend, "Congratulations" on a worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 Taylor. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 2:26 AM
Love it should have placed higher x
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:15 PM
wow,this is AWESOME. I am really loving all the HM's I am reading. Never thought of doing a rispetto for a place instead of a person. How inventive. Congrats on your win.
Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Taylor. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Is this the Thames of 1864? What must it look like by now? Great write, Taylor. Congrats on the selection. daver
Brown Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Taylor. I wish you the best on your writing endeavors in the new year. Love, Carol
Zzzzz Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 11:35 AM
A nice period piece, redolent with poetic mood. Good use of language.
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