Flatland Poems | Examples

The Israel-Gaza War

On October the 7th, the precarious peace

of  the disputed ancient lands began to cease.

The enraged avengers brought the Al-Aqsa flood

that deluged the Re'im music festival with blood.

 

Then very swiftly came the lopsided response

that decimated women and children at once.

The zionists' war machine sweeps the Gazan land,

rendering its closely compacted earth to flatland.

 

The Mosques, churches, schools, and hospitals are all gone.

Scores wail uncontrollably aloud as they mourn.

Having no point of refuge, refugees take flight

as they seek for bombshelters with no hopes in sight.

 

Hamas belligerents their explosive arrows throw

at overwhelmed defenses of an ageold foe.

Zionists with torrential explosives respond

with offensive operations within and beyond.

 

Oh that the Gaza strip might tranquility know!

Oh that the blood in the West bank would cease to flow!

Oh that Israel would flourish and as a nation grow!

Oh that the warring factions would the seed of peace sow!

Oh that the two warring factions would merry and dance!

Oh that the two state solution was given a chance!

Premium Member Never A Flatland Trimeric

Work with me sisters lead a seance,
I can feel myself on both of my legs;
It may be hard but I must master this,
If I don’t fight I’ve given up on me;

I can feel myself on both of my legs, 
stronger and smiling even brighter;
I’m a fireball and this is just a wall;

It may be hard but I must master this,
growth is never a flatland or simple;
I must become what I’m capable of;

If I don’t fight I’ve given up on me;
With the aid of all my confidantes,
you will see me as a comeback kid.
Form: Other


Premium Member Turn Up An American Sonnet

Driving across country give me that soul,
all the stars and stripes of freedom;
Rock n’ roll and a grill filled with charcoal,
so sweet American hum drum;

From mountains to sea to flatland country 
we can explore what we want to;
Maples back up a palm tree symphony
the song of the red, white, and blue;

There is nothing about me you can tame,
you can try but you’ll always miss;
I will not forget I can change the game,
I was brought up on that promise;

Turn up the volume on the radio,
anywhere you want is where you can go.
Form: Sonnet

The Schooner

The schooner

On the flatland between the vales, I could see the sea
I had walked uphill for a long time, after the downhill
and the way to the coast, it was easy, but it was 
getting cold, I wore a light navy uniform (Furlough)
I saw a protest house of worship on its own no other
Houses nearby this place would do.
I fell asleep, awoke and heard organ music, the church
full of matelotes singing psalms; the paster spoke
of redemption and the glory of God.
I saw a superb sunrise continued my walk to the coast.
In the morning an open café, I told the girl behind the
counter, where I had slept, she looked confused as far 
as she knew the church had been torn down, it was
built of planks when of a schooner ran aground with
the loss of all hands.
Form: Sonnet

My Africa

My Serengeti

I have neglected to visit my “Africa”, the flatland between
two hills that appear like a young mother`s breasts.
I know the trees and bushes, used to drive there to say hello.
Time changes I have no motorbike.
On the road driving to the shop, I can see the valley, yellow digger
And blue tractors near the wadi where I once saw a brown crocodile 
waiting for rain.
Once I saw a tiger leisurely walking across the lane.
A hyena laughed and said it was not here.
They are building a new Algarve type village with swimming pools
and an ambitious golf course.
But not for you and me.
No, I will not look at how work progress let my dream be intact.
But I do wish a tsunami would come and wash it all away.
Alas, nothing stays the same like the olive tree at the entrance of my driveway.
I have lost my kaleidoscope


The Forest We Planted

The forest we planted 
	
In the flatland of western Norway 
where the wind has no hesitation rolling sheep into a woolly ball
horses turned their rump to the wind hung their heads

Refusing to plough, something had to be done.
Trees were planted and to our surprise survived but crooked and 
strong because the soil was fertile.

When the trees grew strong the shielded fields, the land was plough-able 
again and no chicken was carried away by the wind 
except for ducklings but as we know, they are brainless.

People began erecting small cabins in the woods it was not legal
but the moist hands of the law lived in the towns, and there was a beach
nearby so white it blinded you.

When the law, awoke from the task of checking driving licenses,
they came but could do little except given the cabins a permit which was a bonus for the middle -classes who bought the cottages.

Got permission to build them more significant with white painted fences property
is essential, and gates were set up, no authorized people here,
this proves that money takes preference.

Locomotive West

Straight moves the locomotive train miles
Traveling over desert flatland forging ahead,
Coal steam engine Number 9 chug, chug, chug,
Sound waves rolls through, satisfying sensation is said.
Locomotive whistle sounds station steam rolling in,
Little one hears repeats ‘choo-choo’ rolls to stop,
All aboard!  Rolls locomotion moving, snack on tasty
Peanut brittle, readying for dining car delicious hop.

