OPEN VERSE NO 18

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THIS AN OPEN(organic) VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment.

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RECAPITULATIONS
dynamics
 in flux
highlights
apparent
  in silent
expression
frozen
perceptions
  evocative
allusive

sightlines
  in
      suspended
animation
perspective
  foreshortened
boundary
close off
in
parallel

energy
  absorbed
concentration
thoughtful
  unbending

motif
  in movement
unconcerned
  unresponsivd
unyielding
quiet
&
  static

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