Mom holds little son on her lap, with sounds
Cowboys and Indians along the train,
Surprise action wonder, heard of Hereford
Beef cattle is west trademark railroad vein.
Character western attitude locomotive fun
How the west was won whistle-stop rustic town,
Gold payload brought on of family and cousin
Forge ahead, chug along, Heaven brings us together joyous sound.
Form: Rhyme

Mean Machine

Mean Machine

The locomotive was an old mean machine
only used for carrying gods at local stations along
boring flatland. Once it had been a young and
the President of Portugal rode on it, not only him
but many other high up all the way to Lisbon.
And now? It wanted to go hiding somewhere dark,
but where does one conceal an iron horse?
The train passed near the parking lot in Faro 
I was out with my dog, and there I could let her
run free. There was a hole in the fence were
the tracks. Naturally, she jumped through. 
She saw the train that seemed to speed up 
with murderous intent when she jumped clear it
was too late. I had her buried and the following
days were long and full of sadness.

Ink's Wickedness

Bloodthirstiness of ink's wickedness, 
ruthlessly dripped upon parchment
blistering an already screeching sun,
no footprints apparently left in sand as
oceans's bluffs turned oases to flatland,
there was no urgency for brutal honesty
aside factually, it unquestionably delivers

F L a T L a N D

To resist the op(press)ion 
of the two (dement)sional flatland world of glossy magazines,
I have (ob)seen women

Mutilate their forearms with deep(er) strokes of a razor
So that they may prove with their b(lo)ody
To themselves and their (conf)users
That their image (has depth)

Has depth (their image

Has depth)

The Funnel

Clear blue bliss calmly gazing in tinted hazy summer charm,
Cars are moving, music playing.

Sudden dim, turns into shade the flatland horizon in fear I gaze
the wall of death that chaos unknown, mothers nature's touch 
Well known.

The cold breeze shunt my view at hand 
The recipe is right, when your in this land.
 
this honey-trap, this leap of faith has left these towns with much at stake
That twisted column of  water and dust, of building, of people 
Much loved in much trust. 

these mobile beacons of unknown reason silhouette the sketch of death.

In it's path those temples of humanity, those monuments of duty passed,
sitting like a anchor of hope in the path of the giants choke. 

The innocence of nature has executed it's instinct and shown reminder of 
mankind's weakness. 

And all is gone by a funnel of ash, siren ringing aloud in terror 
Destruction ended....here comes another.

Swishing of the Oat Seed

On the bleak street
not a blade of grass,
only dust 
from the lorries,
the cement mixers.
A year later
I see a bud appearing,
by Autumn
this one golden blade
has grown tall.

The sound of a swishing oat seed
cheers me up
in grubby flatland.

Love Affair

The Love Affair 
The road that leads to a smallish agricultural flatland has
two walls. One wall was built by a slob, just throwing 
one stone on top of another. 

The other wall was built by a craftsman where stones 
fitted and he had used decorative and white painted
 cement between them.

Every Sunday the meticulous man walks to his wall 
and find great satisfaction to see his work again and
wishes the slob would rebuild his wall.

Every Sunday the layabout goes for a walk to, 
first to the bar for a few beers with his mates; he walks
 to the good man’s house and have sex with his wife.
Form: Burlesque

Vanishing Line

Vanishing Line

In the two dimensional world of flatland life is a line
Distinguishing up from down is not the design of nature
Maneuvering left and right is possible
But not this time
Existence is of the straight and narrow realm
Excellence is defined in moving forward
Objects come and go without discernment 
Vision of life is purely a blur of what is and what might become
As elements appear within that moment
Things pop in and out of sight from other world’s dimensions
Diagonalizing the matrix is not part of this equation or this discussion
Needs no explanation
It’s staying in this matter as a diversion just for reading pleasure
And because I said so and it sounds kinda cool
Someone from flat-land supports that view and said as much
Needs no permit from you 
Who are from another dimension
The point is mute
So moving on
There is no sun and too few rules
In the dominion of two dimensions
Opinions vary on that point
There is no day
Things simply get in the way of understanding there
When going one way, which defines life in general
There is no light at the end of the tunnel
There is no tunnel
There is only straight ahead
Where abruptly all things end
Form: Didactic

The Schooner

The Schooner

On the flatland between the vales I could see the sea, had been 
walking uphill for a long time now, after the plain it was downhill 
and the way to the coast was easy enough only it was getting 
cold and I wore a light navy uniform. (had been on furlough)

Then I saw a protestant house of worship, but it was there on its 
own no other houses to be seen not even a lone light from a farm. 
A window was open and since it was also getting dark I was tired 
I climbed in and rested on a pew. 

Fell asleep, awoke and heard organ music the church was full of
 matelotes singing psalms. The pastor spoke about sin, redemption 
and god’s glory, then his flock silently left. Dawn, I saw a magnificent 
sunrise, continued my walk to coast.  

In a morning open café I told a girl behind the counter where I had 
slept, she looked confused as far as she knew the  church was 
torn down years ago since it was haunted, as it was built of planks
of a schooner that ran aground with loss of all hands.

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